| ""Trunks Lil Book Of Hentai Short Stories, Volume 1"" Reviews/Comments [ 96 ] |
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Reviewed By: RedDevil7690 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2002 13:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok but some r a lil scary..... |
Reviewed By: Kris On: December 07, 2002 19:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You should write more cowboy bebop, and card captor sakura. It was realli good wrte more!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Amethyst twilight On: July 23, 2002 00:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome |
Reviewed By: dax [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2002 08:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its cool,overall I give you a 9.5 but I rounded up. keep writing,
Zander.
I liked it.I give it a 10.0 all the way.
Keep writing,
Amara |
Reviewed By: SakuraSyaoran4eva [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2002 10:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O... I absolutly love what you did to Sakura & Syaoran *laughs evily*. It's totally kawaii! -_- |
Reviewed By: Xelis Metallium On: July 10, 2002 11:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You did a good job, but YOU NEED LINA/XELLOSS FICS! LINA/XELLOSS PAIRING ROX! I mean, come oooooooooooooooooooooooonnnnnn... |
Reviewed By: Boo On: July 07, 2002 15:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was really reallyweird but it was interesting. I don't get where you come up with this stuff but continue on, |
Reviewed By: tweety [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2002 20:34 CST
Comment/Review:
update |
Reviewed By: misticknight2002 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2002 02:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
please try to get up the lunar fic as soon as possible |
Reviewed By: Angel of Desire On: June 19, 2002 15:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Truly, that was very funny and exciting hentai. Keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: Ludacris On: June 15, 2002 00:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
Could you do an outlaw star one with Melfina and Gene? I can't wait to read the digimon story, I can't wait to see who you will use.
Whatever you do do not make it a Taiora or a Mimato!!!!! |
Reviewed By: MarineMeru [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2002 17:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a great Fan Fic because it had alot of details and by the way you wrote the story you could kind of tell the personality the chacter had. Wish i could write like that.
You should make more Cowboy Bebop fanfics |
Reviewed By: Aisha Clan-Clan On: May 04, 2002 14:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fics! If possible I would like to make a request - an Outlaw Star, Aisha/Jim, fanfic. Think it over. I would really appreciate it. |
Reviewed By: Dark Angel87 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2002 17:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's very good.I have some match ups,Maybe try Chi-Chi and 18 0r Bulma Chi-Chi and 18? |
Reviewed By: jack On: April 06, 2002 16:54 CST
Comment/Review:
I loved the first one. yuo should do one with Kiyone and Mihoshi? |
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