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Reviewed By: Jessie Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2007 10:45 PDT
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Wow... when this story ends, I would love to see a sequel centered on the 'children' of Inuyasha and Kagome, along with Sango's and Miroku's. A very lovely chapter. I guess there is never a dull moment for the gang, right? Very beautiful chappie.
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Reviewed By: Fyrloche [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2007 05:07 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
And history repeats itself. At least Emi doesn't have to deal with a former incarnation! Very well written. And the idea that the reason that Inuyasha had never transformed before being that he had Tetsaiga in his eye was avery original one. Lokking forward to the next chapter. Later.
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Reviewed By: sakuralovesinuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2007 01:08 PDT
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As always a wonderful chapter. I laughed out loud at Kagome wishing she had a holy hand grenade:) I can hardly wait for the next chapter, but when it arrives it will be just that much closer to the end. It is an awesome story and I have enjoyed every minute of it!!
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2007 20:24 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome chapter!! I had a feeling those two would get together!! Keep up the amazing work and update soon please!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2007 20:12 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT chapter. I was hoping that Kazuki and Emi would get together! I could see it coming from when they were kids, and I'm so glad I was right. They will make a great couple. And, even better, Kagome and Inuyasha will always have a reminder of Sango and Miroku around. Even though they will lose their best friends, at least they will have Miroku and Sango's daughter....who will not only love their son to pieces but will cherish the memory of their friends (her parents) as much as they will. Talk about a win/win situation. I can't wait to see what happens next. Very good chapter.
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Reviewed By: BrokenAngel1219 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2007 19:49 PDT
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oh my god!!! i love the new chapter. i knew those two kids would end up together when kagome thought about how much they looked like her and inuyasha. the whole repeat on how to stop his transformation was amazing. i wonder if it gave inuyasha and kagome a new insight into how much that kiss between them had actually been a sign that they were destined to be together. it might be a little weird for kagome, though, because it is her son and the daughter she had for sango and miroku. i guess it is alright if you don not think about it too much. i mean they are kinda blood related. it is still an awesome couple, though. i would keep going with it. i wonder what miroku and sango think of those two fallin for each other. hopefully, they will not have the same problems as inuyasha and kagome did at admitting their feelings for each other. you have done an awesome job so far on this story. i can not wait to see what you decide to do next. keep up the fantastic work and try to update as soon as you can.
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Reviewed By: Come Hither [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2007 19:40 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First off, that 'tough love' talk of Inuyasha's was adorable. I think that was my favorite part. Very Yashaesque, in an Oscar the Grouch meets Dr. Phil sorta way. Love Kagome's confidence in battle and her snide little attitude toward the creepy crawly. When you originally mentioned the roach youkai to me, I was invisioning that scene from The Mummy, with the beetle invasion, but you topped it. Really nice battle scene. I'm green with envy of your talent in that department. I don't know why, but Sango reminded me of Bruce Willis in Die Hard. They're getting older and still got it, but are reluctant to break it out. The "I'm getting too old for this" was cute. Poor Inuyasha; he's a good papa and feeling all guilty. I just wanna squeeze him. Anyway, awesome chapter, chocked full of entertainment. Good Job!
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Reviewed By: LittleSuki [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2007 16:30 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg i loved this chapter sooooo much!!! just as kagome, i felt the deja vu and it was kinda....creepy to say the least......but omg i loved it loved it loved it!!!!!!! three thumps up for you!
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Reviewed By: ladygeri [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2007 16:05 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I repeat. That was a REALLY GREAT chapter!!. I just had to log in and say it again!
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Reviewed By: Inu-geri On: June 20, 2007 15:45 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!!! That was a REALLY GREAT chapter!!!
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Reviewed By: InusGurl4 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2007 20:48 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH LOL 'Excellent Tree?!' It would've been funny if you had named her Chi...sitting there in the middle of an InuFic and all of a sudden...Chi and Hideki? What?! :D ...anyway...I love this story and I hope you don't try to cram it too much into the next 10 chapters...like you said, that's why they made sequels. :D
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Title: Howdy!
Reviewed By: Come Hither [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2007 15:17 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Whoa! Rin's quite a mama. Love what you did with her character. Poor thing usually just floats into the background, to ever drown in a sea of mediocrity. I know the OC's are just kinda passing through, so to speak, to impart pearls of wisdom; but I really liked them. I hope they make the occasional guest appearance.
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Reviewed By: Fyrloche--NSI On: June 11, 2007 06:43 PDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
grins Good chapter. I can see the set up that you are doing between the children. Actually saw it a couple of chapters back but didn't comment at that time. I suppose the next few chapters will decide whether or not the two will develope a romantic bond or just an extremely tight friendship\brother\sister bond. grins again I imagine that you are going to work on the romantic side though. I look forward to reading it. Later, Fyrloche.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2007 22:25 PDT
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i really like your story... will it be ending soon...
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Reviewed By: chaos_kyes_fallen_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2007 21:28 PDT
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Heeheeheehee buwahahahahahahahaaa!!! ::scratches all the words into a pile and hugs them to her chest:: I love them! I luuuuuv theeeem!!! This story.. is GREAT!!!!
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