| "A Dragon's Possession" Reviews/Comments [ 160 ] |
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Reviewed By: Devilchild-Kuroko On: September 03, 2005 11:35 EDT
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HOLY FUCKIN SHIT!!!!!!!! that was fucking awesome your really really fucking great!!! Hell i was getting aroused just reading it!! You really write some great shit! Devilchild
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Reviewed By: shatter the sky comes quietly On: September 03, 2005 01:00 EDT
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This isn't really a PWP, at least I don't think so. It's good, I'd love to see it expanded on.
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Reviewed By: dangerangel On: September 02, 2005 22:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must say I was surprisingly pleased to find the beggining of a good plot. It was much more developed and explained than most "smut" that I have come across. And while the basic of the story was all about the sex, I was very relieved to see that you kept in mind the characters backgound, thus the Shikon No Tama, and the characters personalities, Hiei's extreme possesiveness. Thank you for writing this, and while I understand if you wish not to continue this, I believe that this could become a very good story, instead of just an excelent one-shot.
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Title: DAMN!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: kira_demon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2005 18:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You gotta write more like this girl, cause DAMN that's some GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD shit!!!!! plz write more like this*puppy pout and big watery eyes* Huggels and kissen...... Kira_demon
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Reviewed By: Crazy Mishka [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2005 17:33 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I adore your fics! Absolutely! But I was so dissapointed that this is only a one shot! OMG it needs like an epilogue or something it was soooo good! But meh, that takes time off your updates and new one shots- which I enjoy very much- so I'll just say that you did an incredibly fantastic job and that I shouldn't be surprised I enjoyed it so much (though I've encountered my pet peeve; KAgome being hesitant and scared then all of a sudden changing her mind because she's overwhelmed by lust or subconcious trust...fickle authors). XP. But I enjoyed this anyway. SO keep on writing!
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Title: A Dragon's Possession
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2005 17:32 EDT
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: Forbidden Female Flare (not logged in) On: September 02, 2005 12:28 EDT
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awwww come on you left this open to too many oppertunies!!! you have to continue.....4 out of 4 reveiws agree which is just like saying 400 out of 400 reveiws agree.... so please continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: red_dragon46815 On: September 02, 2005 04:47 EDT
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This would be an great one to see continued if not the part where Hiei has to deal with the Spirt world Lord that would be intresting
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Reviewed By: Yume Tsuki On: September 01, 2005 03:25 EDT
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This one-shot was great but as a continuation it would be better. You've left yourself the perfect opportunity and I hope you take it. Ja!
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Reviewed By: VB On: September 01, 2005 02:32 EDT
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Aww can't we get a continuation to this one shot. Pwease?? Hot just the way I like em.
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