| "A Dragon's Possession" Reviews/Comments [ 160 ] |
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Reviewed By: Jenn_@))* On: November 26, 2010 11:59 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very good story and it's sad that its not being updated. I would love to see it finished. It moves just fast enough to keep the reader interested but not so fast that it becomes all about the fight or the sex. You get to see the relationship develop, which is not very common in fanfiction. Over all it is n excellent story and it would be a shame to leave it as it is. I hope you resume updating it as it worth the time being put into it. |
Reviewed By: jesswolf22 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2009 21:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
plz update
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Reviewed By: Kazeli [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2009 11:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very well written. spelling excelent. orignality excelent, i enjoyed it very much, spelling excelent. The story flows wonderfuly. This is very well put together. Things are not spaztic or eratic with tons of rabic plot bunnies. I've gotten used to seeing faster and heady pairing when it come to hiei, this is a refreshing change of pace and i like it. this is a overall review of the entire story up to date.
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Title: chap 1
Reviewed By: Kazeli [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2009 20:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
A wonderfull read for chapter one. Kept me on the edge of my seat. I felt like I was on the sidline watching. Great job I defintly look forward to this story continuing. i liked your style of writing. spelling was perfect. Grammer, wel not not the best person to judge that. The story is not one i have seen done before so i feel this is defintly original.
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2009 09:23 EST
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i love this story and hope to read more soon
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2008 08:51 EDT
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this is a great story so far, please update it soon
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Reviewed By: inufan625 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2008 05:53 EDT
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This piece has been nominated at the Feudal Association! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, and currently owned by authors, InuGrrrl and Inufan625, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our official website can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/ The current nominations pages are here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedfics.html (Fiction) http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedart.html (Fanart) Check them out to see what you were nominated for! Our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Voting is open from June 18th 2008 through July 1st 2008 (12 am). Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~ InuGrrrl & Inufan625 Owners/Administrators of the Feudal Association ***Please Note: You may receive this notice more than once if you've been nominated for several awards. They will appear as reviews on your nominated works.
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Reviewed By: NIGHTSCREAM [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2008 01:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful Fic! I just rediscovered you through DeviantArt. I just re-read it and I can't wait for more. Hopefully you will be able to find the time to update at some point. Thanks for writing such fun fics!
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Title: A Dragon's Possession
Reviewed By: Scarlet Butterfly On: March 27, 2008 04:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another awesome story not that that's surprising. Very interesting on how all this is turning out. I was pleasantly surprised when the typical rash outburst that you usually read/see from InuYasha, Kouga, and even Yusuke didn't happen and that they actually stopped to think. I love the bluntness of Hiei and InuYasha, absolutely hilarious. Koenma took things better than I thought he would too and I like how you have Kazuma portrayed as well, not like the big idiot most have him be. Can't wait till you update this one too.
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Title: Kara
Reviewed By: Karasunaki17 On: March 20, 2008 08:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please don't give up on this awesome story. I really enjoyed it. It's been a while since you updated it, but I hope that you'll finish it soon.
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Reviewed By: sesshomari [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2008 23:06 EST
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Nice story! It's been a while simce you updated, hopefully you'll start up again. Anyways I like it, and I wonder what happens next. ~!*sesshomari*!~
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Reviewed By: Chrystal-Hearts [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2008 16:20 EST
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Love the story and hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: Chrystal-Hearts [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2008 14:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the story, can't wait for you to update!!!!!
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Reviewed By: vampirekagomejc [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2007 15:43 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Title: And it was just getting good...
Reviewed By: Pretty in Pink [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2007 20:13 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aw, that's it? Poo, and it was just getting good. I like your kinda "mysterious" style. You don't come out and say what's going on and what everyone's feeling and such, but you describe it very well and make it more real, I guess is what I'm trying to say. It flows well. Hehe, I can't exactly put it into words, but your style strikes me. I love it! I feel like even in this situation, you've kept everyone in character, especially Hiei. It seems like a difficult plot to pull off, but you do it well. A few typos here and there, but overall near flawless. Which is what I like to see. I love Hiei's characterization in this. Protective and possessive. He's even starting to take Kagome's feelings into consideration, which I think is a big step towards an actual loving relationship, you know what I mean? I mean, right now they're just pretty much "stuck" together. But I can see the progression towards something more. But it's not going too fast. Which is also good. All in all, loved it and I'm looking forward to the next installment.
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