| "Fire and Ice: The Alternate Universe" Reviews/Comments [ 66 ] |
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Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2002 22:38 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice. Short but very nice. Waiting for the next update.-JB |
Reviewed By: Susan On: February 15, 2002 21:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chappie but I hope the next one's longer (hint,hint). Peace |
Reviewed By: mizu megami [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2002 20:28 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
damn you you did it again. you stoped and only at...2 pg's. >:(
wishing there was more,
:)mizu:P |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2002 12:50 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOOhhhhhhh! I'm soooo happy! Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! Sorry about the whole mad at you thing, I get a little ... um ... hyper sometimes. Ok, ok, so I get a little crazy! Anyway, I'm so glad they met. I am waiting for your next update. You may take your time (but not too much time. LOL)-JB |
Reviewed By: mizu megami [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2002 09:10 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
woo hoo they FINALLY meet.:D plz plz plz put up more i want to see how bulma dumps yamcha this time. hehe im so mean to him gomen yamcha pplz
plz put up more ASAP,
:)mizu:P |
Reviewed By: Firaga [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2002 06:05 CST
Comment/Review:
AHHH! because y'all we're getting jumpy i put the next chap out today! hope it was worth the wait, though i know the upcoming chaps will REALLY make up for it (hehehhe big banged, huh susan? ;) JB don't be mad :) this ones for you then! mizu, keep your work up! you're doing well! thanks for all your reviews dahling! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: February 10, 2002 03:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
FINALLY! They've met and I'm thrilled. Thanx, I needed that. I don't want you to think that I was mad at you b/c I wasn't. Anyway, great chap, and don't worry cause I won't hassel you for more. Tonite you delivered, so update when you can. Peace |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2002 11:38 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All right Firaga, you're about to make me mad at you. From now on you are reqiured (by the law of Vegeta) to update this story every 5 minutes until it's complete. No excuses! J/K. I really liked this chapter! I am, as always, impatiently waiting for your next update.-JB |
Reviewed By: re-o-ko On: February 09, 2002 10:10 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
please contiue. you have a great story going. |
Reviewed By: mizu megami [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2002 08:03 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo you stoped why did you stop it was getting really interesting. i want to know if he meets bulma and if yamcha can kiss the weeding good bye. plz put up more ASAP. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: February 09, 2002 03:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good Firaga, but I'm getting impatient here. I want B/V to meet like 10 minutes ago. If ya don't make it happen soon I'll jump into your story and introduce them myself, even if it means getting Big Banged by Vegeta (ooohhh that sounds so good-hehe ~_^). Sorry-hentai mind working overtime. Write more soon. |
Reviewed By: Firaga [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2002 02:13 CST
Comment/Review:
i added a new fic, "A Complicated Love", but then I deleted it ten minutes after it was posted! I think I should put everything one at a time so I can update faster :) That's my next fic though, it's another A/U - but it's VERY different from this one. Anyway, enjoy! I'll put the next chap up shortly! :) |
Reviewed By: Kapies On: February 09, 2002 00:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fan fic. You need to write more, I rarly give all 10's to someone. But i like the way you are doing this Bulma Vagita Fic, usualy the ones that there in altrnet universes it terns out crappy but yours is realy good. |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2002 21:54 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, this is getting good. I can't wait to see how this little meeting is going to go. Great chapter! Waiting for the next.-JB |
Reviewed By: Susan On: February 08, 2002 10:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good chapter. I can't wait to see what happens when Veggie and the Princess meet. Poor Yamcha, he can't even get a break in the AU (hehe). Peace |
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