| "Love Yourself for Thyself" Reviews/Comments [ 306 ] |
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Reviewed By: crystalclearangel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2005 20:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey i loved your story i hope you write real soon. it was awesome. oh and please R&R my story moonlight eyes Oh my name is Nyah. I am 15 and i spend most of my time reading and reviewing lovely stories like yours. and did i say your story is very great. email me at krystalclearkiss@yahoo.com when you update thanks alot. please update real soon. lata
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Title: Bravo! All Hail The Big Girls!
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2005 20:09 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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DO NOT STOP WRITING. What you're doing is really important. You're bringing awareness of the feelings of larger girls/women. It's disgusting how polluted our minds are with the obsession of being thin. It's truly detrimental because it stops us from getting to know some really great people. In my most recent fic (it's a darker story) Inu mates with an african-american woman in the first chap. I'm about breaking barriers & stupid stereotypes. Stereotypes for the sake of a story is fine, but truly believeing in them (like racism, age, body image etc)...makes a person weak and pathetic. Bravo & i will definitely be reading this one.
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Reviewed By: Akihana [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2005 03:28 CDT
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I completely agree with you on the view of thinness in our society. I know that with my body structure I cannot get thin without risking medical problems. I have a friend who is bigger than I am and she is gorgeous. Also, people in public schools tend to mean. Kids can be very nasty, in general. I wonder if Kagome will see Inuyasha at the beach...
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Title: update soon pls
Reviewed By: inujunkie89 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2005 23:06 CDT
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i love ur story, i really connect with ur story. thought i dont think i could ever imagine kags fat or even slightly chubby... i dont want to, i sappose its just socitys effect on my mind. someone (real or not)who i have always thought was beautifu will forever be skinny in my mind. i like that u incorperated the whole "cutting" thing. cause few people realise that that is a common acurance (sp?) in people who r over weight. myself included. i really do like ur story and i hope u update soon. though i wanted to point something out to u, if u where trying to make this realistic, then inu wouldnt date her... its sad but true. he wouldnt date kikyo i dont think, but he wouldnt date her. no matter how beautiful she is on the inside. he might be her friend probably her best friend after a while, but not her boyfriend. humanity is cruel, and socity is fickel, but it will never change...
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Title: WOW!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: HanyouKagome962 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2005 20:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW this fic is definantly unique and though i myself am not over weight my closet friend is and some of my ither friends so i can sort of relate to what Kag is feeling i have to admit you got my eye tearing in the third chap. Anyways DO NOT leave me hanging and update REALLY soon (like tomorrow maybe) JA NE.
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Reviewed By: kagome15 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2005 12:41 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! y did u stop writing ^_^ please update ASAP!!! I LOVE IT so far
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