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Reviewed By: cougiecat12 On: February 07, 2006 23:17 EST
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ha! you saw ahead of my cringing and addressed the issue already. I still think the relationship was a bit rushed, but at least you forced Inu to say 'we are a couple, durnnit!'
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Reviewed By: cougiecat12 On: February 07, 2006 23:06 EST
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The story is very good. great characterization, and relationship development--- up until they make up. I know you are just wanting to finish up the story, but geesh Kagome has to be thinking that she doesn't really mean as much to inu as she thought if she was blown off that easily. I'd think it would take some actual relationship building/non sexual starting over before she'd accept him again. and I also can't picture he going from her first kiss to doggie style sex straight away. Anyway, other than that excellent story and great writing style!!
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Reviewed By: VelvetNight [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2006 17:11 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!! Everytime I read this story I get more and more into it!! I sooo can't wait to find out what happens next!! Keep up the great work!!! ~VelvetNight
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Title: Just Roomies
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2006 13:46 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: TrinityK [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2006 02:46 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww man right now the mood is sad and depressing. But good cus it's great writing!!! ;-) I liked this chapter, and I can't wait to see that twist you were talking about. I can't wait for the next chapter!!! Good job! ;-) -TrinityK
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Title: AWSOME!!!
Reviewed By: flrsblue [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2006 02:35 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
my god you are such a talented writer. i have been litterally in tears for like 3 chapters now. please please update ahain asap! i really want to know what happens to them.
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Title: Glad that you're back
Reviewed By: ssc [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2006 00:43 EST
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wow that was a long absence from yourself!!! But the chapter was worth it!!! Really sad and sweet at the same time. Hope you ca write a little more often!!! We really miss your updates, and now that the story is taking a new air... oh my dod! please update soon it's the interesting part of the story please!!!
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Reviewed By: inuoverlord [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2006 00:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you have to write more. how long will the story be? can you update 4 times a day... please? lol. love your story continue writing
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Reviewed By: Knock-on-Wood [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2006 23:24 EST
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Wow...that was an interesting chapter! Although, I have to admit, nothing like what I expected. I just kind of expected to find Kagome moved out, never to talk to Inuyasha again for years, until one day, years later, she meets up with him and yada, yada, yada. :P Anyway, the turn of events are still really sad! But, I'm loving your story! Awesome chapter! :D So, please update again when you get the chance...I really can't wait to see what happens!
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Reviewed By: medli [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2006 23:13 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Glad there was an update and I was glad to see that Kagome didn't actually leave. Hope to see more of Inu/Kag soon. It is sad, though, that he broke up with her and now, he is planning to leave. Update soon, thoug.
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Reviewed By: Arcangel3012 On: February 06, 2006 22:58 EST
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What an angsty chapter. I want cute, warm, fuzzy and romantic. Iunderstand that there has to be some sort if cinflict, but, thus far I am starting to cry. If he really did love her and vise versa they would make a happy compramise. Although I am sure they have their reasons. Arcangel3012
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Reviewed By: anubis_himura nli On: February 06, 2006 22:35 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh dear, oh dear...
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Title: awww
Reviewed By: ShaylaBlade(NSI) On: February 06, 2006 20:10 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
are they gonna get back together or not?? i hope so and plz dont make inu go to seoul! u are killin me softly with this story!!
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Title: just roomies
Reviewed By: InuHonou712 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2006 19:49 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i have reviewd many times just on different log ins but this story is the best you so have to update ur are so good at writing !!! i luv ur storys. Ja ne *Jessica*
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Reviewed By: a_girl who loves ur stories On: February 06, 2006 19:34 EST
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update soon plz made me wanna cry
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