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Reviewed By: adara205 On: September 07, 2007 20:12 EDT
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Your story has been a favorite of mine for some time, but to be completely honest, the last two chapters didn't seem to flow like pervious written ones. Frankly kagome seemed out of character and the last two chapters sounded thrown together and not well thought out. I don't really have a right to criticize, but I'll post my review none-the-less so you can receive a broader opinion of the new chapters.
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Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2007 16:56 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok, amma b serious with u. During the 1st week baq to school at lunch time me n my closest friends have been going home and watching porn amongst other things excluding them... *winks* lolz. So this jus made meh horny... HAHA... You must think i'm crazyor w/e but it's been a LONG time since i've read your lemons and to add it with this week? hmmm... i'm jus saying... hehe. Well i love your updates. Though sometimes i wonder if it's the kipu i knew through writing cuz i can tell u've jus started from a long time. Dont get my wrong, your writing is always good, but the early chapters n updates bfore u left, was really good. I like your writing style still... ^__^ Ja!
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Reviewed By: VelvetNight [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2007 16:44 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Chapter!! And just getting out of surgery, this was exactly what I needed. I'm really glad to see you getting back in the swing of things. Forgive me if this review isn't up to par with my other ones. I just wanted to say excellent job and I eagerly await your next update! ~VelvetNight
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Reviewed By: sexxiigurrll0204 On: September 07, 2007 16:32 EDT
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this is such a good story! update soon! thank you!
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Reviewed By: Aylese1989 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2007 15:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER, THAT WAS SEXY AND EROTIC. GOOD JOB!!!!!!!!!! =)
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Reviewed By: Aylese1989 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2007 15:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER, THAT WAS SEXY AND EROTIC. GOOD JOB!!!!!!!!!! =)
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2007 15:11 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't know what Megan Brown is talking about, since Inuyasha was clearly stated as being a hanyou from day one, but I will tell you that I'm extremely glad you started updating again. I had lost hope of this story ever being completed, and when I saw that it was back, I reread everything from the beginning, so that it was more fresh in my mind. I really love this story! Please don't disappear again!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2007 13:34 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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interesting story... really enjoy reading it... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: Megan Brown On: September 07, 2007 11:46 EDT
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That was good but i'm kinda confused. In all of your other chapters you stirred away from the demon thing, now he's a demon and kagome just knows? And it also didnt follow the other chapters, the way your wrote it i mean. It seems like it's not part of this story but at the same time you know it does. Maybe it's been a while and i missed a part but i kinda dont like that he turned into a demon when this whole time he was human and demons didnt exist. Wanna clear up my confusion please?
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Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2007 16:36 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kagome is so....!!! >< I so wanted them to have the wild uncontrollable sex and then they can tlk out what eva *sigh* I guess my hentai mind aint gettin anything eh >.> UPDATE WHEN U CAN!! =)
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Title: WHY???
Reviewed By: blackr0s3 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2007 05:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay u updated again! yeah my lap top's a vista too it gets annoying sometime ya know? But why cant they do it? WHY WHY? They love eachotehr riggghhhht? grrr! Update soon please Im needy right now! this was a great chapter!!!
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Reviewed By: VelvetNight [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2007 22:24 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapters!! I'm glad you're getting back in the swing of things. Just two words of constructive criticism: Chapter 36 seemed a little out of place, like it was an awkward read because of the timing. And they were really quick reads...maybe that's more of an opinion because I was so excited to have new chapters they went by too fast...teehee. Anyways great chapters and I really enjoyed it...and you're so mean to leave it at a cliffie!! *pout* I eagerly await your next update! ~VelvetNight PS: 'I Heard It Through the Grapevine' is by Marvin Gaye...sorry...I'm anal about music...teehee! Great Job!
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Title: WHAT!!!!
Reviewed By: Hollywood1 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2007 19:18 EDT
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NNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOO kagome!!!!! man cant wait till InuYasha explains EVERYTHING to Kagome so she understands his actions!!! Plus that was a EVIL move, But nice way to leave everyone in suspence!!! very good => Happy your updating frequently the story is improving!!! thanks
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Reviewed By: dreamer789 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2007 18:22 EDT
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oh my god! is she saying that because of what he said or she rememebred the girl in the store? oh i love this story please update soon i cant wait to find out what happens next.
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Reviewed By: meganbrown On: September 04, 2007 18:12 EDT
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omg!!! your the worst person in the world, how can you leave it there?! I've been waiting forever and you leave it there???? ughhhhhhhh HURRY UP WITH THE RESSSSSST! by the way it's great lol
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