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Reviewed By: Bookreader9999 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2007 19:07 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. Your attention to detail reflected your research for that time period. Good job.
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2007 18:20 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter!! It was awesome!! Keep up the excellent work and update soon please!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Moongal On: November 07, 2007 04:48 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Do you know how many fan-fictions one can read in about 4 years time? I sure as hell dont. But thats how long Ive been reading them. 90% of which mainly being about our favorite hanyou or any one of the well known characters that follow in his wake. Im no expert writer, nor some critic of all time, so I suppose you could take my humble opinion and ignore it. But out of the hundreds of stories and authors Ive read, you have officially become a favorite and In my opinion, a very damn good one. There is a lot of familiar things in your story to a few other authors Ive read, but your unique twist on things and your own personality shines through everything you write, so it still stands out. Guess one cant invent brand new ideas forever and a few of the more favored tidbits the Inu-tachi fan-fiction fandom are bound to be reused, which shows a testament to the original authors who first used them. A fame which goes down in history by their ideas being used by other, just as awesome writers. If you have ever read these stories, then you know what I mean. If not then you must let me know at once!! For they are a true treat and should be shared. Your style is one I could have kept going with every moment in sengoku jedai till the present day chapter by chapter as you wrote them, for they each brought a new challenge and a new feeling to the group. I commend you your artistic ability. I loved your characters, how they were played with intelligence and personality without going to too many cliches or robbing them of their original feel. They grew, and that is a true feat. Im beginning to ramble so, I suppose I shall grant this a freaking close already. Hehe. My over point is, never give up on your writing, and feel freee to continue this story to its end and even its sequels and spin-offs as I enjoy your creatred universe very much. You have a gift and as long as you will share it this internet world, you will always have one fan, if not many. 500 reviews is something to boast about after all. Write as you enjoy your stories and most everyone will enjoy them right along with you. Keep it up! ^.^ p.s. I love the China/America tidbits quite a lot, and should you ever think of doing sequels, you should spread your character love and creativity all over the world. The possibilities seem fun indeed.
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Title: Please hurry
Reviewed By: General Review On: October 30, 2007 16:14 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have stayed with this story from beggining to end and I just want u to finish it. Please!!!! We the readers r on our knees begging u to finish this story.
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Reviewed By: knome [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2007 01:18 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the only one that i have read that showed the progression of history and i have to say i absolutly love it. I love reading stories like these, especially the reaction of kagome's future family. Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2007 00:17 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just finished reading your story from the beginning and I feel like I have run some sort of marathon.... Anyway in regards to your earlier chapters I really like the way you handled the transition form a basically cannon configuration of relationships to the unification of everyone. I think the reconciliation of the inu brothers was one of the best I have seen and I LOVE all of the weapons and clothing you had made. My favorite is obviously the bow made for Kagome. I kind of wish the you had described it in use more often, but as life became much more peaceful after it was commissioned I understand that it is likely by the need to see to sealing the blood of Inuyasha's pups that the battle in which it was described in use we ever got to see it. I wouldn't doubt that you had some fans begging to see the thing used around that time too... Oh, and I really like the way you purified the jewel. It seems like the most natural and logical way I have seen it done. I would also like to say that I love the way you handled Sesshoumaru's character. I have never read a Sesh/Kagura pairing. I was surprised at first to realize who you were pairing up with the Ice King, but I was NOT disappointed in the pairing OR in Kagura. I like the way the family turned out a lot. I am glad that you actually bothered to describe the time passing by. I would like to congratulate you on the way you taught me the definition of "tear jerker" on the death of Sango. I was completely prepared for and expecting the event of course, but I was not prepared for those last words. It made me smile briefly before I ...to be frank burst into tears... This Ethereal Siren does not cry... easily... Ok now for your latest chapter. I loved the whole Mark Twain thing and I wonder when Kagome will realize it... too bad she didn't figure it out and go visit him before he died. and also what happened to Kenta? Did he ever go back to Japan? I hope he plans on being there for the reunion. I guess all of his will have to wait until your update... I'll keep asking anyway though. Will the Snake feather dragon guy ever come back into play? I would think that Kagome would want to know the true origins of the tribal americans and whatever else the dragon wanted to share as he would obviously know. I guess you are running short on chapters left, but hey, you could do it in a sequel. I am also wondering what is going to be done about the age thing. Kagome and Inuyasha promise to announce themselves without delay after their younger selves make it through the well for the last time, so what will happen once a (by my calculations) a 45 year old or so looking Kagome and Inuyasha show up? I suppose they could just glamor themselves or just communicate as if they had gone off to live elsewhere as they were supposedly going to do... eh, I just need to be patient... I'll try...
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Reviewed By: Come Hither [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2007 20:37 PDT
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And we were rollin', rollin', rollin' on the river... do doo doo doo. Oh, oopsie-daisy, this was supposed to be a review. My bad; got carried away there for a minute. Had the whole wild Tina Turner seizure dance and hair flip thingy goin' too. Anywho, I think my favorite part was the Mark Twain cameo. WHAT A HOOT that was! Very cute and unexpected. Sorry it took so long to get around to reading this chapter. I'm dead on my feet (ass if we want to get technical). Glad I did, though. It brightened my day.
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Reviewed By: shipporinKIMS11 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2007 13:32 PDT
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Great chappie...*shakes head in wonder* Just wow...
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Reviewed By: Wild_Otaku On: September 26, 2007 20:10 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWESOME! But you seriously need to make a family trees, keeping everyone straight is being a little hard after 96 chapters.
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Reviewed By: KilalaMoonRose [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2007 18:17 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love this new chapter; very interesting. I love how you actually incorporate a history lesson into the entire thing. I don't think I'd have that kind of patience to look up all that stuff, and that's not even including the millions of name translations and stuff you did before hand...Oh, and the Japanese equivalent to "yeah" would be "aa," at least as far as I know. Anyway, can't wait till next chapter. Ja mata ne! ~KilalaMoonRose
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2007 15:12 PDT
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YAY...it has been a while but I liked the direction that u took on this...it was very interesting...please update though...XD
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2007 13:13 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter!! Are Sesshomaru and Kagura going to come back into the picture next chapter? Update really soon please and keep up the excellent work! ^_^
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2007 20:35 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice long update... seems that everything is coming to an end... kagome will be able to see her family again... wonder how that will come about... and what the reactions will be with the big family tree... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Title: it's sweet
Reviewed By: ladytokyo [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2007 13:38 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic and it's sad to know that it's coming to an end. I love that you got Inuyasha and Kagome out of Japan to explore again and the world as well. We are getting an education out of this. tell me should I stop going to class and just read what you have to write? lol I almost expect that they would find vampires in Europe lol. hey why not. I really glad that you thought of putting other creatures in that aren't youkai it make's the world a little bigger. and I'm happy to say that this wasn't a purely hentai fic there are really stories behind it althought we are so over due a lemon eh! it's so sad to know only 5 more chapters until the end. the world truly goes by slowly when your immortal. and Sesshomaru see that he would lose a brother to time. this fic is so sweet and soft I like it. through out this fic you have gone through so many levels of writing skill. I never seen that. you get better with time; how the hell do you do that.It's like reading a different person after several chapter. I say that you take this story and put it on as many sites as you can so that everyone can have the pleasure like the rest of us do. the email is longer than this. it's been awhile since we had a long e-mail chat eh!
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Reviewed By: Ethril Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2007 15:35 PDT
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absolutely wonderful! To be honest, I had expected your next chapter to be about Kagome returning to her family in modern Japan, not traveling the past world! Truely wonderful. You know quite a bit. Here's a tidbit about Native American history and legends. It is believed that the Native Americans that lived in New Mexico/Arizona region had winged gods similiar to European dragons. hehe...
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