| "Love Yourself for Thyself" Reviews/Comments [ 306 ] |
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Reviewed By: Tyashaay14 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2005 19:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow I like your story alot...I do understand why you made Kagome like that...and I think it's going good so far...another thing is that I think that you may be going a bit fast with it...not that I'm complaining but it seems like your not enjoying the writing but posting them just to meet people's demands...I understand how that is...that's how I felt when I wrote ch5 and 6 of my story...but hey it's all good...I hope you update soon...good luck...luv Ty
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Reviewed By: Akihana (too lazy to log in) On: August 27, 2005 21:17 CDT
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Ninth wheel? Wow, that made me laugh. Yea, it sucks to be the one single person in a group of couples. Or in a room. Hey, love the story so far. Just update whenever you can, thats the stage I'm at right now.
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Reviewed By: Angel_4_life [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2005 14:38 CDT
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hey! what's up? I am so loving this story, its exciting when I get an email from you saying that you updated, do you know what i mean? anyways, about how much summer time has passed in the story? is it like august or something? anyways please update soon, i always look forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Inu Fan05 On: August 27, 2005 01:59 CDT
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glad to be of service. *bows* i will be heading to school 2morrow, but classes don't start till Sept. 6th. hopefully that will give me time to work on my story. *sigh* it still has a long way to go. anyway, on to the review. another great chappie. you are a gifted writer. keep up the great work. i look forward to the next chappie. good luck in school. till next time, bye!
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Title: Love Yourself for Thyself
Reviewed By: Dilanda Albata [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2005 21:12 CDT
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I jsut found your story and read it and think it's fantastic! It's sad though. I cannot believe anybody could be that cruel to a person, especially over something like SOMEONE ELSE's weight. It's just so horrible. I never had anybody say that to me when I was chubby and I hope you never have to put up with jerks like that either.
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Reviewed By: aznangelstarQT [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2005 20:31 CDT
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please update!!=)
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Reviewed By: crystalclearangel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2005 19:59 CDT
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Hey i loved the new chapter you wrote it's a very beautiful story i love it because i am just like that. i love your story so much well til the next review my friend. Your Friend, Nyah A*K*A Sweetie
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Reviewed By: dbzgurl_34(to tired to log in) On: August 26, 2005 02:28 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow this is a great story and i like it alot bein a chubby gurl too and that last chapter was so sad i cant believe inu said that. Poor kagome she must have felt sad cause i did.i hope u countine with this story cause i like i lot so update when every u can. Laterz 4now
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Title: I knew he liked her...
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2005 00:13 CDT
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I hate the fact that he had the power to stop it, but chose not to. But then again, that is very typical. Usually there is always this one person in a clique that isn't really down with the BS, but they're usually passive about it. Now you gotta wonder how much better the world would be if that one passive person spoke up when they needed to...Good job -make your chaps longer, I'm greedy!
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Reviewed By: Tamakia'gss On: August 25, 2005 21:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am really enjoying this story, I really am. It's very unique and well done...buuut...148 really isn't that big. I'm 5'2" and around 170 (I think...), and I never got teased in high school. But annnnyyywaaayyysss...I find it extremely unrealistic that she's the only overweight girl in her high school, but it does add dramatic flair to the story. I like the theme of this fic especially, and I hope you update it soon. ^_^ I'll be waiting...
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Reviewed By: aznangelstarQT [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2005 16:21 CDT
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Damn straight he should try to apologize gosh tellin her to fill her big tummy gosh u shuld NEVER IN A MILLION FUKING YEARS SAY THAT TO A GIRL so n-e way please update and lets see how he apologizes!!=p..lol
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Reviewed By: crystalclearangel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2005 15:57 CDT
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Hey thanks for your compliment. but i really am fat and ugly but i don't care what others think i think i am as beautiful as i think i am well chat with you lata please up date real soon. thanks again
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Reviewed By: Inu Fan05 On: August 25, 2005 15:54 CDT
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another great chapter. see, with that height and weight it all depends on how the girl is filled out. i have experienced the teasing like she has, but it was mainly from one person whom i once considered my friend. now we don't even see each other, which is probably for the best. i can't wait to see what happens between inuyasha and kagome. hope her love life turns out better then mine. *stupid overprotective brother* anyway, keep up the great work. i look foward to the next chapter. till then, bye!
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Title: nice
Reviewed By: flrsblue [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2005 00:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just came across your story today and i have to say it is definitely different from all the other storys i have read. i am enjoying your story very much and i do hope you continue on with this story till you complete it. so good luck and please updat again soon.
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Title: yes
Reviewed By: Phantomangel17 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2005 00:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yes this chapter made up for his stupid mouth(sp?) and i would love to see the girls not talk or ignor him for a while but its up to you and please update soon!!! this is the only stroy right now that is making me sit at my computer almos5t 24-7 waiting for an update so please write soon:)
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