| "A Light in the Darkness" Reviews/Comments [ 95 ] |
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Reviewed By: ANNIE101 On: December 31, 2011 05:40 EST
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I totally love this fanfic Ive read it like a thousand times over and over, its just sad you wont be finishing the fic because if you do i would be so happy.I love everything about the story except the fact that vegeta is too emotional, but furthermore i love your stories especially crossed paths mwah. |
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2011 00:46 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just started this fic today. I really enjoy reading it so far. |
Title: Epilogue
Reviewed By: FireBlade [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2009 14:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I finished reading this after 4 days, I had to take time for my daily activities ;). This is an amazing piece of work, not many authors can create such an amazing piece fiction, that make it feel real rather then wishful thinking from the authors. Or to know when to end it, you have done an amazing job with both. I wasn't sure where you would end it and I had hoped to see them settle into their new planet but I am pleased with where you have ended it. I really loved all the characters that you have brought into this story, (I may have to watch Ranma 1/2 now :P). Especially Yamacha's character, who rarely gets to be a main character as he is in this one. I also like your original character who have their own quirks that make them stand out. I must thank you for sharing this story with other fans of DBZ. It is a story that I will enjoy reading many times and never tire of it.
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Reviewed By: KB On: September 01, 2009 21:03 EDT
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absolutely beautiful! *claps* I'm so happy! This has been one of the best fics I've ever read!
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Reviewed By: Rena Tsukino [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2009 01:46 EDT
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I'm sad to see it end but I have thoroughly enjoyed this fanfiction. I look forward to reading the epilogue and any other works you might do in the future!
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Reviewed By: nutnatz [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2009 11:05 EDT
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I ran back into this story completely by accident and was pleasantly surprised by the fact that you are finishing posting it here on media miner. I remember starting to read this years ago and then fandom just dying slowly and so many fics were never finished. I am glad that you took the chance to just finish posting. I find that now, I enjoy the epic fics even more now that the fandom isn't as large anymore. That said, to the story. You can see the definate change in maturity on the story as the years past. Actually the point that it makes the most difference is actually the sex scenes. There was a shift in the quality of language and sensuality that freshened it up. As you know since there wre a lot of sex scenes in a fic this long, they can drag, but I was happy to see that the later chapters didn't drag. I agree with a lot of your observations about Bulma and Vegeta's relationship in canon, but as this is an AU with a bonding plot, it is different here. I was able to see the Ranma/Ryouga twin coming from the moment Ryouga showed up and I actually have probably never watched an episode of Ranma 1/2. But I saw what you were trying to do, expanding the cast of the saiyans. I did miss the inclusion of Chi Chi and Goku into the story as time went on. To tell the truth your investigation into them in the earlier chapters is what drew me to the fic years ago. I guess because you don't seems to like her character anyway that she would be left by the wayside (kind of like what happens with Goku and her), but I always found the relationship between them to be interesting. I was even looking forward to Bulma saying something or maybe a change in Chi Chi, but since she wasn't really a focus in the story, I guess there wasn't much of an impetus for character growth on her part. I am looking forward to finally seeing the end that I've wondered about for many years come to fruition.
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Reviewed By: jenniferwl On: August 03, 2009 20:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think this is really a great fic and I am excited that I found it in my browsing and I am looking forward to reading all of it!
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Reviewed By: Rena Tsukino [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2009 00:03 EDT
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Haha! Trunks sure showed Kabu! Very nice! Can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: Dutchfangirl On: July 16, 2009 06:41 EDT
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I liked the last two chapters. I almost thought Kabu would strangle Bulma or something like that. :-P Can't wait until you update again, I want to know what you've planned for all those Saiyans...
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Title: AMAZING!
Reviewed By: Rena Tsukino [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2009 13:34 EDT
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I love this fanfic! It's beautifully written and everything I love about a B&V romance plus everything I wouldn't have expected. I'm glad Trunks is still in this. He's such a sweetheart and he seems to have had an even crazier life in this AU! I can't wait for your next chapter! I wanna see Vegeta put Kabu in her place about Bulma! Keep up the good work! I love it!
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Reviewed By: Dutchfangirl On: June 24, 2009 15:06 EDT
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I loved the last chapter! Vegeta killing Frieza and all.....just like I wanted. So I guess Vegeta has the right to call himself king now? Oh, and before I forget. I was the one who posted the link on your old site under the reviews. I always checked your old site, hoping that you started updating again. So I just figured other people might do that too. I hope you don't mind. There are a lot of people who wanted to finish reading the story, just read the reviews ;-D.
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Reviewed By: sue On: June 20, 2009 19:53 EDT
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this epic story is amazing! i love the way you write, it's so imaginative and thrilling. please keep the updates coming i am so hooked!
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Reviewed By: o0kittyblue0o [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2009 14:20 EDT
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YARG I just wrote like a large comment of awesomes and it wouldnt go through!! Anyway, LOVE the update, I've always felt it was Vegeta's right to kill Frieza.
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Reviewed By: gothfairy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2009 01:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I started reading this story on another site and was so disappointed when it just left off at chapter 79. Thank goodness someone posted where I could find it under the reviews. This is one of my absolute favorite fanfics! I can't wait to read the end.
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Reviewed By: Dutchfangirl On: June 14, 2009 19:14 EDT
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Poor Trunks! Hearing his parents while he is trying to sleep. You must be evil! ;-P Only twelve more chapters to go. I'm wondering how this story is going to end. I hope Vegeta kicks Frieza's ass! He deserves to have a little fun. (Vegeta I mean, not Frieza) Keep up the good work!
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