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Title: more!
Reviewed By: ladytokyo [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2006 17:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Plz update, it's been too long.
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: lindy [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2006 20:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, I'm newer to this fic, but I've gotta say that I'm loving it. It's really intricate and the time line is awesome in an awful way. I love it. Can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: VScorpio [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2006 18:05 CDT
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Magnificent chapter. In truth I was glad to see the other getting some air time, it's been a while since we last saw Sango and Miroku and it is nice to know things are going well for them. I will admit, as far as Inuyasha's memory lapse is concerned I have my own suspicions...but I would rather keep silent and see what happens rather than bandy about my theories. I look forwards to seeing what happens next time, stay strong and keep ignoring the idiots who are complaining. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2006 09:24 CDT
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Lol I love your story but your end stories are funny!! I like them too. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: VScorpio [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2006 15:58 CDT
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Magnificent chapter. It seems that at least for now things are starting to work out for them, the major threats are gone and they can continue on peacefully. Yet, it always seems that those are the times when life seeks to throw you a curveball so I doubt it will all be chocolates and roses. On a different note have fun with college, it's most definately a damn sight more fun than work...but ignore me, I'm just a cynic...or it might be because I work in IT. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2006 17:11 CDT
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I feel all fuzzy( not moldy) insie because your last chapter was full of sweetness. Anyways good luck with college. Update soon!!
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Title: Contest
Reviewed By: Purple Moose On: August 13, 2006 05:15 CDT
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Crap...i was going to enter that, I had a pic drawn and everything... but then I completely forgot about it because I had exams.. Im so sorry.. but still great work as always!
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Reviewed By: Twinkle On: August 11, 2006 06:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Chapter! I think I'm giong to cry. Poor older InuYasha. I hope he can find someone, or perhaps Kagome can just be married to both at the same time!
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: August 10, 2006 18:48 CDT
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Sorry to double post but I realised I had made a faux pas, I left no way to respond to my comments, effectively making in anonymous. I apolgise for that and offer my accoutn here is VScorpio and on FanFicton.Net is Hououza. I know it seems excesive, and perhaps without merit but I do not believe I should comment without leaving the room for discussion or argument. My apologies once again, H.
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: August 10, 2006 18:45 CDT
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First, before I address the thoughts and ideals of the notes at the end let me say this, it was a magnificent chapter as always. A subtle twist, in making his otheself hold on, even though his existence is now a paradox in itself. Now, in answer to your notes. I agree with some, but not all of your points. A copetition is without value if one lacks worthy opponents, yet at the same time, not everyone can be perfect, and you cannot always expect others to lvie upi to your own standards. There was a time I would screw up work over and over again for a single misspelled word but with age I have gotten past that...for the most part, because other people have demands on my time. I will admit that while the challenge did catch my attention, personally I have two reasons. The first is siply that I have little time these days, work is slowly erroding my life and it seems as I earn more respect in my profession I get more and more to do. The second, is that I am uncomfortable trying to take on another's work. It is your concept, your rendition of another's world rewritten and to try and emulate that...is not a challenge I would be willing to undergo. But I think that is more than enough said, all I can really do is express my want to see this continue, and the enjoyment I find in your work. Perhaps I may or may not replicate it, or equal it in someway but still I enjoy it and I believe that is what counts. As ever allow me to leave with what has become my usual sign off, good luck & best wishes, but please know they are heartfelt. Hououza
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: June 23, 2006 18:14 CDT
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Magnificent chapter. I really don't know what to say anymore, I ran out of words of praise a while back and they haven't invented any new ones yet... I would go for the competition, but unfortunately work like to consume my life. Till next time good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2006 10:58 CDT
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GOOD CHAPIE, Loved it, update soon!!
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Reviewed By: BiggestInuyashaFANever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2006 19:18 CDT
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I lOVE YOUR STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!I will try to enter your contest but you know with school and all i might not be able to start till a bit later in the contest. Motsumoto should get the job i think or have his memory erased either one.
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Reviewed By: demoncatkuroro [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2006 18:57 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, awesome story. keep it up! the suspense is killing me!! i think the dude should call the number that will get him employed. this is one of the best stories ive ever read. i spotted a random typo here and there, but other wise perfect. it's not easy to find a good story on the web in Mexico city.
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Title: funny
Reviewed By: TwistedHeart [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2006 19:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ive only red the 1st chapter of the alternat ending but then i remembered, i loved the original i mean it was simply amazing and love ur weapons, but i got a better one, my brother. Hes a cop, lifts weights and almost killed someone just with a punch in the gut. he does anything for me since i saved him from death by drowing when we were younger, so i could use him as a weapon of mass destruction, muah ha ha ha haaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! BEWARE!!!!!!!!!!!!
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