| "Just Roomies" Reviews/Comments [ 690 ] |
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Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2005 17:30 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED IT!!! hurry update,....i'll be waiting
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Reviewed By: keesha On: November 11, 2005 19:00 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it!! You have such talent. One question, I know it sounds dumb, but were they actually having intercourse or rubbing against each other? Maybe I overlook some word but...yeah. More soon please!
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Reviewed By: devilboy [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2005 18:53 EST
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*smirks* i have to say you're pretty good at writing that type of stuff. is that how it went your first time or something ^_^. well it was nice...very erotic.
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Reviewed By: devilboy [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2005 18:53 EST
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*smirks* i have to say you're pretty good at writing that type of stuff. is that how it went your first time or something ^_^. well it was nice...very erotic.
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Reviewed By: TrinityK [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2005 15:06 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED this chapter, can't wait till the next! This story is one of my favorites.
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Reviewed By: VelvetNight [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2005 11:37 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey!! Great chapter...though it did seem a bit rushed...hence the 8. I'm really interested in where this story is headed. I hope all is well with you and I eagerly await your next update!!
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Title: I LOVE IT!
Reviewed By: Lady_Relm [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2005 23:51 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this story a lot you should update as quickly as you can. anyways...you think your writing shit but when I read it's just find there is a little grammar that needs fixing and spelling but everyone makes a mistakes. Any who, I hope you feel better it's not easy going through the things you did… nevertheless, sometimes thing are hard one you but don't ever give up.
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Reviewed By: sunshine07 On: November 10, 2005 17:10 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thanks for updating!! i hope your getting better and if you have time update again!!! : )
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Reviewed By: TrinityK [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2005 05:03 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED this chapter, and your story. I can't wait till the next. And I hope things get better for you in life, take care... -TrinityK (aka Krystal)
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Title: You're pure evil
Reviewed By: ssc [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2005 01:04 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Jajaja this last chapter is great.... but poor kagome and inuyasha, i was impressed that miroku survived this chapter... anyway it's good to have you back... yake care and good luck... and of course keep updating!!!
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Reviewed By: frostyshake On: November 10, 2005 00:07 EST
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I love your story, so of course I will be waiting patiently for your next update. I hope you're able to get your life back in order. Try not to stress yourself to much over this fan-fic most of your readers will understand.
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Reviewed By: jazzyca [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2005 23:56 EST
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fantastic! awesome! i really liked that chapter. you're good at writing lemons. eagerly awaiting the next chapter. take care hon.
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Reviewed By: devilboy [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2005 23:29 EST
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i hope you do get your life back on track...i know how it is i've been there...sorta still am but for certian reasons.hope you do good on your midterms cause i ain't lol.
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Reviewed By: bluezinthos On: November 09, 2005 22:34 EST
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as one of your faithful fic reading minions i was pleasantly surprised to see a new chapter up. i hope you are taking care of yourself and not pushing things too hard. i enjoyed this chaper greatly, interruption and all and of course miroku will tell sango and i can only imagine what the dinner will be like. looking forward to more when you're ready to write.
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: VelvetNight (nsi) On: November 09, 2005 21:36 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!! This fic is great!! I've read other fics like this one..but I'm really diggin yours!! Your sense of narrative pace is great!! I don't feel rushed or dragged at all!! And I like how you put it in 3rd person POV!! I've actually been meaning to review for a while...but MM is soo fickle. Your lemon was pretty good...too bad Kags and Inu had to be interrupted...o well...they'll just have to pick up again later. Great job on this fic. I await your next update!!
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