| "Fire and Ice: The Alternate Universe" Reviews/Comments [ 66 ] |
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Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2002 23:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't wait till they meet. I can't wait for the next time your parents are out. Great chapter.-JB |
Reviewed By: Susan On: January 24, 2002 22:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Firaga this is ssoooo good. I can't wait to see what Bulma uncovers about her past and when the heck is she gonna meet Vegita? Can't wait to read more. |
Reviewed By: hentai king On: January 24, 2002 14:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2002 23:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're so bad Firaga! Sneaking around your parents. Well I have to say I'm glad you did. This chapter was very good. Waiting for the next one. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: January 23, 2002 11:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. I can't wait for these two to finally meet much to the disgust of those around them. Keep going. |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2002 00:20 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good chapter! Waiting for the next one. Oh, and that picture 'Beauty' has been my wallpaper for the last 3 weeks. Vegeta is a sexy bitch! I just love him! Anyway I hope you don't get in too much trouble over your grades because then I'll have to wait a long time for your next chapter (and I really don't want to have to do that).-JB |
Reviewed By: trunksgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2002 09:37 CST
Comment/Review:
oh this is such a good story i can't wait till the next chappy i love this story i need more please review soon well keep up the awesome writing
~trunksgurl~ |
Reviewed By: Susan On: January 19, 2002 07:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Worth the wait. I think a certain queen will be needing some of that "special" medicine. I do hope that Veggie and Bulma meet soon. Maybe he'll recognize her and they can get together. Oh silly me, I forgot you're the author and I know you'll throw a bunch of obstacles their way before they can finally find happiness. Works for me. Good job!! |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2002 00:17 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Getting interesting. Can't wait for the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: pupb6 On: January 15, 2002 14:49 CST
Comment/Review:
cool cant wait to read next chaps. :) |
Reviewed By: Susan On: January 14, 2002 04:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe that Freeza's gonna try to keep them from meeting (and after all the work you've put into this, hehe). Please update when you can. Damn good fic! |
Reviewed By: Firaga [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2002 02:47 CST
Comment/Review:
hehe ooohhh man legolas is a cutie. this next chapter is for y'all who read the intro. and STILL read on (heehee, that's faith baby!) JB and Susan, you two are the BEST~ :P |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2002 23:44 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Firaga, I have to say that you are one of the best cliffhanger writers I have ever read. As a side note I have to say that I agree with you on the Legolas thing. Even though he could never compete with Vegeta, he is definatly a nice second place. Can't wait for the next chapter. - JB |
Reviewed By: Ami Tendo [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2002 19:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ahhh!!! no!! not another cliffhanger!!! waahhh!! y do u always do this!! :'( ok.... now that ive got that out of my system... ^-^;; heheh... i hope u get ur next chap out soon!! |
Reviewed By: Marron On: January 12, 2002 15:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
man, great story. i loved evey part. it's like if you were in the 16th centery, but with dbz. cool, when's chapter 2 coming out??? the story was great!!!!! |
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