| "A Light in the Darkness" Reviews/Comments [ 95 ] |
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2002 14:05 EDT
Comment/Review:
I remember reading this fic on your siteand ff.net. I'm glad you're moving it over to mm. Sorry it's taken me so log to get around to reviewing. 8-(
I remember I got so frustrated with Bulma and her behavior when I first read this fic, but after re-reading it, her actions don't seem so OOC. I think her assertiveness is more of a mask, and she may be simply trying to convince others that she has it all together.
I certainly agree with Vegeta's observations about her parents.
N-E-way, for those that have only just started reading this fic, don't stop! If gets better and better, and you'll soon find yourself up at all hours of the night reading and re-reading it.
MS's writing style is exceptional, and her lemons are evocave and titillating. This is a story you hope never ends, that it just gets added to and built upon.
Meliza |
Reviewed By: Heerosgurl On: October 19, 2002 03:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. I had read the first 72 or 73 chapters you had posted on fanfiction.net, and I was soooooo pissed off when Fanfiction.net banned NC-17 fanfictions. I am glad you are continuing your fanfic here. I absolutely love it!!!! Please post all 103 chapters soon!!! I read your fic 3 times, all the way through, when it was posted on ff.net. I hope you don't forget to post!!!
-Heerosgurl |
Reviewed By: vinn [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2002 00:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i'm sorry i havent reviewed this sooner
(i don't actually have an excuse)
but i really like your fic so please keep on writing. ta ta for now |
Reviewed By: SevenStar On: October 14, 2002 10:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi, Mia
I love your fanfic. I was reading it on FF.Net befor they changed it. Hope to see more soon. |
Reviewed By: butterflyV On: October 13, 2002 21:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's great to see it back up Mia, regardless of where you host it. You may remember who I am from the reviews I gave you from FFnet before you took it down. There doesn't seem to be a lot of edit changes though from what I've seen so far.
I'm just a little stumped as to why you didn't just concentrate more on updating and editing the story on your own site, especially after all of the bullcrap artistry that went on with FFnet. |
Reviewed By: vegetachanlover On: October 12, 2002 18:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
woops...i forgot to fill in the rest of the ratings last time i reviewed...srry. i'm glad that it will be a crossover fic. i wish some of the others from ff.net would come over here...i was very disapointed with ff.net...i don't think that they had the right to do that..but...that's just my personal opinion. well, i'm glad that the next chapter was up! thank's for the great writing! bye! sarah |
Reviewed By: wlj On: October 12, 2002 12:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this fic on FFN and I'm glad you come here. I havn't read the ending but I do hope I get to read it here. I hope to read the ending of the stoy soon! |
Reviewed By: SapphireAngelOfNighthotmail.com [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2002 07:06 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I remember reading this fic at your website one night when I was ill. I stayed up all night to read it and I just loved it!(Your fic is one of the reasons why I started writing fanfiction myself, tho most of my stuff is still on FFNET) I'm so glad to see this story up and running here, as well, though. (Easier to check on.)
I don't think I need to tell you how awesome this story is, because surely, you know this yourself. I hope to read more, soon.
Love,
Sapphire |
Reviewed By: cartmicah On: October 11, 2002 21:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you know me or mayne not but I'm a loyal reader of this story from fanfiction.net and I know for fact that this story kicks ass all the way. And fanfiction.nets workers and creators are fools for getting rid of this quality of work, and Iwould like to thant you for the hours of good reading. |
Reviewed By: vegetachanlover On: October 10, 2002 19:00 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this fic...may all-time fave...i do have a question...i was reading at the end of one of the chapters, i can't remember if it was at ff or at your personal website, but you said something about making a sequel with ryouga and ranma, i think...i was just wondering..so, anywho..keep up the awesome work, and i'll be checking back for more updates, and you'll get more reveiws from me, i can promise you that! |
Reviewed By: Mary On: October 10, 2002 11:49 EDT
Comment/Review:
I heard about this story at another site and read 1-60 at your site then found 61-72 at FF. Please post quickly!!! |
Reviewed By: The crazy One [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2002 17:38 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am so glad you moved! I loved it at FFN but i didn't get that far in it. |
Reviewed By: Niebezpiczny Ksiezyc On: October 06, 2002 14:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I first started reading your fic at fanfiction.net, but you know how that story goes. The site is rather irritating and I myself often have problems with the site. I am sorry that you had to remove your story, but thank you for posting it elsewhere! Please keep writing! |
Reviewed By: cha [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2002 06:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent!!
Good to see you at MMO, I would guess that alot of writers of NC17 material will be moving their stories to MMO from FFN before the 12th of October. In any case, hope to read more of your wonderful story...keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: vegetachanlover On: November 07, 2002 13:35 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like this chapter...it's a really good one...i like how you have the whole thing even later on in the far reaches of your story, how bulma still feels insecure about herself. i think that that's a great little way to move the plot a bit...i can't wait till you get the rest of your story posted to your site... i think that you did a great job with putting the little blirp with mrs. briefs is just great! i remember the first time that i ever read it, i cracked up laughing...two of my friends read it too, and they both of them loved it and thought that it was great! |
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