| "A Light in the Darkness" Reviews/Comments [ 95 ] |
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Reviewed By: Donna On: October 24, 2002 18:39 EDT
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I don't think that any of them are canon ... although the whole cheating thing I think might have been caused by the FUNimation dub, because I heard that they translated what Trunks said as wrong, or something like that! |
Reviewed By: butterflyV On: October 24, 2002 18:17 EDT
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In response to you little quiz:
(you have to remember I live in Australia and we've only seen one section of Dragonball and we won't get DBZ #5 until sometime next year, so I'm only answering from what I've seen and/or read.)
1) Unless they do spar in #5, it's hard to answer.
2) No.
3) I don't think he cheated on her as such, but he was caught out in a situation when Marron tried to hit on him and he gave in.
4) Can't answer that with a simple yes or no cause I've never seen the episodes where she has to cook, so I'll take your word on that one with the little not you left on your last chapter.
5) I'd say yes because he loves her temper and spirited nature which would be one of the things that he grew to love about her.
For the record, I absolutely can't stand people who act like Marron. I cringed every time I heard her say anything, and I really felt sorry for the poor woman who had to give her a voice! |
Reviewed By: KT On: October 23, 2002 16:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love this fic!
Yeesh! Third time I've read this, and *still* only my first review (sorry!).
I think the whole 'Bulma can't cook' thing started with that scene on Namek in the capsule house. Krillin is trying to persuade Dende to eat something despite the fact that "it isn't very good". In the anime, Bulma takes offense at this (at least in the dub) but in the original manga, it's implied that the food is bad because it's processed, pre-packaged stuff... and she has no problem with this at all.
A note on Yamucha's fear of girls - this is also seen in the (I suspect 'anime-only') scene when Maron flirts with him at Kame house. He's polite, but he's definitely not reciprocating!
We also don't actually *know* if he ever cheated - after all, we get that information from Trunks, and he got it from his mother. We only know that's what *she* believed happened...
Anyway, I'm going to enjoy reading this again - this time with a little space between the chapters - the other times I read it over a couple of days in many-hour long slots ^_~ |
Reviewed By: Bulma Wannabe [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2002 14:37 EDT
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I used to read this story on FFN. It's what got me hooked to DBZ fan fiction. Excellent work!! |
Reviewed By: eeviloverlord [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2002 02:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Let's see if I can get this done this time without my computer going spuh. I must admit, that I first started reading this story 'cause of the Bulma/Vegeta stuff. But I'm still reading it because of the *rest* of the story too! ^_^ And I *so* like that Yamcha's not a cheating jerk in this! heh I never could see it. *G* And seeing Bulma cooking in chapter 5 reminded me of something else...in the Dragonfist movie, Trunks tells Tapion that Bulma's a good cook. At least, in the translation I've seen he does. So there! I love the story so far, and it's been really nice to re-read it again from the beginning. You guys keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2002 14:05 EDT
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I remember reading this fic on your siteand ff.net. I'm glad you're moving it over to mm. Sorry it's taken me so log to get around to reviewing. 8-(
I remember I got so frustrated with Bulma and her behavior when I first read this fic, but after re-reading it, her actions don't seem so OOC. I think her assertiveness is more of a mask, and she may be simply trying to convince others that she has it all together.
I certainly agree with Vegeta's observations about her parents.
N-E-way, for those that have only just started reading this fic, don't stop! If gets better and better, and you'll soon find yourself up at all hours of the night reading and re-reading it.
MS's writing style is exceptional, and her lemons are evocave and titillating. This is a story you hope never ends, that it just gets added to and built upon.
Meliza |
Reviewed By: Heerosgurl On: October 19, 2002 03:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. I had read the first 72 or 73 chapters you had posted on fanfiction.net, and I was soooooo pissed off when Fanfiction.net banned NC-17 fanfictions. I am glad you are continuing your fanfic here. I absolutely love it!!!! Please post all 103 chapters soon!!! I read your fic 3 times, all the way through, when it was posted on ff.net. I hope you don't forget to post!!!
-Heerosgurl |
Reviewed By: vinn [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2002 00:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i'm sorry i havent reviewed this sooner
(i don't actually have an excuse)
but i really like your fic so please keep on writing. ta ta for now |
Reviewed By: SevenStar On: October 14, 2002 10:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi, Mia
I love your fanfic. I was reading it on FF.Net befor they changed it. Hope to see more soon. |
Reviewed By: butterflyV On: October 13, 2002 21:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's great to see it back up Mia, regardless of where you host it. You may remember who I am from the reviews I gave you from FFnet before you took it down. There doesn't seem to be a lot of edit changes though from what I've seen so far.
I'm just a little stumped as to why you didn't just concentrate more on updating and editing the story on your own site, especially after all of the bullcrap artistry that went on with FFnet. |
Reviewed By: vegetachanlover On: October 12, 2002 18:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
woops...i forgot to fill in the rest of the ratings last time i reviewed...srry. i'm glad that it will be a crossover fic. i wish some of the others from ff.net would come over here...i was very disapointed with ff.net...i don't think that they had the right to do that..but...that's just my personal opinion. well, i'm glad that the next chapter was up! thank's for the great writing! bye! sarah |
Reviewed By: wlj On: October 12, 2002 12:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this fic on FFN and I'm glad you come here. I havn't read the ending but I do hope I get to read it here. I hope to read the ending of the stoy soon! |
Reviewed By: SapphireAngelOfNighthotmail.com [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2002 07:06 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I remember reading this fic at your website one night when I was ill. I stayed up all night to read it and I just loved it!(Your fic is one of the reasons why I started writing fanfiction myself, tho most of my stuff is still on FFNET) I'm so glad to see this story up and running here, as well, though. (Easier to check on.)
I don't think I need to tell you how awesome this story is, because surely, you know this yourself. I hope to read more, soon.
Love,
Sapphire |
Reviewed By: cartmicah On: October 11, 2002 21:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you know me or mayne not but I'm a loyal reader of this story from fanfiction.net and I know for fact that this story kicks ass all the way. And fanfiction.nets workers and creators are fools for getting rid of this quality of work, and Iwould like to thant you for the hours of good reading. |
Reviewed By: vegetachanlover On: October 10, 2002 19:00 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this fic...may all-time fave...i do have a question...i was reading at the end of one of the chapters, i can't remember if it was at ff or at your personal website, but you said something about making a sequel with ryouga and ranma, i think...i was just wondering..so, anywho..keep up the awesome work, and i'll be checking back for more updates, and you'll get more reveiws from me, i can promise you that! |
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