| "Just Roomies" Reviews/Comments [ 690 ] |
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Reviewed By: QuestionableIntentions [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2005 19:50 EDT
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hey!! great new chapters!! I am fully loving this story, so i hope you continue! please please update soon! xD great job, and hope there's more to come! luvin it! - michiko
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Title: Just roomie
Reviewed By: crzy144 On: September 23, 2005 17:41 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
mauh i luved it i hope u update soon
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583~NSI On: September 23, 2005 17:07 EDT
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my god, you cannot leave it off there!!!! AGH!!! good chapters. i was worried that hiten was going to try something...is going to try something...i never trust hiten, i know he's trouble!!! good story, keep it going!!!
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Reviewed By: fluffysbabe [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2005 16:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Would you please update quickly? This story is so great and wonderful.
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Title: Hmmm
Reviewed By: not logged in On: September 22, 2005 19:23 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! I really like your story a lot, I just have one beef. It kind of bugs me when writers say 'I won't update unless you review' even if its' playing around we can't really tell. :-/ But I do really like this story and look forward to the updates. SO I guess, this is my review, telling you to continue. ^_^ Oh and I'm not trying to be a pansy by not logging in, I swear, I'm just too lazy. ^_^ You can IM Me if you want butterflyhimura or email anubis_himura@hellokitty.com ^_^ bye
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Title: nice
Reviewed By: Wow and crazy On: September 22, 2005 08:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is the bomb and let me tell you tha i cant wait for another chapter so when and how long do i have to wait ^_^ so let me tell you that your story was so real life like and i just loved it so i hope that you will have it on soon love youre fan fluffy
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Title: Just Roomies
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2005 18:18 EDT
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: Kinoko [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2005 14:32 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome story, can't wait so see Inuyasha finally admit his love for Kagome! Keep them chapters coming in, and you'll be seeing me bunches! -kinoko
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Reviewed By: leila-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2005 11:59 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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you've got a great story started here. i could definitely see it going alot of different ways and turning out awesome. maybe bring in some of kagome and inu's friends and family to spice it up, or give us some more background on the two. also, you could tell us how kag got into T.U, seeing as it is a very prestigious school, and expensive without scholarships. obviously inu has the money for it, tho. whatever you decide will be good. keep it up and email if you need any help.( not implying that you NEED it, just if ya want it) ;P thanx.
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2005 00:40 EDT
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very cute. it's a good story thus far. the only things i've noticed is that kagome moved in a few months ahead of time yet in teh first chapter you mention her leaving to go to college as late as she could cause her mother wanted her home. you have some good stuff here, i'm enjoying the playful banter between kagome and inu...but honestly i feel the whole kouga scene was rushed. i think there needs to be some type of divulsion into why they hate eachother, like prior experiances and how kouga loves to throw around the 'my woman' phrase. very well done though, good story.
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Title: reviewing...
Reviewed By: TrinityK [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2005 22:55 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it, can't wait for more!!!
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Reviewed By: curly211 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2005 21:43 EDT
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PLEASE update soon! I have you in my favorites and everything!
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Reviewed By: QuestionableIntentions [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2005 20:41 EDT
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nooooooo!!!!! soooooo short!!!! :( *nearly cries* but at least all the main characters are finally there!! w00t!! xD nice update, and please please have more up soon! xD
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Reviewed By: aznangelstarQT [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2005 20:30 EDT
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MORE UPDATES PRETTY PLEASE!
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Title: hi
Reviewed By: Vegetasplaymate [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2005 20:22 EDT
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MORE PLEASE
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