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| "Break in the Routine" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] | | Pages (2): [ 1 2 › » ] | Reviewed By: WaterSoter On: December 23, 2009 14:59 CST
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You're such a talented writer that you drew me to this pairing even though I'm more of a Naruto fan. Great work as always, I truly hope that you write some Naruto/Sasuke fics in the future. It would make me die a happy and fulfilled life!
| Reviewed By: Rockleerox93 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2008 03:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't really pay much mind to Kakashi and Gai in the anime or fanfics but yours has me changing my views. I think I like them^^. They're a very interesting couple and the way you write is just...you're able to keep their character in toe with their personality (one of the things I still struggle with from time to time). You're a fabulous writer and I will forever love your work!^^
| Reviewed By: laZzzybug On: December 20, 2007 10:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The first chapter was damn funny but, by the second you sold the idea of Kakashi/Gai ship to me. It's so sweet and still very much in character. I love your writings so I'm forced to read all your Naruto fics. I hope you write some more in the future.
| Reviewed By: cloudydayz On: September 21, 2007 18:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this fic!!! I have read more naruto fanfiction than I can say; and this is the cutest story I have ever read. It is very heart warming! I love it!!!
| Reviewed By: Lunael On: August 30, 2007 20:35 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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No matter how many times I read this fic, I alsways love it so much! Once every few months, I just feel like reading it over again and I'm never disappointed with it. And yet, I'm not even into KakaGai ^^; I've probably already tols you before, but this is a wonderful fic! Once again, thanks a lot for the fic! ^^
| Reviewed By: Yuen On: April 16, 2007 02:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Words cannot describe how good this fic is. The summary does NOT do it justice at all. At first I thought it would all about sex, as in fucking without no real feelings involved kinda stuff, which I don't like but coz I was desperate for KakaGai love I still read but it turned out to be the best KakaGai fic I have ever read. This story is a masterpiece. Well, almost, but you get the idea. It is seriously so good from all aspects. But the element that stands out the most is the sheer believability of it all. This fic is just so real, I can imagine it happening in the canon universe, seriously. Not in the manga, of course, but in the canon universe as depicted in the manga. I am serious. It is that real. You have a masterful grasp of Kakashi's and Gai's personalities and their basic relationship and the way they reacted to things and stuff was just so damn IN CHARACTER!!! I can easily imagine Gai doing what he did, it fits in so nicely with his personality. And the way you characterized Kakashi perfectly while developing his feelings and stuff was just plain AWESOME! Using his reactions to what Gai did in order to further the development was just so GOOD! I mean, one common complaint about yaoi fics is that the characters get OOC but you kept both of them perfectly in character while using their basic personality characteristics to drive the plot's development in that direction! YOU ARE SERIOUSLY A MASTER! Furthermore, and I really admire you for this, in a yaoi fic many authors make one party more feminine and passive in that the character reacts as if he were a female version of himself to romantic stuff... But here you left the male aspects of their personalities intact and still managed to develop a beautiful, realistic love between them! For example, the focus on sex is a very male thing, no? Yet the way Kakashi thinks this is just about the sex while in fact in the rest of the text his actions and reactions just show the depth of his feelings !!!! Deep. Yup, this story is deep. This review simply cannot convey how good this story is! I'm serious! It has just the right amount of humour, angst, and all that other stuff in it to make it great! It has that... spark of that something that sets it truly apart from its peers!! I love this story! And it is really, really well written. I loved the character interaction. Truly. I loved everything about this story. I enjoyed reading it so much. *sigh* I wish I were more literate, so I could explain just how awesome this story is. The ratings are pretty much accurate - all tens is just what your story is. And the little details that make your story so good... dunno how to explain... I loved the pain rating on a scale of one to ten thing. It was a shinobi thing and very fitting to their personalities. I loved how Kakashi went all bonkers and used the sharingan on that poor (but deserving!) kid. I loved how you developed the plot and Kakashi's reaction up until the point where the conclusion was inevitable. I loved the small details that were used for characterization. I just don't know how to explain the depth of your mastery. This fic is plain excellent. This fic is one of the best yaoi fics in Naruto fandom. It should be getting hundreds of reviews if only people would just give this pairing a chance. How do I explain more? I loved the morning after, I loved the epilogue and how you drew Kakashi's feelings to a satisfying conclusion, I loved the exposition it was so shocking and so horribly funny (I refer to Kakashi's reaction) and this fic was just SO DAMN GOOD! I love you for writing this fic! Thank you very much!! One last comment: GAI IS SO CLUELESS! Which is... a good thing. Some say this is a little unbelivable and yeah maybe a little but when you take into account his personality and the circumstances (recall there was a war going on n stuff) it is a good chance he might have turned out the way he was. You are an amazing writer. ^_^
| Title: Catching up on your other stories
Reviewed By: RazZadig [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2006 21:58 CDT
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True, what I know of Naruto I learned from reading your stories; however, it's hard to believe the characters would have any more life in the series than how you write them. Whatever you write, you imbue with humor, drama and realism. Such a pleasure to read. The theme kept throughout this story, i.e. routines and their values, was nicely brought full circle by the epilogue. In addition, the short flashbacks provide the balancing drama and history to this new relationship. Humor crystallized by details like the Scramble Brain punishment and the misjudged razor selection simply add to the fun of the story. Keep writing!
| Reviewed By: inarae On: September 29, 2005 02:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this!! Great story! Really loved this. Thanks for writing and sharing! (PS, the reason I didn't rank spelling is that my spelling sucks, nothing darker)
| Reviewed By: Missastro On: September 10, 2005 17:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So awesome :D Everyone is so in character it's.... frightening, actually. Love it.
| Reviewed By: Pixie Smith [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2005 16:14 CDT
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There's something wrong with my account. It hasn't been informing me of updates. I didn't even know you had a Kakashi/Gai fic until I suddenly got an update on the Lee/Gaara one. Wah! I've been missing out. Lucky I checked your profile after reading the Lee/Gaara one or I'd still never have known. Anyway, this is one amazing fic. Like, absolutely brilliant. I loved a protective Kakashi, giving Idika a tiny touch of 'Fried Brains for Breakfast'. Absolutely wonderful. I adore your work.
| Reviewed By: Sahara Storm On: August 29, 2005 09:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! This was a great fanfic; fun to read, very intersting, and maddly funny. You did a really good job. I enjoyed it immensely. :-) I'll make sure to check out that KakaGai commmunity too. Right now, I'm gonna see if I can read your new story before it's time for me to get off the Net. ^__^ ~Sahara
| Title: It's ooooovver... TT_TT
Reviewed By: Choi-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2005 17:59 CDT
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Kakashi... and Gai! They've finally hooked up! XD You are seriously too cool. I loved this converstion: "sex; it's like...it's like taijutsu."
| Reviewed By: cellia On: August 20, 2005 23:29 CDT
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Hee. Gai automatically makes any scene he's in more awesome. Still, this was a little angsty for a Gai fic (though perhaps w/ Kakashi it can't be helped...). And I actually find it hard to believe he'd still be a clueless virgin at his age. (or maybe this is what happens when someone gets paired with Kakashi, poor Iruka seems to become a maiden aunt in most KakaIru) Yeah, Gai's kinda a weirdo, but if people with bugs living in them can get hitched, I can't believe some aggressive male or female ninja with ecclectic tastes didn't come on ultra-strong to him some night. Still I don't want to be so negative, because, dude, You wrote a fic with *Gai* as a main char in a yaoi fic. The world absolutly needs more Gai, so this can only be a good thing.
| Reviewed By: Sahara Storm On: August 16, 2005 10:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woo! I really like where this is going. I love how you do Kakashi; you have his character down. Gai is very well done too. The background that you give, how you analyse the whole situation; it's all perfect. This is a really great story, and I'm enjoying it immensely! I'm waiting in breathless anticipation for the next chapter! :-) ~Sahara
| Reviewed By: Sahara On: August 15, 2005 11:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE this. You really don't see many KakaGai fics around, but this promises to be good. It's HILARIOUS, got a little action, and the characterisation is just about perfect. I can't wait to read some more! :-) ~Sahara
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