| "Love Yourself for Thyself" Reviews/Comments [ 306 ] |
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Reviewed By: HanyouKagome962 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2005 16:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow Inu was a big jerk cant believe he would say that, but then again he has the tendency to speaks before he think so... Anyway cant wait to see what happens next so update soon.
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Reviewed By: Virgo On: August 22, 2005 15:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story. Write,write,write.
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Title: I'm so excited!!!
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2005 18:20 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Awww...Inu is trying to be sweet. I hope he doesn't ruin it with his "talk first, think never" attitude!
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Reviewed By: Max927 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2005 10:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story...like i say fat people neeed luv 2...but 148 pounds that aint that much....but w/e....i like the story keep goin wit it.
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Reviewed By: Angel 4 life (not signed in) On: August 21, 2005 09:11 CDT
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great chapter as always, well this is an interesting turn of events with the dinner and all. update soon!
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Reviewed By: Akihana [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2005 00:07 CDT
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You're much better at updating than I am. Well, Inuyasha has gotten nicer, ne? I just gotta say, some peopel are not meant to wear tube tops. I also want to hurt whoever invented it. That and bikinis. There are no problems with remaming decently covered. Grrr, anyways, venting done, so, update soon!
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Title: GREAT FIC!
Reviewed By: Kaosu_the_insane_kitsune_goddess On: August 20, 2005 20:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. I too can relate. While most of my teasing was in elementary school I've always been bigger and weighed more then others. I thank you for being different, and writing something like this. It's a beautiful story with a beautiful meaning behind it.
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Reviewed By: crystalclearangel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2005 14:29 CDT
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i know it will stay that way. i hope you update real soon. INRU (I'm Not Rushing U). thanks for the great story i would enjoy reading it over and over again.
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Reviewed By: crystalclearangel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2005 12:33 CDT
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hey your chapter are getting greater and greater and you update faster than anyone i know. well i hope you update real soon your is really wonderful and if you look at my author's note on both of my stories i have a list of stories that i'm reading. hope you like them
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Title: i can relate
Reviewed By: inuyashasgirl12 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2005 07:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can totally relate to this story because I'm a little overweight myself. I feel so bad for her and I'm glad that you made her overweight too because it's different and so real. Update soon! Peace!
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Reviewed By: Akihana [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2005 20:28 CDT
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Wow...Inuyasha was not nice... Man, getting turned down sucks. Especially when it takes a lot of courage to do it, and to have the guy say no to your face, and having his friends laughing at you...yea, not a pleasant experience. Besides, i think you only count as fat if you have to go to the pregnancy store or something. Besides, I know penty of people who arent thin but are still beautiful.
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Reviewed By: crystalclearangel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2005 17:37 CDT
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Hey i loved your new chapter it was really great i hope you update real soon and thanks for telling me
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Reviewed By: Angel_4_life [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2005 13:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aw poor kagome, an excellent chapter as always. I'm looking forward to your next chapter. I wonder when Inuyasha will show up again..... Excellent writing as always.
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Reviewed By: razorbladesinner [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2005 11:26 CDT
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That's so sad! Poor Kagome. I like your angle. There are proably a lot of girls who can totally relate to this story, I know I'm one of them! Keep up the great work, I can't wait to read more of your stuff.
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Title: wow...
Reviewed By: Angel_4_life [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2005 21:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is really different from your other stories. this is the most origianal alternate universe Inuyasha story I have ever read. wow you have such talent with writing emotions. I felt a tug at my heart while reading this. you make it able for others to feel kagome's pain. I want to know...is this really how big girls are treated at your school or city? Because if it is....wow im actually crying thinking about it. It hurts me so much to see bullying, any kind. im not overweight but one of my best friends is and she is so beautiful, she is very unique and creative and very popular as well. im glad i dont have to see it much. How can kids be so cruel to each other? horrible doesnt even begin to describe this kind of pain. okay im leaving this review here while I go and get a tissue. I dont want to start bawling at the computer or my parent will freak. excellent writing, im very moved. update really soon okay? now to find a tissue...
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