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Title: slight mistake
Reviewed By: grimmich On: February 10, 2013 01:48 EST
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I just wanted to point out something I noticed. Last chapter you said the ring was in the family for generations but at the beginning of this one you said that he bought it... other than that you are cruel to your characters! :D |
Title: Cant think of a title
Reviewed By: Anime addicted Alex On: September 09, 2012 05:30 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi. My name is Alex ( not that it really matters) I love your fanfiction. Out of the many MANY I've read this is probably on my top three! I love your writing style and am soo glad that there are hardly any mistakes at all. It gets really annoying if there are lots o mistakes and you have to guess words. I've had to guess whole sentences and even a paragraph once! This is a really original fanfic and I am so glad I found it. Please please please keep up the good work. You are doing an amazing job |
Title: fantastic story
Reviewed By: ummmidunno On: July 08, 2012 09:08 EDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a fantastic story -- im really enjoying it! i read it all in one sitting, haha! it says its a work in progress, but it also says you haven't updated since 2009 -- the last chapter also kind of feels like it has wrapped up the story a bit - but i'm not sure. is this story completed? if so, i think its a satisfying ending, even if a little abrupt. but if not, please continue writing :) one small criticism - i didnt find inuyashas dialogue about kagome being a mistake very believable in the context of the story and what happens afterwards - it kind of felt like that came out of nowhere, and it wasnt really clarified where exactly that came from later. it also wasnt clear if he was bored of kagome and did want to see other women or if he was just saying that or if he truly wanted to be exclusive and not just for her sake. for these reasons i've given this story an overall rating of 9/10 instead of 10/10. but otherwise, this was an extremely good story! :) |
Title: reader
Reviewed By: Cyn Cyn On: June 07, 2012 22:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE this story!!!! oh plz continue =D I want to know what happens next, and i love those lemons. Plz hurry with your updates. |
Reviewed By: thisisvicious On: September 26, 2011 19:52 EDT
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I really likebthis story, its so cute.... I know its been forever since you last updated, but I hope you post a new chapter soon, I'd like to see how this story ends!! |
Reviewed By: Karrina On: May 23, 2011 23:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it, thought it was taking a played out idea and made it unique though im not quite sure its finished which is why im writing this review ... but i love it and hope you do in face finish it ... |
Reviewed By: corectoramaritza On: December 08, 2010 19:21 EST
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I really love it its great I cant wait till you update |
Reviewed By: kmn1829 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2010 02:51 EDT
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I love this story! Its realistic and it still keeps their personalities and family members. Its just plain amazing as a story. Please update soon this story has amazing potiential. Update soon!
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Title: AMAZING
Reviewed By: Gdp On: March 12, 2010 21:57 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is amazing. I cannot wait till your next chapters!!! I literally cried at points and I really love the story. I cannot wait to read more! (i just spent a couple hours reading all this btw lol, seriously, you've got talent. I cannot wait to read more, and i've got exams to study for lol this is so great!)
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Reviewed By: Seto Takahashi On: October 11, 2009 11:56 EDT
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wow lucky you don't write manga you would fail miserably because of the one year waiting period lol jk. Well sorta. Please at least review every month now not every year come on I know life is hard but life is harder without good fanfic so please contribute to the "bored out of my mind" cause because it will make all of us readers have an easier life. Really review please cause I still love this story and still remember it even after a year. and guess what inuyasha's back on anime hell freakin yea!!!
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Reviewed By: anna8 On: July 11, 2009 22:58 EDT
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is there more? i have read this one 3 times now.
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Title: MORE!
Reviewed By: frederickfox [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2009 19:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really really enjoyed this story... i almost forgot about it but I wish that you would update. even if it's just smutty filler for a while before plot can come.
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Reviewed By: JenniferYo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2009 02:19 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDATE!
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Reviewed By: sessyalltheway [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2009 01:44 EDT
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I L O V E THIS story!!!!!! i was totelly getting into it!!! you HAVE to keep writing this!!!!! gosh you cant just stop!!! oh and good luck with school!... its not gonna get in your way right???? cuz it would not be acceptable if you just stopped writing!!!! DONT STOP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: sessyalltheway [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2009 01:43 EDT
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I L O V E THIS story!!!!!! i was totelly getting into it!!! you HAVE to keep writing this!!!!! gosh you cant just stop!!! oh and good luck with school!... its not gonna get in your way right???? cuz it would not be acceptable if you just stopped writing!!!! DONT STOP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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