D. N. Angel Fan Fiction ❯ Forbidden Love ❯ Chapter One: The Unraveling ( Chapter 1 )
[ Y - Young Adult: Not suitable for readers under 16 ]
By: hikari_ice_angel 
Annoying Riku and Risa and the reason behind Daisuke and Riku's breakup.
Anime/Manga: D. N. Angel Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Fantasy / Drama / Angst / Romance / Horror | Type: Yaoi | Uploaded On: 09.24.2007 | Updated On: 06.20.2008 | Pages: 1 | Words: 1.9K | Visits: 306 | Status: Work In Progress
Annoying Riku and Risa and the reason behind Daisuke and Riku's breakup.
Anime/Manga: D. N. Angel Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Fantasy / Drama / Angst / Romance / Horror | Type: Yaoi | Uploaded On: 09.24.2007 | Updated On: 06.20.2008 | Pages: 1 | Words: 1.9K | Visits: 306 | Status: Work In Progress
A/N: Yes, I will continue the fan fiction, believe it or not I already wanted to, plus I really do hate one-shots they suck, and I wish there were more longer fan fictions out there and I will fulfill my wish to write a fan fiction over 20,000 words long!
Disclaimer: I DO NOT OWN D.N.ANGEL OR ANY OF THE CHARACTERS!!!!
Note: the title is based on a song by Rise Against
R&R please!
Ciao! XOXO -Hélène-
'Krad to Satoshi'
‘Satoshi to Krad’
‘Dark to Daisuke’
‘Daisuke to Dark’
‘thoughts’
“talking”
Chapter One:
The Unraveling
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“And all these things that we tie togetherkeep unraveling apartand the light that used to burn so brightnow is dark
with anger-laced intent we set fireto the bridges that remainand they're wading thru the current now
drown in the flood of the tearsthat have been weptand i scream to the sky'no, you are not alone...?' "
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Beep! Beep! Beep! Crash! The alarm clock was made itself known and that it was time to get up for school. An annoyed Satoshi lifted his body up and just sat in bed for a half hour waiting for his vision to clear and for the vertigo to go away. When his vision finally cleared he look at the clock and got up to get ready for school, by the time he was done there was a knock at the door signaling that it was time to go. While going out the door he reminded himself to get a new alarm clock while coming home from school.
While driving by the train station he couldn’t help but notice Daisuke walking out, “Driver stop here,” he said more as a command than something that is asked of.
He got out of the car and looked at Daisuke, “Niwa, could you use a ride?” he asked.
Daisuke look up and smiled then said, “Yes, I really could, would you mind?” with a look that pleaded for the answer to be yes.
He smile, “No, not at all.” he stated.
“Miss the train?” Satoshi asked.
“Yeah,” then he looked down, “woke up late again.” Daisuke replied.
They rode most of the fifteen minute trip in silence only exchanging a few glances at each other. Satoshi noted Daisuke's nervousness and small smiles Daisuke made towards Satoshi, but all Satoshi though that those small smiles were only of kindness. Inside he thought that all Daisuke wanted was friendship and nothing more, but he hoped it could be more. Satoshi's thoughts came to an abrupt halt when the car stopped outside of the school. “Well, here we are.” Satoshi stated as the driver opened the door.
Daisuke got out of the car and smiled at Satoshi, “Thank you,” he replied with his bright smile.
Satoshi nodded, and the both started to walk to their first class together, but then, Fwap! Saehara Takashi came out of no where and tackled Daisuke. Saehara put Daisuke in a headlock and asked, “Could you take my cleaning duty with Satoshi today, there’s another heist and I want to be prepared.” he gave a pleading look, “Come on Daisuke! I’ll give you pictures of Riku from yesterday's sleepover.” he bribed.
Then out of no where Riku stated, “How were you even there Saehara!” and slapped him angrily. An another voice of a girl came, “He must have been hiding in the bushes outside of the window!”
“You pervert your just as bad as Dark!” Riku shrieked.
Daisuke could have sworn he saw sweat drop from Saehara's forehead.
Oh come one! I’m not that bad am I Daisuke?’
‘I’m sorry to say Dark, but I’m taking her side, you really are that bad’
‘Awww….your no fun Daisuke! I think I’ll go back to sleep now’
‘Go ahead be my guest. I’m not stopping you.’ but all Daisuke heard was snoring.
“Fine Saehara, I’ll do it. But I don’t want the pictures.” Daisuke claimed. “Yay!” Saehara cheered, and did a little dance while skipping off. “What was that?” Daisuke asked with an odd look after seeing the show Saehara gave by doing his happy dance, “I have no clue, but I don’t think I want to ever see it again.” Satoshi replied and they walked into class to begin another day at school.
Once they were in the classroom, Satoshi took his seat at the back of the room, by the window, and Daisuke, in the second row near the front of the room. Class droned by in homeroom for class II-B, but two students thought to themselves, and spoke to their other selves in silence, Dark being the main one spoken to but by Daisuke. 'Daisuke, are you actually feeling sorry for creepy boy?' was Dark's retort to Daisuke's mood.
'No, and will you stop calling him that!'
Coming off a bit strong aren't we, plus don't worry Daisuke you dreams are safe with me.' In the back of his mind he imagined Dark with a maniacal grin on his face like he was thinking up a plot for revenge.
Daisuke turned beet red, and from a distance Satoshi could tell Dark was teasing him, but he wouldn't admit that Daisuke was Dark's wing tamer, and really it hurt to know he had to hurt the one he needed most.
'Dark! You have better leave Hiwatari-kun alone, and whatever your thinking I don't like the odds of it'
'What? I can have fun every once in 400 years...no, scratch that, it makes me sound old'
'And your point is?'
'Sounds like creepy boy's rubbing off of you...'
'Dark, just go back to sleep, your really trying to annoy me, and I'm starting to get stared at.' but all he heard in the back of his mind was a bunch of zzz's from what appeared to be Dark in his slumber. The Phantom Thief Dark was the type of person who could fall asleep at the drop of a hat. “Niwa-kun.” called the teacher.
“Yes, Yamamoto-sensei?” Daisuke answered to his teacher.
“Will you please correct the sentence in Kanji and translate it into English?” the teacher asked.
“Yes, Yamamoto-sensei.” Daisuke replied, and then got up and corrected the sentence then translated it into English, and then sat back down at his desk.
“That is correct Niwa-kun.” Sensei replied, then the class went by slowly.
Diiinnnng! The lunch bell shrilly rang in the students' of II-B's ears, once Daisuke had his supplies gathered and put away the room was already deserted and all that was left, was Satoshi getting up and leaving the room. Daisuke blushed as he watch Satoshi leave, but Satoshi knew he was being watched by his fellow student and what he considered to be his only friend. Thank god Krad was asleep though, because then he would get the usual comments about tearing Daisuke to bits for looking at his “Satoshi-sama” and it just got on Satoshi's nerves always hearing the comments of death towards Daisuke. Satoshi looked at Daisuke, and then Daisuke blushed, “What is it Niwa?” Satoshi asked in a monotonous voice containing no emotion.
“It's nothing, Hiwatari-kun.” was Daisuke shy response.
“I suspect you to be talking to your other half, but I could be wrong.” Satoshi murmured, rubbing his temples as if he had a headache that was nagging at the back of his head.
Satoshi then, walked off to the roof where he usually ate his lunch in silence. Daisuke went and sat down with his friends under the Japanese Flowering Cherry tree and then came the annoyances that plotted his everyday life Riku wouldn't leave him alone about dating her again, and then Risa would not quit talking about “Mr. Dark” it just got on his nerves to the point, he just sat there for 5 minutes, then he packed his lunch and headed towards the roof to keep Satoshi compamny, he was tired of it all. Daisuke opened the door, and saw Satoshi look up, “Hiwatari-kun, may I sit up here with you?” Daisuke asked him with hope in his eyes.
“If you would like, Niwa.” then Daisuke put on a cheerful smile and sat by the door, he really hated heights.
“Don't you get lonely up here?”Daisuke asked noticing the silence.
“Yes, but I'm used to it by now.”
“Why?”
“I just am, Niwa, I raised myself and that's all I had since a young age.”
“That's very sad.” then Daisuke sighed.
'It must have really sucked for Hiwatari-kun, raising himself, I mean' Daisuke thought to himself.
“So, why did you decide to come up here, you usually eat with your friends.” Satoshi observed.
“Well, Riku won't quit annoying me about going back out with her, and all Risa can talk about is 'Mr. Dark' this 'Mr. Dark' that, I just can't stand it! I wish my life didn't have to be so complicated.” Daisuke fumed.
“What exactly made you and Riku break up?” Satoshi asked his eyes with a slight twinkle and a slight sound of hope apparent in his voice.
“Riku cheated and used me and that is all, I can't believe I was so stupid for believing she would actually date me!” Daisuke looked close to tears, and his face said nothing but complete and utter misery and from the looks of it his face read more than what was expected.
“She keeps on asking for more chances but I've had it by now, she's had her chances and she used them to her advantage and it hurts.” Daisuke was near tears now, his face was flushed and pale, Satoshi was stopping his urges to comfort the Niwa.
“Don't worry about it Daisuke. People never change, what you are now is better off, your my only friend and I'd rather not see you in misery or pain.” Satoshi spoke in words of comfort, he saw Daisuke put a happy smile on and wipe his tears away, the smile was sad and yet happy.
“Thank you, Satoshi. Your right, she doesn't deserve my tears. She cheated on me six times you know, and I kept giving her chances wishing she could change, but she didn't. What she did is the most horrible experience I've had.” Daisuke's smile told Satoshi he would be okay, and that made a slight smile tug at his lips, it was small, but it was a start.
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A/N: I hope you guys loved it. I'll submit the next chapter soon! I made it too short. oops, well it seemed like a good place to stop.
Daisuke: Those girls will die! mwahahahaha!*glares at fangirls*
Fangirls:*glares back and starts whisphering among themselves*
Satoshi:*Raises eyebrow*
Me:*shrugs* The story tells itself....
Disclaimer: I DO NOT OWN D.N.ANGEL OR ANY OF THE CHARACTERS!!!!
Note: the title is based on a song by Rise Against
R&R please!
Ciao! XOXO -Hélène-
'Krad to Satoshi'
‘Satoshi to Krad’
‘Dark to Daisuke’
‘Daisuke to Dark’
‘thoughts’
“talking”
Chapter One:
The Unraveling
------------------------------------
“And all these things that we tie togetherkeep unraveling apartand the light that used to burn so brightnow is dark
with anger-laced intent we set fireto the bridges that remainand they're wading thru the current now
drown in the flood of the tearsthat have been weptand i scream to the sky'no, you are not alone...?' "
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Beep! Beep! Beep! Crash! The alarm clock was made itself known and that it was time to get up for school. An annoyed Satoshi lifted his body up and just sat in bed for a half hour waiting for his vision to clear and for the vertigo to go away. When his vision finally cleared he look at the clock and got up to get ready for school, by the time he was done there was a knock at the door signaling that it was time to go. While going out the door he reminded himself to get a new alarm clock while coming home from school.
While driving by the train station he couldn’t help but notice Daisuke walking out, “Driver stop here,” he said more as a command than something that is asked of.
He got out of the car and looked at Daisuke, “Niwa, could you use a ride?” he asked.
Daisuke look up and smiled then said, “Yes, I really could, would you mind?” with a look that pleaded for the answer to be yes.
He smile, “No, not at all.” he stated.
“Miss the train?” Satoshi asked.
“Yeah,” then he looked down, “woke up late again.” Daisuke replied.
They rode most of the fifteen minute trip in silence only exchanging a few glances at each other. Satoshi noted Daisuke's nervousness and small smiles Daisuke made towards Satoshi, but all Satoshi though that those small smiles were only of kindness. Inside he thought that all Daisuke wanted was friendship and nothing more, but he hoped it could be more. Satoshi's thoughts came to an abrupt halt when the car stopped outside of the school. “Well, here we are.” Satoshi stated as the driver opened the door.
Daisuke got out of the car and smiled at Satoshi, “Thank you,” he replied with his bright smile.
Satoshi nodded, and the both started to walk to their first class together, but then, Fwap! Saehara Takashi came out of no where and tackled Daisuke. Saehara put Daisuke in a headlock and asked, “Could you take my cleaning duty with Satoshi today, there’s another heist and I want to be prepared.” he gave a pleading look, “Come on Daisuke! I’ll give you pictures of Riku from yesterday's sleepover.” he bribed.
Then out of no where Riku stated, “How were you even there Saehara!” and slapped him angrily. An another voice of a girl came, “He must have been hiding in the bushes outside of the window!”
“You pervert your just as bad as Dark!” Riku shrieked.
Daisuke could have sworn he saw sweat drop from Saehara's forehead.
Oh come one! I’m not that bad am I Daisuke?’
‘I’m sorry to say Dark, but I’m taking her side, you really are that bad’
‘Awww….your no fun Daisuke! I think I’ll go back to sleep now’
‘Go ahead be my guest. I’m not stopping you.’ but all Daisuke heard was snoring.
“Fine Saehara, I’ll do it. But I don’t want the pictures.” Daisuke claimed. “Yay!” Saehara cheered, and did a little dance while skipping off. “What was that?” Daisuke asked with an odd look after seeing the show Saehara gave by doing his happy dance, “I have no clue, but I don’t think I want to ever see it again.” Satoshi replied and they walked into class to begin another day at school.
Once they were in the classroom, Satoshi took his seat at the back of the room, by the window, and Daisuke, in the second row near the front of the room. Class droned by in homeroom for class II-B, but two students thought to themselves, and spoke to their other selves in silence, Dark being the main one spoken to but by Daisuke. 'Daisuke, are you actually feeling sorry for creepy boy?' was Dark's retort to Daisuke's mood.
'No, and will you stop calling him that!'
Coming off a bit strong aren't we, plus don't worry Daisuke you dreams are safe with me.' In the back of his mind he imagined Dark with a maniacal grin on his face like he was thinking up a plot for revenge.
Daisuke turned beet red, and from a distance Satoshi could tell Dark was teasing him, but he wouldn't admit that Daisuke was Dark's wing tamer, and really it hurt to know he had to hurt the one he needed most.
'Dark! You have better leave Hiwatari-kun alone, and whatever your thinking I don't like the odds of it'
'What? I can have fun every once in 400 years...no, scratch that, it makes me sound old'
'And your point is?'
'Sounds like creepy boy's rubbing off of you...'
'Dark, just go back to sleep, your really trying to annoy me, and I'm starting to get stared at.' but all he heard in the back of his mind was a bunch of zzz's from what appeared to be Dark in his slumber. The Phantom Thief Dark was the type of person who could fall asleep at the drop of a hat. “Niwa-kun.” called the teacher.
“Yes, Yamamoto-sensei?” Daisuke answered to his teacher.
“Will you please correct the sentence in Kanji and translate it into English?” the teacher asked.
“Yes, Yamamoto-sensei.” Daisuke replied, and then got up and corrected the sentence then translated it into English, and then sat back down at his desk.
“That is correct Niwa-kun.” Sensei replied, then the class went by slowly.
Diiinnnng! The lunch bell shrilly rang in the students' of II-B's ears, once Daisuke had his supplies gathered and put away the room was already deserted and all that was left, was Satoshi getting up and leaving the room. Daisuke blushed as he watch Satoshi leave, but Satoshi knew he was being watched by his fellow student and what he considered to be his only friend. Thank god Krad was asleep though, because then he would get the usual comments about tearing Daisuke to bits for looking at his “Satoshi-sama” and it just got on Satoshi's nerves always hearing the comments of death towards Daisuke. Satoshi looked at Daisuke, and then Daisuke blushed, “What is it Niwa?” Satoshi asked in a monotonous voice containing no emotion.
“It's nothing, Hiwatari-kun.” was Daisuke shy response.
“I suspect you to be talking to your other half, but I could be wrong.” Satoshi murmured, rubbing his temples as if he had a headache that was nagging at the back of his head.
Satoshi then, walked off to the roof where he usually ate his lunch in silence. Daisuke went and sat down with his friends under the Japanese Flowering Cherry tree and then came the annoyances that plotted his everyday life Riku wouldn't leave him alone about dating her again, and then Risa would not quit talking about “Mr. Dark” it just got on his nerves to the point, he just sat there for 5 minutes, then he packed his lunch and headed towards the roof to keep Satoshi compamny, he was tired of it all. Daisuke opened the door, and saw Satoshi look up, “Hiwatari-kun, may I sit up here with you?” Daisuke asked him with hope in his eyes.
“If you would like, Niwa.” then Daisuke put on a cheerful smile and sat by the door, he really hated heights.
“Don't you get lonely up here?”Daisuke asked noticing the silence.
“Yes, but I'm used to it by now.”
“Why?”
“I just am, Niwa, I raised myself and that's all I had since a young age.”
“That's very sad.” then Daisuke sighed.
'It must have really sucked for Hiwatari-kun, raising himself, I mean' Daisuke thought to himself.
“So, why did you decide to come up here, you usually eat with your friends.” Satoshi observed.
“Well, Riku won't quit annoying me about going back out with her, and all Risa can talk about is 'Mr. Dark' this 'Mr. Dark' that, I just can't stand it! I wish my life didn't have to be so complicated.” Daisuke fumed.
“What exactly made you and Riku break up?” Satoshi asked his eyes with a slight twinkle and a slight sound of hope apparent in his voice.
“Riku cheated and used me and that is all, I can't believe I was so stupid for believing she would actually date me!” Daisuke looked close to tears, and his face said nothing but complete and utter misery and from the looks of it his face read more than what was expected.
“She keeps on asking for more chances but I've had it by now, she's had her chances and she used them to her advantage and it hurts.” Daisuke was near tears now, his face was flushed and pale, Satoshi was stopping his urges to comfort the Niwa.
“Don't worry about it Daisuke. People never change, what you are now is better off, your my only friend and I'd rather not see you in misery or pain.” Satoshi spoke in words of comfort, he saw Daisuke put a happy smile on and wipe his tears away, the smile was sad and yet happy.
“Thank you, Satoshi. Your right, she doesn't deserve my tears. She cheated on me six times you know, and I kept giving her chances wishing she could change, but she didn't. What she did is the most horrible experience I've had.” Daisuke's smile told Satoshi he would be okay, and that made a slight smile tug at his lips, it was small, but it was a start.
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A/N: I hope you guys loved it. I'll submit the next chapter soon! I made it too short. oops, well it seemed like a good place to stop.
Daisuke: Those girls will die! mwahahahaha!*glares at fangirls*
Fangirls:*glares back and starts whisphering among themselves*
Satoshi:*Raises eyebrow*
Me:*shrugs* The story tells itself....