| "Love Yourself for Thyself" Reviews/Comments [ 306 ] |
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2007 12:31 CDT
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really great story... good job...
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Reviewed By: trackstr88 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2007 00:52 CDT
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i really tried finishing this story.. i really did.. i made it to chapter 24.. i like the concept and idea of this story a whole lot.. getting a story based on overweight people is very rare and i like the idea behind it.. but it's just slow.. and the sentences are choppy and the story doesn't seem to flow like it should.. it's almost as if you are just retelling an event that happened instead of presenting a story that a reader should engross themselves into.. you have/had a good idea of a great story.. i just wish it were written better..
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Reviewed By: Ms_Senstive [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2006 20:50 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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I am proud of you; you did something out the box. So many fanfics are alike. The only thing that I can think to say is that it was a tiny bit slow progress and I do not mean time. You had the great idea and you could have made it vary heart wrenching or shocking but that I did not feel any emotion while I was reading it. Try to get your readers more involved. That is my only suggesting XOX to you if you are felling down when you read this. That was not my intention
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Reviewed By: star555555528 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2006 21:06 CDT
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omg awesome. this story awmost describes my life. oh course i havent found my true love yet and i dont have any friends at school. but it was awesome.
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Title: wonderful
Reviewed By: Manga Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2006 20:36 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fan fic is so uplifting! It shows, and proves that beauty is marked by the person inside. Thank you for proving it to be true in this story. Your grateful fan, MG
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Title: chesterzerousygirl
Reviewed By: linkinpark-zerousy [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2005 20:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love it love it love it!!!! i just wish I could know what on earths gonna happen
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Reviewed By: aw!!!!!!!! On: October 30, 2005 18:24 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aww!@ kawaii! loved it!
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: Becca21 On: October 30, 2005 15:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I will have to start by saying that this is the best story that I have ever read!!!! This story made me laugh, cry, and most important it made me look at myself and realise that I am beautiful just the way I am. This story is sooo different from the rest because it talks about something that is a huge problem in today's society. Sadly most of us have learned to value the outside more than the inside. I have to say that I'm really lucky I was never picked on at school because of my weight, but sometimes what it's not said can hurt more than words. Congrats for making a story that so many people can relate to, including myself. I just wish that poeple would start to see a person based on their personality and not how they look physically. once again GREAT STORY!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: InuYoukai24 (Not Signed In) On: October 30, 2005 12:12 CST
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Aw, this would make such a kawaii book!! Change the names, duuuuuuh, lol, and add more descriptive details, and it will be such a hit!
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Title: YAH!
Reviewed By: LadyWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2005 23:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Love the way it tured out! More people will love them selfs for who they are now... Thank u for such a sweet story^_^ LadyWolf
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Title: Thanks for the great time!
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2005 19:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
Very cute story & I'm sorry to see it end! WOOT!
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Title: The End
Reviewed By: duranrox [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2005 18:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was such a GREAT story. And it was a good way to end also. I think you should turn it into a book...with different names and such. Its great. It don't know what else to say. Hopefully, you get my point. I loved the story!
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Title: Oh YEAH!
Reviewed By: aznangelstarQT [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2005 17:13 CDT
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please update da story is almost ova oh yeah its almost time for da one-shot oh yeah lol well update!
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Reviewed By: Angel_4_life (NSI) On: October 27, 2005 14:20 CDT
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aw how nice they finally got married! cant wait for the epilogue
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Reviewed By: Princess-in-Training On: October 27, 2005 00:09 CDT
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Ahhh I love happy endings. That's probably why I have every disney movie ever made. Just a thought! Ha ha ha! Loved the story. I'm not a girl that fits in a size 2 to either.
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