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| "Diplomatic Relations" Reviews/Comments [ 157 ] | | Pages (11): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 › » ] | Reviewed By: Mitaretai On: March 24, 2007 22:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I feel cheap giving this a 10 in ever area, but I feel this chapter deserves it. I've read DR before, but I'm re-reading it. I can't begin to tell you how much I enjoy it, and how perfectly, PERFECTLY, well you portray Lee, who I'm utterly obsessed with. To sum it up, I love everything about this story, and it's my ultimate favorite story that I think I'll ever read. Wow, that seems intense.. but it's true. ^^ I can only dream that you'll.. maybe.. write another LeeGaara story, because I've read all the ones that you've put up. ._. Meep. I loves them..
| Title: diplomatic relations
Reviewed By: rush_of_hapiness On: December 29, 2006 19:05 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dear writer, you have absolutely corrupted me. I will never see Lee the same way. I have fallen in love with Gaara and Lee as a couple, and I have recommended your fic to my friends. I am Spanish, but I know enough English to perceive the beauty of your writting. I have loved the plot, suffered with Gaara and Lee and reached and emotional extasis when they got together. The most wonderful thing was I could reocognize the characters. They were the Gaara and the Lee from Naruro and their evolution towards their mutual feelings was a natural one. Being a little pervert myself my only complain was that I would like more lemon scenes, but it is a selfish wish and, as reader, I understand the plot has got its own tempo and you can not rush things. As I have said it is only a selfish whish. Please, keep on writing, the net needs writers as you, and I looking forward to reed more of your works. And of course I encourage you to write more of this wonderful pair. GAMBATE YO!!! PD. please, excuse my grammar mistakes. I can read English better than I can write it.
| Title: OMG
Reviewed By: B6L6U6E On: October 06, 2006 20:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE YOU! That was the greatest story ever! I'm going to read the sequal now!^^
| Reviewed By: amiko 16 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2006 20:34 EDT
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Awww it's over ;_; But enjoyed the ride ^____^ Kept laughing myself sick over the last chappie
| Reviewed By: _ On: October 02, 2006 20:25 EDT
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So, the million dollar question. Does Lee fight better drunk or asleep? Sorry, sorry, just had to ask. Maybe if I'm lucky there will be a sidefic about Lee sleep-fighting. The one about him fighting drunk was hilarious. Like the fic, going to read the next chapter now, bye!
| Reviewed By: amiko 16 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2006 16:45 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
//Temari was going to kill him slowly with a rusted spoon.\\ WAHAHAHA I laughed a lot during that chapter, but that line had to be my fave XD RAHHH I can't believe you have me hooked on another fic x__x At least this one's finished, so I don't wither away waiting for chapters XDD Whee~ *runs to read more*
| Reviewed By: Yashe On: September 22, 2006 19:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GOD! Is the name of this fic in my head. It was amazing how you captured personalities. Especially Gaara's (It's a bit of a challenge you know?) Anyways, you have a unique writing style that makes you REALLY lose yourself in the story. I caught myself not hearing the music blazing from the stereo a few times. As well as seeing the images and scenes in my head. Only one thing I could have thought better, was the ending. I love stories with a great ending, BUT (always a big butt) this one could have been better. (Sorry for the criticism.) Otherwise it was good, getting personalities down to a pat and having unique and inspiring ideas. Keep up the great writing and oh one question...Kindred? Where is it? (You: thinking I am sped because it is in front of me.) Please tell me I'm not going nuts and you wrote it? Anyway, have fun with your writing and know...someone out there reads your masterpieces. -Yashe
| Reviewed By: OneWingedAngel (i know, unoriginal but still what can i do) On: August 01, 2006 01:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS!! i never once thought of Gaara and Lee and when i was first told about it i was like "HUH!? WTF!?" but now that i've read some of it i've never loved a fanfic more. it's the BEST and i laughed my ass off
| Title: Fangz of Fire @ Fanfiction.net
Reviewed By: KB On: July 21, 2006 00:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
While typically I am not a big GaaLee fan, reading the first half of this story has made me really appreciate the pairing. Also, I was wondering if I could ask you a sort of important question...you must get a lot of pressure to write more smut...well, maybe not as bad as some yuri writers (guys can be real perverts ~~; ) but I'm sure pressure has to be there from a few reviewers. I'd like to know, how do you deal with it? I hate having to fit smut in where I don't want it to be, but I'm afraid of losing my fans--a lot of them are really nice, but I'm not sure if it's the promise of girlxgirl action that keeps them there. Any help would be appreciated...my email should be on my FF.net profile. Great story, and thanks in advance! PS: I got linked to this story from dA's club, "LeexStapler". I can't wait to read to the part that's involved in, so I can see what the hell happens. XD
| Reviewed By: Annoymous On: July 15, 2006 22:50 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was just re-reading this a bit, and after reading both this and Kindred realized that when you described Gaara and the hawks ( The doves and pigeons still went crazy if he got too close, but the predators let him feed them now, and the bolder ones even took the meat from his fingers and let him handle them.) that it was a perfect description of the village (the civilians still freak out, but the shinobi tolerate him much better, and frankly you couldn't get much bolder than Lee). I just love reading your stories (and re-reading them, I always mangage to catch something new, some foreshadowing or character analysis that you've grafted to your amazing complex and real storylines. Not just Naruto, either, I still LOVE your Gundam Wing stories (espcially the ones with Wufei.
| Reviewed By: Reimuu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2006 09:48 EDT
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i'm pretty new to this fandom, but hell... i never thought anyone would be able to make gaara/lee believable, let alone hot *_* i havent been this drawn to a fic since i can't remember when- i stayed up until like 3am reading this morning, hehe 9_9. i love how the sand and the goard (damn, i hope i spelt that right >_>) are almost portrayed as as independent characters, and gaara, lee, kankuro and kakashi's characterisations in particular were awesomely done. the lack of spoilers was a bonus for me too =D thankyou for the lovely read! ^_^ *goes to read the sequel*
| Reviewed By: Rahido On: June 14, 2006 21:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn! Hot damn! I swear this fic is just so in character...it's just, I mean... well... I don't really know what it is about this fic exsactly but I think it has alot to do with the fact that you made the characters amazingly in character... I mean others manage to make it convinsing or play off the fact that, yes they may be a little differant, but you just take their personalities and run with them... you manage to bring a whole new level to their personalities while still managing to keep them... well them. Also I have to congratulate you on kankouro... I mean I liked him before but now... now I really want to read more fics focused on him. Also I kinda think I would like to exsplore the kaka/kanko fandom now... if their is one, and I would like to beg you please write more, mabey about sasuke/naruto, or just kankouro... I really like your characterization of them, it's very beleavible. Ehem,*embarrased* I would like to opplogise for my bad spelling... I'm really tired right now...well I guess I'll just say that I really love this story and would seriously appreciate more fanfics from you. I plan on looking at your other works as well so exspect more reviews from me... From your fan Rahido
| Reviewed By: remiwash On: May 04, 2006 18:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You seem to be very aware of the words you use and how to stay in character. Also I noticed, whether it is intentional or not, that you always capitalize the word "sand" when Gaara is talking about it, even if it is in the middle of a sentence. It makes it seems like this very special entity. I'm gonna keep track of you on livejournal. I love the way you write Naruto and keep the story and characters so believable. I would never have considered this as a pairing and yet you make it work wonders. I haven't read any others like it. Great job.
| Reviewed By: phoenixmagefire On: April 25, 2006 11:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you soooooo much for giving me a fic to look forward to each week.
| Title: Keep them coming!
Reviewed By: Georgiea1 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2006 17:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a great story! All of your Naruto ones are (I may try the other series though I don't watch GW). Lately I've been having a hard time finding any stories I enjoyed - then I came across yours. They are great! I have really enjoyed reading them as I find they are well written, entertaining and you give no indication that you will abandon them anytime soon. Keep them coming - if you write them I will read them. Thanks for the many hours of entertainment.
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