| "A Light in the Darkness" Reviews/Comments [ 95 ] |
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Reviewed By: badgerwolf On: March 19, 2006 14:48 EST
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*grins* i'm so glad to hear you HAVE completed this. I've been wondering how it all turns out. Guess I'll have to look for your other stuff, too. And I LIKE what you did with yamcha...
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Reviewed By: (maccam) On: March 17, 2006 23:59 EST
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Mia i understand all to well about being tired of fanfiction. I just love this story. this was one of the first i read when i got started. I'm very greatful that your posting this story and i hope i can read the ending :) Thank you!!!!!!!!
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Title: Wonderful...as always!
Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2006 13:40 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello Mia, I'm glad you are still contiuing to write this wonder piece. Even though I was at chapter 100 or something when you had it over at ff.net... but its a thrill to re-read it again. I hope that more readers will leave reviews, I know it was hard letting all those reviews go at ff.net! Take care, and keep up the super work!
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Title: A Light in the Darkness
Reviewed By: falconsblade [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2006 02:37 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY GOD. I just read this entire fic. I started at about 11pm and just finished at 1:30AM. My eyes are killing me, but i jsut couldn't stop. I wish i could write like this! I write a little, but I'm shy. Maybe I should get over it. I have taken some classes in composition and creative writing, maybe its just nerves. Hope you update soon. I understand how bulma feels, shes boarderline suicidal isnt she? She feels worthless and left out. Dont worry baby, it gets better. Trust me, I know what I'm talking about. She just needs to let a few people in, and take what they say at face value instead of trying to read stuff into it all the time. Great story line. I think you have Vegeta down pat. I also thing your doing great with Goku. Just because he's seems so innocent and confused about deeper stuff doesn't mean he's not trying or will eventually get it. I hate stories that make him stupid.
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Reviewed By: NSB On: March 16, 2006 21:46 EST
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UPDATE THIS FIC IS GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: (maccam) On: March 15, 2006 14:44 EST
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JUMPS FOR JOY. OH I'M SOOO HAPPY. I LEFT THIS STORY ON CHAPTER 80 AT YOUR OLD SITE. I TRUELY CAN'T WAIT TO FINAL NOW WHATS GOING TO HAPPEN. THANK YOU SOOO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: badgerwolf On: March 06, 2006 21:10 EST
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(nearly crys with joy at seeing this story) you're reposting? you're UPDATING? I'm overwhelmed - this is one of my all time favorite fanfictions and I can't wait to see it's return!
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: March 03, 2006 21:14 EST
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Welcome back, I was wondering where you were. Are you planning to do a big update to where it equals the amount of chapters on your home site.
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Reviewed By: heiress2thethrone(notsignedin) On: March 02, 2006 21:04 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really enjoying this fic. um chi chi is a bit too emotional for my tastes, but i don't like her much anyway. and did u say that other saiyan was female, i also thought u said she was vegeta's sister. maybe im totally wrong or something. but im really intrigued. update soon!
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Reviewed By: Alaskan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2006 19:34 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooh, yay! I've read this whole story before (I think..) somewhere else but lost the link. I'm happy to see you've found mediaminer, you'll get some good reviews, your story is awesome! Can't wait until the next chapter comes out
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Reviewed By: NJNlolo On: February 24, 2006 16:49 EST
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nice to see an update
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Reviewed By: RedHellWolf On: June 23, 2004 02:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really good fic so far. I've reach the point of your little quiz you gave and surprisingly got most right except for one. The one where they don't fight a lot. Your right that Bulma does more of the insulting and I've only seen one episode where Vegeta insults first and Bulma retorts back but that's in Dragonball GT. Although its not like Dragonball Z/GT are focus on Bulma and Vegeta so we only know what we see. Guess I learn something new everyday. Never considered that in the series when you do see Bulma and Vegeta together they never really get into fights, just little arguments or spats. But back to the story. It's really good, way different from what one normally finds in B/V get-together fanfiction. Keep up the good work;)
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: August 09, 2003 07:28 EDT
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I konw she's already pregnant, but I was trying to say that if Bulma was so worried about how her body would be able to handle carrying a hybrid saiyan baby, (despite that fact that her money can bring her the best doctors and treatment as she had stated in that chapter where she and Vegeta were eating dinner in the bedroom), then maybe some strengthening exercises during her first months would be helpful especially if Vegeta was the one that trained her.
Bulma questioning Vegeta's feelings for her would no doubt be from her pregnancy mood swings, but how much further do we have to read where Vegeta reminds her that he would not leave her for any other woman; how it would kill him if she left him; and how that once a bond was formed it could never be broken (from that fight they had in the lab). |
Reviewed By: butterflyV On: April 10, 2003 22:15 EDT
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Was beginning to wonder where you were?! Did you ever write in the later chapters of your story where Vegeta teaches Bulma how to fly to erase those feelings of being teased to prove his point. |
Reviewed By: Satoshi16 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2003 18:56 EST
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Heyas, I read all the way into the like 60th chappy of this on ffn, but I planned on rereading it from the beginning once you mentioned redoing it anyways so I don't mind waiting inbetween. I can't wait to read every piece of this ficcy cause it's so on character and never dull. Hope you put up more chapters soon, I can't imagine you being able to improve the writing anymore than how wonderful it already is. Till then, ja ne! |
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