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Reviewed By: junsei On: January 17, 2006 19:11 EST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: please update more! pwease!
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Reviewed By: jazzyca [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2006 18:05 EST Comment/Review: keep writing more! For once I'm in the mood for drama. good job
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Reviewed By: inukag fan On: January 17, 2006 17:05 EST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Okay...... wow. That is definantly the hardest break up i hav ever seen in my entire life. I'm also thinkin about cuttin inuyaha's head off!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I hope kagome will beat his ass wit her miko powers
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Reviewed By: SessKaglovur [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2006 16:58 EST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: It's getting really good! Lots of drama going on, I really like that! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583~NSI On: January 17, 2006 13:31 EST Comment/Review: ........................................................................... ........................................................................... .......................................O_o....... ano....wow? oh. my. god? talk about one of the roughest break ups i think i've ever read! that was so left field that it hit like a mac truck!!!!! holy hell, woman, you trying to kill us? talk about angst! i mean, they were so well, and i can understand if he's afraid, but damn, twist the knife a little harder inuyasha and you might see daylight through that chest! i'm in tears over here! poor kagome! that's far worse then 'i'm leaving you for some dead miko'. i couldn't believe he said he mistakingly fucked her! i can't belive that left his mouth!!! once again, if i had been kagome, he probably would be in the ER...or a body bag at this point. holy shit. great chapter, honestly very well done. you got the emotions you were looking for, i'm sure! now...for teh rest of it. ::sweat drop:: ah man, i can't see how more drama can come in right now.....
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Title: LoveSick Reviewed By: Daonia On: January 17, 2006 11:46 EST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: OMG.......That was too good .....you made me cry.Please just update soon. Question will the sequel be 2 yrs later?
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Reviewed By: anubis_himura nli On: January 17, 2006 10:55 EST Comment/Review: *cries hysterically* Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo the hurt! the pain! the stupid Hanyou with the big mouth! I can't stand the drama and pain!!!!!! great update though! I love the story and the intensity makes me look forward to more than even before! ^.^ great job love anubis!
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Reviewed By: SEMPAI On: January 17, 2006 09:57 EST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: NOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!! Oh my Gosh! What the heck was that?! He's being a retard. What the heck. Good chapter but now I'm gonna be mad for the rest of the day.
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Reviewed By: VelvetNight (still not signed in...do you see a pattern here?) On: January 17, 2006 09:48 EST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: OMG!!! That had to be the most heart wrenching chapter I've read! I could literally feel my heart breaking in that chapter. THings can't end like this. THough I know that it won't...but what's love without a little drama, eh? I soo can't wait for the next update!!! Keep up the x-cellent work!!! ~VelvetNight
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Title: ^ ____ ^ Reviewed By: Broken Dreams [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2006 09:16 EST Comment/Review: Very nice. The only thing I see is that you might be moving a little quickly. But you are really a talented writer and I enjoy reading you works alot! ^ ^
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Reviewed By: MORLY On: January 17, 2006 08:33 EST Comment/Review: I was so crying!!! Excellent chapter.
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Title: OMG...Now I see why my readers flip out... Reviewed By: InuGrrrl (NSI) On: January 17, 2006 06:40 EST Comment/Review: OMG!!! THAT BASTARD! THAT HEARTLESS BASTARD! I can't believe half the shit he said. He's so FUCKED UP. I wanna just break his fucking face & that's huge for me because i adore Inu. That was one of the worst breakups i have EVER seen! I'm just floored...and they call ME angsty! SHIT!!!! This was a hell of a chappie & i take my hat off to you!
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Reviewed By: CB-chan On: January 17, 2006 05:06 EST Comment/Review: When you say drama... I DIDN'T THINK YOU'D MEAN THIS MUCH! *cries*
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Reviewed By: alex3996 On: January 16, 2006 18:15 EST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: please continue with this story, i love it!!!!!
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Reviewed By: alatero [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2006 04:38 EST Comment/Review: KEEP GOING PLEASE! I love this story so much! A sequel would be great, but I think if you stop this story now it wouldn't have any of the completion that a story normally has. I also think that it may appear as more of a fragment than a story if you stop now. Just a thought...but whatever you do, please don't just drop this story! I love it and I live for updates!
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