| "Fire and Ice: The Alternate Universe" Reviews/Comments [ 66 ] |
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Reviewed By: mizu megami [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2002 08:03 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo you stoped why did you stop it was getting really interesting. i want to know if he meets bulma and if yamcha can kiss the weeding good bye. plz put up more ASAP. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: February 09, 2002 03:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good Firaga, but I'm getting impatient here. I want B/V to meet like 10 minutes ago. If ya don't make it happen soon I'll jump into your story and introduce them myself, even if it means getting Big Banged by Vegeta (ooohhh that sounds so good-hehe ~_^). Sorry-hentai mind working overtime. Write more soon. |
Reviewed By: Firaga [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2002 02:13 CST
Comment/Review:
i added a new fic, "A Complicated Love", but then I deleted it ten minutes after it was posted! I think I should put everything one at a time so I can update faster :) That's my next fic though, it's another A/U - but it's VERY different from this one. Anyway, enjoy! I'll put the next chap up shortly! :) |
Reviewed By: Kapies On: February 09, 2002 00:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fan fic. You need to write more, I rarly give all 10's to someone. But i like the way you are doing this Bulma Vagita Fic, usualy the ones that there in altrnet universes it terns out crappy but yours is realy good. |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2002 21:54 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, this is getting good. I can't wait to see how this little meeting is going to go. Great chapter! Waiting for the next.-JB |
Reviewed By: Susan On: February 08, 2002 10:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good chapter. I can't wait to see what happens when Veggie and the Princess meet. Poor Yamcha, he can't even get a break in the AU (hehe). Peace |
Reviewed By: mizu megami [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2002 09:08 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
no you stoped it agin im loving this plz plz plz put up more |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2002 22:45 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I tell you I'm loving it! Sorry it took me so long to review but I got in some major trouble this weekend and was banished from my computer. *sniff* Anyway, the last two chapters were great. And you know I'm always waiting for one of your updates.-JB |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2002 22:43 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I tell you I'm loving it! Sorry it took me so long to review but I got in some major trouble this weekend and was banished from my computer. *sniff* Anyway, the last two chapters were great. And you know I'm always waiting one your updates.-JB |
Reviewed By: Susan On: February 07, 2002 21:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think Veggie has caught on to Bulma's little visit. So what's gonna happen now? Btw, don't get stressed out about taking a long time to put out chapters. Good things are worth waiting for. You're doing great Kiddo. Peace |
Reviewed By: Firaga [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2002 07:21 CST
Comment/Review:
please r&r! i wanna know watcha think of everything so far! too fast, too slow? :) im sorry im taking so damn long, i'll try harder! expect THREE updates this weekend (im devoting it to this)! thanks for the great reviews so far! :) |
Reviewed By: mizu megami [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2002 19:44 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU STOPED THIS IS NOT PERMITED! YOU ARE NOT ALLOWED TO LEAVE SUCH A GOOD FIC I MUST READ MORE I MUST. PLZ PUT UP MORE PLZ PLZ PLZ. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: February 02, 2002 04:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooooohhhhhh thankyou,thankyou,thankyou. That was just great. Bulma has been entranced by Vegeta and vice versa. Wow, I can't wait to see what happens next. You're a peach! |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2002 00:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think you should buy your parents dinner to get them out of the house again. These updates are taking way too long for my liking. Great chapter waiting for the next one.-JB |
Reviewed By: Susan On: February 01, 2002 21:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are evil. Imagine leaving it on a cliffy after I waited patiently for an update (pouts). I can't wait till you write more so I can find out who came to life. I hope its you know who. |
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