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Reviewed By: Hououza On: April 21, 2006 08:11 CDT
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Magnificent chapter, I think that worked out rather well considering just who yoiu had in a room together. Personally I would hope that he did call thr right one, no sense in loosing someone who might be useful. And as an aside I hope the flight back goes well and that things work out. Forget about the updates until it's all sorted and we'll see you then. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: April 09, 2006 18:27 CDT
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I know what that's like to a degree...but it's different for eveyone so... To be honest I wouldn't worry about the chapter. Anyone who cares will wait and the other can go (insert swearword of choice) off rather than sending the usual pestering mails. Hope the depression eases, not much advice I can give for that one. For the writers block I find writing something else in a different universe usually helps somewhat. Who knows... Well either way, I hope they both improve. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Title: Chapter 51
Reviewed By: VScorpio [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2006 09:20 CST
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Magnificent chapter. In a way, he is her Inuyasha, but now thathe has stopped it, now that the past has been changed...how much longer will he exist in this place? What could I possibly find wrong with this? More of a sadist than a masochist unfortunately. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: the_random_obsessor [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2006 17:38 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*joins army of good reviewers* feel my wrath too. loved the chapter! if i were inuyasha(younger) i'd be going insane. can you say paradox? hmm....that reminds me of all the thats so raven shows where she makes it happen from stopping it....hmmm....lol. it was great, you really made me think with it. my brain just keeps going paradox *BEEP BEEP* paradox *BEEP BEEP* cant wait for the next chapter, where hopefully stuff'll get resolved a bit.... sesshoumaru as a bussiness mand...now theres something i could definately see. be great at intimidating competition.
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Reviewed By: the_random_obsessor [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2006 17:38 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*joins army of good reviewers* feel my wrath too. loved the chapter! if i were inuyasha(younger) i'd be going insane. can you say paradox? hmm....that reminds me of all the thats so raven shows where she makes it happen from stopping it....hmmm....lol. it was great, you really made me think with it. my brain just keeps going paradox *BEEP BEEP* paradox *BEEP BEEP* cant wait for the next chapter, where hopefully stuff'll get resolved a bit.... sesshoumaru as a bussiness mand...now theres something i could definately see. be great at intimidating competition.
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Reviewed By: VScorpio [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2006 16:41 CST
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Magnificent chapter. So, the final turth is about to be revealed, the identity of the phantom and the motives and methods behind his quest. Oh and on a side note congratulations. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: VScorpio [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2006 19:50 CST
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Magnificent chapter. Sorry for taking an absolute eternity to review. I have no excuses this time so please accept my apologies for putting it on hold. It will be interesting to see what happens to the deterctive and if he does see the phantom what repurcussions it may have on other people... Either way the next chapter promises to have some susprises in store I expect. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza PS. A veryy late happy new year!
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Title: all my reveiw isn't showing up >-(
Reviewed By: the_random_obsessor [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2006 18:46 CST
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*this is the part where i wonder why the hell my reveiw got cut off* if u can't see all of it (all 1500 characters =^-^=) email me at coliogirl91@netscape.net. i'll email it to you.
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Title: ok, this is for transformations..all of it =^-^=
Reviewed By: the_random_obsessor [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2006 18:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well, for some reason whenever i go to transformations, it logs me out.^^' so please bear with me while i write the reveiw here. IT WAS AMAZING!!!--just had to get that out. you definately drew people-me- in cuz i could not stop reading. and i sympathize with the crappy computer, i have one to. umm....the chapter with all the kids was kinda confusing, it seemed to go so fast.
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Reviewed By: ChibiRin [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2005 12:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think you did a very good job in showing the progression of InuYasha and Kagome's relationship. I think the goodnight kiss thing is sweet.
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Reviewed By: VScorpio [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2005 19:28 CST
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Magnificent chapter once again. So many pressures on them both...I wonder what will happen when his olderself finally completes his revenge and the timeline begins to change... As for the series, does that mean they actually finished it completely or have you seen all the ones to date? Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: elementalobsession On: October 03, 2005 21:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's nice to take a break from the usual angst, ne? Much love for the last chapter.
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: September 27, 2005 16:17 CDT
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*Glad to be out of range of the prayer beads* Excellent chapter. Some interesting moments, in particular the fact it was a girl that had created those pictures. Brings to mind an old saying about a woman scorned... Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Title: deserves
Reviewed By: inu-kagdude [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2005 21:36 CDT
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i read the story by black sugar and you are right it is such a copy have people ever heard of copyright before man so people are so inconsiderate
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: September 19, 2005 17:55 CDT
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Sorry for taking so long to review this chapter, it took me a while to sort out in my head that the alternate AU had taken on a life seperate from the other part and then I kept getting sidetracked... Magnificent chapter as always. On a side note I have a slightly used Scorpion available? Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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