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| "Diplomatic Relations" Reviews/Comments [ 157 ] | | Pages (11): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 › » ] | Title: "Diplomatic Relations"
Reviewed By: Setsu On: April 23, 2006 16:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Cries* Noooooooooooooooooo its over Waaaaaaa! I reeeeaaaallllllllyyy enjoyed and loved your story. And will so be reading Kindred as soon as I finish typing this. In fact I might even reread this story a few more times. ^.^ I've read it at least a geed 5 times just cause its that good, well I think it is. Also I hope you write out the fight sceen between Sound and Sand soon! >.< Oooh I can just picture some of the fight sceens...sooo cool.... Naruto the envoy? Ooooh boy. Well Ja till you're next story, which I hope to be reading soon.
| Reviewed By: Morro On: April 20, 2006 23:12 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*SOB!* you are so cruel to me!! UPDATE DAMN YOU!!! Your killin me!!! Hurry up!!! I want More!!! ^_^
| Reviewed By: malcious_lufoy On: April 15, 2006 17:08 EDT
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Oh, I LOVE Kankuro's reaction to this, it made me laugh the whole way through ^^ I like the side stories you have, it gives a good perspective of what other people think.
| Reviewed By: Goddess of Night(not logged in) On: April 07, 2006 01:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I believe this review is WAY overdue! I've been reading this for a few weeks, and IMPATIENTLY awaited your last couple updates, and might I add---I FREAKING LOVE IT!!! The characters were VERY in character (as much as they could be), which is a good thing. When I first saw this story, and noted that it was a Gaara and Lee paring I started CRACKING THE FUCK UP!!! I was like, "Holy SHIT what is this author THINKING!!" At the time I thought Lee was a loser anyway, but I gave it a chance (mainly 'cause Gaara was a main character) and BOY am I glad I DID!! You are SUCH a good author, I got so into the story! And now, thanks to you, Lee is one of my favorite Naruto characters! He's so funny! I'm just sad this is ending... But it was WORTH the hours I spent reading this fic. Good job. VERY GOOD JOB!!! *claps* I mean, I don't think I've enjoyed a story, much less a FAN FIC, like I have with this one in SUCH a long time, and I thank you for that!! You totally made my horrible day much better!! I am looking forward to reading all (Naruto) your other work! I think you will do very well in the writing world! Much love.
| Reviewed By: littleolmee [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2006 22:53 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*littleolmee crawls back up into her seat to write review from where she fell while laughing* LOL! first i'm so glad i found you here on m.m, your story is very well done; everything from your writing style, grammar, the characters, to the story line its' self. i have to thank you for these little side stories you've added on they are so entertaining. you've had me rolling through most of the chapter; lord of eyebrows (LOL) and kakashi's reactions were just so great, very in character i believe. sorry to see you are coming to the end of this story but, glad to hear you will start another gaara/lee story. thanks for sharing your wonderful story with all of us, take care.
| Reviewed By: Yuurimaoh [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2006 14:55 EDT
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*stumbles in a little late* Sorry I'm so late! T.T I was stuck babysitting my niece and random cousins during their spring break. In the previous chapter 23 (methinks)- Holy.Cosmos.Above. From the moment Lee turned around and Gaara appeared before him so suddenly, I started to feel as if I was right there! O.O I kid you not, I felt like I was right there with Lee and Gaara just watching them argue and talk. I nearly fainted half-way through the chapter! It was so very, very intense. The only way I managed to read it through to the end (mind you, I read most if it with my hand covering my eyes and peeking through my fingers...maybe I was seeing everything through the point of view of some of the cactus pieces around Gaara's feet or something ^^; ) was the fact that I could never ever stop reading a chapter halfway through. I always, always finish up a chapter completely before I stop reading, even in books. Anyway, back to the chapter... "If you say no, you can run off. You will go straight home, and you will not move from there. When I come back for you later, you had better not say no." --LOL! That line got to me it did! Woo... What was left of Lee's reason chose this moment to remind him that there was going to be a tally for this wild crazy thing they were doing, and Gaara might remember events a bit differently unless Lee made it very, very clear he was participating of his full free will. He should- should reassure his lover that- huh! Ah! "Harder!" he shouted. --*goes into a laughing fit* Holy Hera, I thought that part was bloody hillarious. And in the middle of something so serious, I had burst out laughing. XD In chapter 24- "If you want to leave, then you have to do it now. Do it quickly. Leave Suna tonight and don't let me see you go." --*tears gush down face* Aww... " I may not be a good diplomat, but I am good at fighting, and I'm going to fight this. Tooth and nail." --Darn straight! Woo! Go Lee!! ><
"I'm not staying here a minute more than I have to. That woman," Gaara added neutrally, "I would hate to have her as an enemy." --ROFLMAO!!! "If I did not have Suna to take care of, she could have made me her personal lapdog for the rest of my natural lifespan, and I would have been happy to oblige as long as we were together. I've had to pay in blood and pain for everything good in my life; so have you. What she wants from us is insignificant in comparison to what we'll gain. Don't you agree?" --*tears gush down face* Awwwwww....;.; In side story a family reunion- Before-last part of DR: another sidestory, fairly short. The epilogue to the story should be out in 2-3 weeks. But I should be posting a new GaaraLee story here very soon, maybe next weekend, and I'm slowly working on some more ANBU as well. --YES!!!!!! I LOVE YOU!! T.T I was going to poke you incesantly until you wrote more in ANBU! And now I hear that you're posting a new GaaraLee story! XD Yippee!!! You've just made my day...hell, you've made my WEEK! "So, did it go okay?" he drawled, straightening up and putting his hands in his pockets. "Yes," Gaara answered shortly, almost murderously. --Hahahhaha! In a manner of speaking! XD "We're going to see Gai-sensei," Lee said, giving Kankuro a quick glance over his shoulder. --O.O!!!! Be brave, you two! Be brave! ><
"Gai-sensei," Lee interrupted his teacher's magnificent and loud greeting mid-stream, in a tense voice that brought Kankuro's attention back to him. "I'm sorry, we can't stay very long." Thank god, Kankuro thought, seeing a light of hope in the darkness. --*fits of bubbling laughter* God, I love this chapter!! "Um, something like that. Gai-sensei, there's no easy way- I have to tell you- I'm gay!" Lee blurted out. --*dies laughing* there's no easy way--I have to tell you--I'm gay! LOL!!! I pictured it perfectly!!! *smothers Lee in hugs* Kakashi lifted his head from his book, looked at Gaara and then glanced over at Kankuro. "I'm a bit surprised now," he offered helpfully. --HA HAHAHHA | Title: ::Laughs::
Reviewed By: Silver Rain [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2006 20:12 EDT
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WONDERFUL! Gai is awesome like that! >w< I can so see Kakashi being all cool until Gaara's all, "yup...." ....That prolly didn't make much sense, but WONDERUFL WRITING ANYWAYS! ::clings::
| Reviewed By: Sakiku (too lazy to log in) On: April 02, 2006 14:15 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I laughed myself sick with that chapter. Your portrayal of Kankuro and his opinions are hillarious. Excellent chapter! ~Sakiku~
| Reviewed By: EscagirlUK [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2006 12:46 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
::snigger:: Poor Kankuro... Oh, I was wondering, is that GaaLee fic where Lee gets drunk and propositions Gaara and breaks walls and stuff like a kinda sequel to this fic? 'Cause I think it'd fit in perfectly with the DR universe! Anyways, love the fic so far. Hope there's gonna be a sequel!
| Title: NOOOOOOOOO
Reviewed By: Sangochan56 On: March 29, 2006 00:43 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
B-b-b-b-but you can't end it noooowwww T~~~~~~~~~~~T....... this fic is too wonderful to end!!!! I'm always waiting for you to update!!!! I don't know what I'll do without this fic T________________T please don't end it soon... I know stories come to an end at some point but i'm enjoying yours too much to have you end it! Anyway, thank for even looking at my comment...
| Title: Heck yes!!
Reviewed By: Silver Rain [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2006 19:28 EST
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HOCRAP! This chapter made me laugh! I can so see Kankuro getting to Konoha, and Gaara's all, "We go back now." And Kankuro'll be all, "HELL NO! I JUST GOT HERE! ::dies/wails::" LOLZ! But, this made everything seem so much more realistic! I can so see Tsunade making Gaara her lil' bitch all for Lee! HOW KEWT! Lee must know that Gaara really does love him for bending to SOMEONE else's will! LOLZ!!!
| Reviewed By: dip On: March 25, 2006 17:05 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm sorry but i have read this one and the other naruto fic's you've written and i worship the ground you walk on lol! honestly, this fic is so good, everything about it. the characters are in character and i just love how the relationship slowly builds. a year or so and then this happends where as in other fic's it's just out of the blue or rushed. I also love how realistic all the characters act. it took me off and on 3 days to finish and i was sooooooo put off where you left chapter 24 off at >3 but i'm patient.... sort of =\ just don't leave this awesome fic unfinished like allot of people tend to do =| and again, this fic was such a joy to read as well as your others, i just wish there were more writers as good as you around... then i wouldn't have to turn up rocks and stones looking for such wonderfull fandom =3 laters! and keep writing dammit >P
| Title: Diplomatic Relations
Reviewed By: Shiko On: March 24, 2006 20:20 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is soooooo cool! So who was it that Gaara blasted out in the desert? The one's he killed? Will the enemy find out about Gaara's relationship with Lee? And if so will Ororichimaru (sp?) try to take advantage of it by setting a mock occurrence or occurrences or something that will have Lee investigate, or just kick so much ninja butt that he'll tire him self out, and ultimately fall into some kind of trap? OH!!! Lee can't mold chakra that well and do Jutsu's and stuff right? So if he was hit with an illusion jutsu or a sleep one during a fight would he be able to fight it off? Ok so like over a year has passed right or has it been more than? ^.^ Here's a silly thought! What about Lee's birthday? ^.^' I don't think celebrating Gaara's would be a good idea eh heh... And what ever happened to the Akistuki (sp?) are they still around?
| Title: "Diplomatic Relations"
Reviewed By: Setsu On: March 22, 2006 16:37 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok seriously? You so Rock! I love this fic more and more with each chapter. How you keep the characters in a believable as in-character as possible I don't know. And did I mention how I love your fighting scenes and how you don't make Lee look completely week and stupid around Gaara? Kudos' to you! Really. And on a side note ^.^ I so want to see how you would have Lee and Gaara respond to either 1) Lee getting drunk some how, as it can only take a sip to get him plastered, or 2) Having someone hit on or make a proposition to Lee, by either mall or female and just cause I would love to see how you play out their reactions especially Gaara's. Would he really understand what's going on? Again I love this fic and the way you write and am looking forward to the next chap. Sad to hear its almost over. Ja till next chap!
| Reviewed By: Yui_alexandra On: March 21, 2006 15:19 EST
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it's a little funny byt right now, while I read this chapter (and is writing this) outside my window is a completly different storm, in stead of a sand storm, its a snow storm... great chapter, as usual. must say that I liked the story a lot from the beginning, and after a little while I began loving it, right now it's even more than love... wish you good luck with the writing. hope to hear from you soon. love Yui (^_^)V ps. I really, really like the progress of this story,
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