| "Fire and Ice: The Alternate Universe" Reviews/Comments [ 66 ] |
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Reviewed By: Susan On: January 11, 2002 11:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh yes, I can't wait till they meet. I like the way you've cut to the chase. MORE, MORE, MORE!!!. |
Reviewed By: Firaga [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2002 04:50 CST
Comment/Review:
aaaaaahhhhhh this is taking me so long to do! pls. read&review though, it would mean a lot to me! you can scrap the whole intro, it was so long and complicated. i've totally changed it! :P i know exactly what i want to write for this though :) heehee i HAD to change the title, besides, i thought they were fire and ice to the core! ciao bebes! pls. keep in touch! the next chap. will be out this weekend! |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2002 21:52 CST
Comment/Review:
Neat! I can't wait for the first chapter! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: January 07, 2002 20:13 CST
Comment/Review:
Boy you've really thought this out haven't you! So far it's a good start , with the introductions and such. Now all I have to do is memorize some of the characters and then I'll be all set. Good luck with your new fic and I hope you get alot of reviews. Peace |
Reviewed By: trunksgurl On: January 06, 2002 20:05 CST
Comment/Review:
i think it's a very very good start i can't wait to get to the first chappy it's kinda confusing and i know i can't remember it all but i can't wait to read what comes up next please update really soon well until then keep up the awesome writing ~trunksgurl~ |
Reviewed By: mizu megami [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2002 19:49 CST
Comment/Review:
update iv been waiting and waiting and still no update. Sai-chan stole my book and im looking for things to read and you havnt updated. >.Blood and Chocolate by Annette Curtis Klause >. |
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