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| "A Dragon's Possession" Reviews/Comments [ 160 ] | | Pages (11): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 › » ] | Reviewed By: HentaiVixen [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2007 14:40 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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up date please and soon!!!!! i loved it so far will there be more lemons?!
| Reviewed By: Crystal_Flame [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2007 02:45 EDT
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Glad you finally updated!! Cant wait for more!
| Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2007 22:03 EDT
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That was definitely a nice addition to the story. I love it that Kouga knew about the Dragon -- HA! And he was much more mature about things, too. That was a nice change. And Inuyasha's way of explaining things sounded just right -- for him. LOL!! So, here's a question: why has Inuyasha never "gone into season?" Because he's a hanyou? What about Kouga? Since they've know kagome for years, it seems like one of them would have actively claimed her, if that were the case. I have to confess, I'm not looking forward to Kagome puking a lot. LOL!! That was an interesting tidbit Sango told her about an unmated pregnant female drawing male youkai to get rid of future competition. So, there IS a drawback to them waiting. And I forgot to comment on the fact that Kurama forgot to say anything to Hiei about it possibly going easier for them in the Reikai if they didn't mate. Then again, that was before they found out she was pregnant. I guess now they're both dead anyway. LOL!! So, DID Kagome send Inuyasha to let her family know what was happening? I'd have second thoughts about that if I were her after the way he told Kouga. LOL!! I know you've got a lot on your plate, with all the challenges you take on and all, and I'll be looking forward to more of the "Night of a Blood Red Moon," too, but I have to confess, you've really whipped up my appetite for THIS story again. So, I hope you'll be able to write more for it, too. It's nice to have something that's not quite so dark and angsty when I'm stalling on my own work. Heh heh! And I just love the set-up for them in this one. I'm looking forward to the cave sex! Heh heh! Great work on the revisions!!
| Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2007 21:28 EDT
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chapter eight was just as good as the others. I love the expanded coverage you gave shizuru's examination, and the slightly bigger look at her situation with Kurama. It fills out the story nicely. I also like the way you had Hiei try to define Kagome and Shippou's relationship as more of a brother/sister thing. And Kagome is already getting pretty good at picking up on Hiei's moods. So, is he going to decide he loves it here in the past with her? It just might be the little hybrid's idea of paradise. Heh heh!
| Reviewed By: Natsumi Tsuchi-Ookami [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2007 19:38 EDT
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An Update!!! I really liked this chapter! Kouga got to come in and we learned a little bit about what is in storefor Kag's pregnancy. Please update again soon!
| Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2007 19:37 EDT
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Just finished chapter seven. Nice. Lots of stuff going on. I'm glad Kagome confronted hiei about his intentions, especially in light of his teasing comments, but I can't believe she just accepted it. A courtship period until he sees if she survives the birth? WTF? LOL!! I wouldn't think she particularly WANTED him to be planning on making her his mate at this point, and making it conditional on her SURVIVAL? That's not the kind of relationship Kagome would want. I could see her agreeing to the courtship to see if they were compatible outside of the bedroom. (Obviously they're compatible THERE. LOL!!) And Inuyasha sure did accept it awfully easily. That definitely makes his feelings for her seem shallow. Hmmm. And yet if she survives, but the baby doesn't, then everything's up in the air? Niiiiicce. (Yes, that was heavy with sarcasm.) Now, we all know that 9 months should be more than enough time for the two of them to fall in love, but, THEY don't know that. LOL!! And, if the dragon is the real problem, not the baby, then Inuyasha is out of the picture no matter what, right? Along with every other male on the planet. So, unless the baby survives, she's going to end up alone. SO unfair!! And I take it there is a darker, hidden motive behind what the dragon did when it bonded with her, that is going to play a role in this later. Way to keep me on the edge of my seat. Interesting that Sango is going to send Kirara with her. Won't she miss her faithful companion in battle since she usually flies around and attacks from the air a lot? HAS Inuyasha given up? You know, they can send him to her time for some supplies. I'd have him send her Mom to get "What to Expect When You're Expecting." That'll give her something to read while she's in "isolation." LOL!! This is just so good! Hope we've got some more Hiei/Kag steaminess coming up. She's already pregnant, she's already given Inu the heave-ho, so why not? LOL!!
| Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2007 17:37 EDT
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Shoot! Forgot to comment on the way you've brought up Kurama's plans for Shizuru. And if the Reikai is so against the conception of hanyous, then what about Yusuke and Keiko? It seems to me that this really is a situation they were all going to have to face eventually.
| Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2007 17:34 EDT
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Chapter four was chock-full of interesting details. So, Koenma fully expected Hiei to deflower the miko. I can't believe Yusuke didn't yell at him for that. I don't think Hiei would be too happy to find that out, either, even if the whole situation with the dragon had not occured. AND Koenma seemed to know and understand what it meant for the dragon to chhose her to bond with. Another interesting tidbit. And Kurama wants to tell Hiei that things may go easier for them as long as he doesn't mate with her. That will definitely make his decision to do so, (when he does, of course, -- at least I've gotta hope!), very significant and meaningful. I really can't wait to find out if she's pregnant or not. And you are keeping me from working on my story's next chapter, you know. But, I'm not complaining! LOL!!
| Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2007 17:06 EDT
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Up to the revised chapter three now. How very interesting that he stopped at Mukuro's BEFORE trying the well. Seems that the longer they stay in the Makai, the more time Koenma or Enma have to start sending people after them. And I am kind of wondering why gpomg to the past would only be a temoporary solution -- couldn't it last 500 years? LOL!! And he has picked up on her thoughts about inuyasha and her friendss, but we haven't seen what his thoughts are about her having a relationship with another male. Hmmm. I can't wait to see how THAT goes. So, if she's pregnant, he is planning to make her his mate for sure. And if she isn't, he's still thinking about it. What could be better? I can't wait to see how their relationship evolves. Already he has pledged his protection and feels possessive. And she already trusts him and feels secure with him. Yep. It's a destined relationship. And I love it!
| Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2007 16:34 EDT
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Chapter two is excellent! I love the way the whole team tried to work out what to do about the possible situation. And Hiei is already considering taking her as his mate -- gotta love that! Your explanation of her mind's defenses being weak because of Tsubaki were brilliant, and the way he was able to help her was a nice touch. Yes, they may have come together out of passion and heat and pheromones, but the dragon immediately recognized her as the one for his Master, and their reactions to each other indicate their yin and yang were destined to meet. I loved the detail about Hiei's sense of smell not being good enough because he's elemental, not animal -- I've always thought that should be the case myself. And I loved the insight into Kuwabara and Yukina's relationship. I think it's great that they've mamaged to keep it under wraps just how close they've become. This is just TOO good, and I can't wait to read the other chapters up to the new one!!!
| Reviewed By: MarieC On: May 18, 2007 16:11 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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plz continue
| Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2007 15:41 EDT
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Yowza!! Fabulous revision on this first chapter! I loved it the first time, and I love it just as much, maybe more now. You definitely gave the whole encounter a different feel simply by adding that pheromone he was giving off as part of his cycle. It made Kagome a much more willing and active participant. I believe you played up his thoughts more, too, didn't you? And just the one statement, that one night wasn't going to be enough, really set the stage for lots more goodness!! You know, I think I only ever saw the one-shot before, so all the rest of this is going to be new for me, and I can't wait!!! Is it my birthday? I feel like it is!! Thanks so much for working on this one -- it's going to be a real treat for me for the next little while as I sit and read. Yay!!
| Reviewed By: TKDNikkiP [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2007 19:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I remember first reading this story when you had it as just one chapter and I really wanted you to finish it... but now I want you to finish it even more so. Keep writing please Nikki
| Reviewed By: Stebba On: April 12, 2007 14:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story it's funny and i can't wait to read more. please please please more chapters.
| Title: PLEASE
Reviewed By: Vampire Kitty On: January 08, 2007 17:12 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE CONTINUE THIS STORY!!!! I realy enjoy it.
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