| "Fire and Ice: The Alternate Universe" Reviews/Comments [ 66 ] |
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Reviewed By: mizu megami [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2002 09:08 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
no you stoped it agin im loving this plz plz plz put up more |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2002 22:45 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I tell you I'm loving it! Sorry it took me so long to review but I got in some major trouble this weekend and was banished from my computer. *sniff* Anyway, the last two chapters were great. And you know I'm always waiting for one of your updates.-JB |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2002 22:43 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I tell you I'm loving it! Sorry it took me so long to review but I got in some major trouble this weekend and was banished from my computer. *sniff* Anyway, the last two chapters were great. And you know I'm always waiting one your updates.-JB |
Reviewed By: Susan On: February 07, 2002 21:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think Veggie has caught on to Bulma's little visit. So what's gonna happen now? Btw, don't get stressed out about taking a long time to put out chapters. Good things are worth waiting for. You're doing great Kiddo. Peace |
Reviewed By: Firaga [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2002 07:21 CST
Comment/Review:
please r&r! i wanna know watcha think of everything so far! too fast, too slow? :) im sorry im taking so damn long, i'll try harder! expect THREE updates this weekend (im devoting it to this)! thanks for the great reviews so far! :) |
Reviewed By: mizu megami [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2002 19:44 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU STOPED THIS IS NOT PERMITED! YOU ARE NOT ALLOWED TO LEAVE SUCH A GOOD FIC I MUST READ MORE I MUST. PLZ PUT UP MORE PLZ PLZ PLZ. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: February 02, 2002 04:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooooohhhhhh thankyou,thankyou,thankyou. That was just great. Bulma has been entranced by Vegeta and vice versa. Wow, I can't wait to see what happens next. You're a peach! |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2002 00:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think you should buy your parents dinner to get them out of the house again. These updates are taking way too long for my liking. Great chapter waiting for the next one.-JB |
Reviewed By: Susan On: February 01, 2002 21:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are evil. Imagine leaving it on a cliffy after I waited patiently for an update (pouts). I can't wait till you write more so I can find out who came to life. I hope its you know who. |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2002 23:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't wait till they meet. I can't wait for the next time your parents are out. Great chapter.-JB |
Reviewed By: Susan On: January 24, 2002 22:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Firaga this is ssoooo good. I can't wait to see what Bulma uncovers about her past and when the heck is she gonna meet Vegita? Can't wait to read more. |
Reviewed By: hentai king On: January 24, 2002 14:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2002 23:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're so bad Firaga! Sneaking around your parents. Well I have to say I'm glad you did. This chapter was very good. Waiting for the next one. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: January 23, 2002 11:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. I can't wait for these two to finally meet much to the disgust of those around them. Keep going. |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2002 00:20 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good chapter! Waiting for the next one. Oh, and that picture 'Beauty' has been my wallpaper for the last 3 weeks. Vegeta is a sexy bitch! I just love him! Anyway I hope you don't get in too much trouble over your grades because then I'll have to wait a long time for your next chapter (and I really don't want to have to do that).-JB |
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