| "Mating Season" Reviews/Comments [ 621 ] |
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Reviewed By: jflorea [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2007 11:19 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All I can say is WOW! What a magnificent sweeping story! To think it all started from such simple beginnings. You've really gotten a great mix of action and drama into this story. Lots of opportunities for side stories in China too if you are ever inclined. I'm having trouble deciding if I want to see Sess somehow extend Inu & Kag lives to his so the brothers and their mates all go together or see Sess deal with his loss (maybe shed his first tear ever!) Course there's drawbacks to Inu & Kag getting longer lives like seeing all thier current childern possibly die! Anyway...great story, really enjoying it and I'm holding my breath for the next update...really...I am.......better hurry and update...... *what no update yet!!!*...*gasp*...*passes out* ...damn...really thought that might work...LOL
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Title: family tree
Reviewed By: azaroth On: September 04, 2007 20:56 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Fanfiction. The only thing that bugs me is the family tree. It is hard to keep track of who is who and how demon or human they are. If you were to construct a visual family tree I think it would make it less confusing. Yet again, great fanfiction. Hope my suggestion helps any.
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Reviewed By: Inuyashalover829 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2007 14:37 PDT
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I enjoy the souta piece. Anyways, this story is starting to end nicely. You're doing a good job wrapping it up.
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Reviewed By: Inuyashalover829 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2007 14:36 PDT
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I enjoy the souta piece. Anyways, this story is starting to end nicely. You're doing a good job wrapping it up.
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Reviewed By: Jay184 On: September 03, 2007 06:27 PDT
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Inuyasha and Kagome in America… I can imagine them running into bigfoot. How intersting that would be…
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2007 01:57 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice update... wonder what happens next... will it be ending soon... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: Fyrloche [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2007 05:19 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
grins I love this story. I both love and hate the fact that it is coming to an end soon. shrugs Oh well, that is the life of a good story, isn't it? The desire to see it continue coupled with the desire to see a satisfying conclusion. American youkai? I've thought of them before in passing but can you really imagine all the unique types of youkai that could be? grins in sudden inspiration I'm from the south and I suddenly thought of an opossum youkai. (or possum as it is more commonly known) That would be totally unique to America as would a bobcat youkai. And can you imagine a moose youkai? Move over Bullwinkle! Not to mention polar bear or Kodiac grizzly youkai. The possibilities are endless and that's just in North America! Enough of my rambleing. I'm quite sure that you don't need any help from me in writing the conclusion to this wonderful story. I look forward to the next chapter. Until then.
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Title: Any battles?
Reviewed By: Dustin Imthurn dog demon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2007 18:09 PDT
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10 out of 10 as always. I'm wondering what role if any ww2 will play in there lives. Will there be any more demonic battles or are them over?
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Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2007 17:10 PDT
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Wonderful chapter. I love your story!!! Keep up the terrific work. BRAVO.
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Reviewed By: missy71 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2007 15:45 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the story, very original and enyjoyable. Keep up the great writing, and thank you for such a great story!!!
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Reviewed By: Come Hither [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2007 15:17 PDT
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I knew it! Minako is gonna get stuck with Hojo! Maybe he will have made the push into puberty by then. Woo hoo! You did the Chokyukai thing too. Isn't that porker fun to mess around with? Loved the passing reference. Did you know that Inuyasha has a third sea leg, named Smith. It's probably more deadly than a Smith & Wesson. I'm curious as to what kind of youkai you'll put in the Americas. Will it be meth monkey youkai? Or perhaps tassle-eared squirrel youkai that live only on the south side of the Grand Canyon. Or maybe even chupacabre youkai that hang out in K-Mart parking lots? Hmmm, lots to ponder there. I really like Sesshomaru's progression/evolution. If he's really so worried about his brother's & sister-in-law's life spans, could he not figure out a way to bond them to him, being the great and powerful Oz that he is? Or maybe I'm grasping at straws. It's never fun to worry about losing those you love. It comes with the territory, though. You live, you lose, and hopefully you learn to appreciate what you have before it is gone. Seems like Sesshomaru is on his way. Cheers!
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Reviewed By: anf600 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2007 14:01 PDT
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OMG only 5 chapters to go (if u want...but feel free to continue...we wont mind) I loved the dialogue...it shas been a while and it was realy funny...its weird but I can picture them saying these things...u have grasped their personality so well...i should re read this story...heck...i will...its that good...just update as soon as u ca ok...please and thank you XP
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Title: Sea Legs
Reviewed By: PrincessMelissa83 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2007 12:43 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm trying to picture Inuyasha with "sea legs" and it's halarious. hehehehe.
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2007 12:27 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter!! I can't wait for more, so update soon please!! Keep up the excellent work! ^_^
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Reviewed By: InuYashacrazy101 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2007 16:49 PDT
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i like cryed in some parts. like sango and mirou's passing and some other things. ur story is touching!i had my cousin read and she luved it! anyway this is such an emotional story!its the best! update as soon as u can! -inuyashacrazy101
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