| "Just Roomies" Reviews/Comments [ 690 ] |
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Reviewed By: TLM [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2006 06:45 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it you can keep going and do a sequal, either way i will read. So more, more, more.
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Reviewed By: TrinityK [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2006 05:13 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED this update. I was dying inside to hear Kags and Inu have a confrontation. Is Inu that dense where he hadn't thought of Kag, or is it that he's just assuming something here? I don't know, great hapter, I loved it, and I can't wait for the drama. Drama City here we come!!! ;-) -TrinityK
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583~NSI On: January 12, 2006 02:10 EST
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my mind is burning with questions, and some indignant rage. how could inu be so stupid to assume that kagome would automatically understnad he expects her to pick up and go wtih him? is he stupid? that boy is so clueless! i swear, i can understand her sudden urge to cling onto him, hence the sudden (and well done) rapid sex scene but damn...i would have smashed a vase over his head by this point!!! anyway, good stuff...keep it going!
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Reviewed By: kschultea [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2006 01:38 EST
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I'm really enjoying this fic!!! Unlike some other longer fanfics, this one doesn't feel long or at all like it's dragging. A sequel or just plain continuation--either way, please keep going!!!
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Title: write more!!!
Reviewed By: InuSapphire On: January 12, 2006 01:26 EST
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PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!! ITS GOOD! MAKE A SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: animaygurl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2006 01:20 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am loving your story. It is soooooo good! I don't do reviews that often, I try to... but forget. Anyways... I think you could do either. But definately continue it somehow! It's too good to end! :D
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Reviewed By: daniella On: January 12, 2006 01:03 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Don't make a sequel, just continue this one.
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Title: I laughed my HEAD off!
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl (NSI) On: January 12, 2006 00:40 EST
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When they came down (hot lemon btw) and the family was cheering, OMG. I had a conniption fit. I laughed so hard my bf was like, you REALLY need to stop reading that stuff! I'm so pissed at Inu, doesn't he have a damn clue as to how this is hurting her. Dingy little koinu! Great job!
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Reviewed By: VelvetNight (still not signed in...ahaha) On: January 11, 2006 22:39 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...such a quick update!! And I really, really, really liked this chapter...it had soo much substance to it...and the lemon...whew...even though it's winter...I might have to turn on the AC....man...that was HOTT!!!! I sooo can't wait for your next update...Kagome and InuYasha can't split up...they just cant... catcha on the next update!!, VelvetNight
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Reviewed By: sunshine07 On: January 11, 2006 22:28 EST
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plz not too much drama...i want them to stay together! no breaking up! update soon! great chappy
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Reviewed By: QuestionableIntentions(nsi) On: January 11, 2006 20:57 EST
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nyce lemon. lol. and the last scene was hilarious! and drama...oooo000ooo...happy ending tho, si? lol. update soon!
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Title: OMG!!!
Reviewed By: ShaylaBlade(dint signin) On: January 11, 2006 20:23 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
they bumpin and grindin while family downstairs??? hehehe thats funny...but will he take her with him?
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Title: AWE
Reviewed By: mermaid232 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2006 19:20 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That's so sad and my heart is pulling with Kagome. I know the pain that she feels, you did a great job in pulling it out
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Title: o my kami that was great
Reviewed By: kags1 On: January 11, 2006 19:20 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
pl continue cause i luv it so much
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Reviewed By: anubis_himura nli On: January 11, 2006 18:42 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NO DRAMA! HAPPINESS!! haha. I loved the update; but i hate that he's being such a loser! I bet he's going to just take her and he's being dumb and not saying anything.. oh but she can't just leave school and everything.. but he's a stupid boy he doesn't care... oh will she wait for him?... this is sooo dramatic! I look forward to more! ^.^ Excellent work!
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