| "Fire and Ice: The Alternate Universe" Reviews/Comments [ 66 ] |
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Reviewed By: trunksgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2002 09:37 CST
Comment/Review:
oh this is such a good story i can't wait till the next chappy i love this story i need more please review soon well keep up the awesome writing
~trunksgurl~ |
Reviewed By: Susan On: January 19, 2002 07:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Worth the wait. I think a certain queen will be needing some of that "special" medicine. I do hope that Veggie and Bulma meet soon. Maybe he'll recognize her and they can get together. Oh silly me, I forgot you're the author and I know you'll throw a bunch of obstacles their way before they can finally find happiness. Works for me. Good job!! |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2002 00:17 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Getting interesting. Can't wait for the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: pupb6 On: January 15, 2002 14:49 CST
Comment/Review:
cool cant wait to read next chaps. :) |
Reviewed By: Susan On: January 14, 2002 04:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe that Freeza's gonna try to keep them from meeting (and after all the work you've put into this, hehe). Please update when you can. Damn good fic! |
Reviewed By: Firaga [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2002 02:47 CST
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hehe ooohhh man legolas is a cutie. this next chapter is for y'all who read the intro. and STILL read on (heehee, that's faith baby!) JB and Susan, you two are the BEST~ :P |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2002 23:44 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Firaga, I have to say that you are one of the best cliffhanger writers I have ever read. As a side note I have to say that I agree with you on the Legolas thing. Even though he could never compete with Vegeta, he is definatly a nice second place. Can't wait for the next chapter. - JB |
Reviewed By: Ami Tendo [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2002 19:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ahhh!!! no!! not another cliffhanger!!! waahhh!! y do u always do this!! :'( ok.... now that ive got that out of my system... ^-^;; heheh... i hope u get ur next chap out soon!! |
Reviewed By: Marron On: January 12, 2002 15:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
man, great story. i loved evey part. it's like if you were in the 16th centery, but with dbz. cool, when's chapter 2 coming out??? the story was great!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: January 11, 2002 11:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh yes, I can't wait till they meet. I like the way you've cut to the chase. MORE, MORE, MORE!!!. |
Reviewed By: Firaga [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2002 04:50 CST
Comment/Review:
aaaaaahhhhhh this is taking me so long to do! pls. read&review though, it would mean a lot to me! you can scrap the whole intro, it was so long and complicated. i've totally changed it! :P i know exactly what i want to write for this though :) heehee i HAD to change the title, besides, i thought they were fire and ice to the core! ciao bebes! pls. keep in touch! the next chap. will be out this weekend! |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2002 21:52 CST
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Neat! I can't wait for the first chapter! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: January 07, 2002 20:13 CST
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Boy you've really thought this out haven't you! So far it's a good start , with the introductions and such. Now all I have to do is memorize some of the characters and then I'll be all set. Good luck with your new fic and I hope you get alot of reviews. Peace |
Reviewed By: trunksgurl On: January 06, 2002 20:05 CST
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i think it's a very very good start i can't wait to get to the first chappy it's kinda confusing and i know i can't remember it all but i can't wait to read what comes up next please update really soon well until then keep up the awesome writing ~trunksgurl~ |
Reviewed By: mizu megami [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2002 19:49 CST
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update iv been waiting and waiting and still no update. Sai-chan stole my book and im looking for things to read and you havnt updated. >.Blood and Chocolate by Annette Curtis Klause >. |
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