| "Fire and Ice: The Alternate Universe" Reviews/Comments [ 66 ] |
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Reviewed By: pupb6 On: March 07, 2002 17:28 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
14!!!!!!!1 |
Reviewed By: pupb6 On: March 07, 2002 17:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool story cant wait for!!!!!!r!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2002 15:55 CST
Comment/Review:
Firaga, where are you?! You haven't update in like 700 years. Well maybe not that long, but it's been a really long time! Well I guess I'll go sit in a dark corner all alone until your next update. Okay, well, bye. (Jadedbest walks away with her shoulders hunched and a single tear falling down her cheek). |
Reviewed By: pupb6 On: February 22, 2002 12:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cant wait to find out what happens next!!!! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: February 22, 2002 00:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh no, she's gone, and I was so hoping that they would be able to spend some time alone. Veggie's heart is breaking too. I can't wait to see how you deal with this little dilemma. Update soon. Peace |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2002 23:38 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really, really liked this chapter Firaga. I would write more but it's late and I'm sleepy. So just know I'm waiting.-JB |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2002 22:38 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice. Short but very nice. Waiting for the next update.-JB |
Reviewed By: Susan On: February 15, 2002 21:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chappie but I hope the next one's longer (hint,hint). Peace |
Reviewed By: mizu megami [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2002 20:28 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
damn you you did it again. you stoped and only at...2 pg's. >:(
wishing there was more,
:)mizu:P |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2002 12:50 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOOhhhhhhh! I'm soooo happy! Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! Sorry about the whole mad at you thing, I get a little ... um ... hyper sometimes. Ok, ok, so I get a little crazy! Anyway, I'm so glad they met. I am waiting for your next update. You may take your time (but not too much time. LOL)-JB |
Reviewed By: mizu megami [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2002 09:10 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
woo hoo they FINALLY meet.:D plz plz plz put up more i want to see how bulma dumps yamcha this time. hehe im so mean to him gomen yamcha pplz
plz put up more ASAP,
:)mizu:P |
Reviewed By: Firaga [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2002 06:05 CST
Comment/Review:
AHHH! because y'all we're getting jumpy i put the next chap out today! hope it was worth the wait, though i know the upcoming chaps will REALLY make up for it (hehehhe big banged, huh susan? ;) JB don't be mad :) this ones for you then! mizu, keep your work up! you're doing well! thanks for all your reviews dahling! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: February 10, 2002 03:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
FINALLY! They've met and I'm thrilled. Thanx, I needed that. I don't want you to think that I was mad at you b/c I wasn't. Anyway, great chap, and don't worry cause I won't hassel you for more. Tonite you delivered, so update when you can. Peace |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2002 11:38 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All right Firaga, you're about to make me mad at you. From now on you are reqiured (by the law of Vegeta) to update this story every 5 minutes until it's complete. No excuses! J/K. I really liked this chapter! I am, as always, impatiently waiting for your next update.-JB |
Reviewed By: re-o-ko On: February 09, 2002 10:10 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
please contiue. you have a great story going. |
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