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| "Mating Season" Reviews/Comments [ 621 ] | | Pages (42): [ « ‹ 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 › » ] | Reviewed By: heart felt thanks On: July 11, 2007 04:41 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!!!!!!!!!!! I have waited to comment on your story until now, simply because I have been so engrossed in it to stop reading. Because of you, I have barely slept for the past three days. You have single-handedly made me feel every emotion there is available to man simply by using your imagination. I absolutely love your novel (you do consider this a novel, don't you? If not, you definately should, it is absolutely worthy). I can't wait until you finish. Right now, I am absolutely obsessed with your musings, and will be utterly tortured until you have finished. Origionally, I sought out Inuyasha fanfic for the lemons (judge me all you want *wink*wink), but in the course of my perverted conquest, you have captured my heart. I will be breathlessly awaiting your final chapters. Do you write professionally? If you don't, you should. I am new to the fanfic scene, having only recently discovered it, upon watching every Inuyasha episode and movie available in America, and wanting more (I will soon be seeking out the manga, now that I know there is so much more), so I don't know how all of this is supposed to work. I would be honored if you could see fit to contact me with any updates, and/or sequels that you may write. My email address is catinhatfoxinsox@hotmail.com. Again: BRAVO!!!...for a job very, very well done. Thank you so much for all of your time and effort in writing this great, great story.
| Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2007 16:03 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT chapter. I really enjoyed that tender scene with Kagura and Sesshomaru. It was really well-done. Most stories just focus on those intial feelings. But sometimes what comes later, after that first giddiness has faded, is the best romance of all. Sesshomaru FINALLY said that he loves his mate, after at least fifteen years. For demons, I know that isn't a terribly long time, but I'm shocked that Sessh said it at all. It just shows how love for his family has changed Sesshomaru so much......for the better. I really liked this....and I look forward to reading more soon.
| Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2007 16:03 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT chapter. I really enjoyed that tender scene with Kagura and Sesshomaru. It was really well-done. Most stories just focus on those intial feelings. But sometimes what comes later, after that first giddiness has faded, is the best romance of all. Sesshomaru FINALLY said that he loves his mate, after at least fifteen years. For demons, I know that isn't a terribly long time, but I'm shocked that Sessh said it at all. It just shows how love for his family has changed Sesshomaru so much......for the better. I really liked this....and I look forward to reading more soon.
| Reviewed By: shipporinKIMS11 (not logged in) On: July 08, 2007 14:47 PDT
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Good chappie. Although... not Inuyasha or Kagome or Sango or Miroku... I'm interested. How will we find out why that is her name? Ohhh, Update!!!!
| Reviewed By: Come Hither [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2007 08:54 PDT
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Wow! Good 'ol Sesshomaru is learning, slowly, but he's gettin' it. *Snickers at the image of a dog being trained by the reward system* Love the bickering over hairstyles. Hey, at least she's not dying it pink or something - wait, I forgot that's not exactly a shocking color to youkai. "Demi-inu", very cute descriptive. (Putting on my serious reviewer face) I really did like the whole little battle going on in Kagura's subconscious. Very well done. Liked how she felt like a kindred spirit with Yasha. This chapter was very different from the others and was a nice little switch-up. Good job chicky.
| Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2007 23:03 PDT
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great story... really like it... will it be ending... if not... update soon... please and thank you!
| Reviewed By: *Zetsuii* On: July 07, 2007 20:58 PDT
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yay...thank u for updating...it was awesome...and its nice to know that youkai teens are emotional as well..it was funny...update soon though
| Reviewed By: ran_undine [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2007 20:08 PDT
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very good chapter, wow your really putting a lot of thought into this which makes this really good!! i mean you point out the characters thoughts and worries. it's just really great. i like it a lot. i can't wait for the next chapter. now i commend you on how you put a lot on how kagura would think about being apart of naraku and how she felt guilty about her past. it was just really really good. :) love it can't wait!!
| Reviewed By: PrincessMelissa83 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2007 20:06 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't usually review, but since you're so close to the end...WOOOOHOOOOOO! I LOVE THIS STORY! I look forward to finding an update notice in my inbox every time I open my mail. *sing song Usagi voice* LOVE IT!
| Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2007 13:15 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing!! I'm glad we got a chapter about Kagura and Sesshomaru!! I can't wait for more, so update soon please!! Keep up the excellent work!! ^_^
| Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2007 21:25 PDT
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hahaha...that ending line was cute...god it has been a while for updating but thanks for doind it faster than other people...it was so intense...thanks but please continue...onegaishimasu
| Reviewed By: Kay Kay On: June 22, 2007 11:48 PDT
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woweeee!!! so good and btw commenting on the new ch. 91!!! :) i saw it coming, w/ emi and kazuki, so cute though and!! i just can't wait for the rest of the story, well sort of considering your stopping soon....:( oh well the stroy is great, can't wait for more, and new babies, exciting and unexpected for miroku and sango. :) write more soon!:) ranundine
| Reviewed By: liliesformary [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2007 10:41 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oddly enough, I really am enjoying this. No, it's not the greatest literary gem in the world, and it does fall back on some fanverse staples (mating marks and life extending blood transfusions), but you know what, this is still really fun. Many (but not all)of the multi-chapter IY stories that I consider very well written are also horrifyingly depressing, or at least bittersweet. This is just whee! and I am having a lot of fun reading this. I did notice a few typos here and there, but it wasn't anything glaring. For the most part your spelling and grammar is a welcome relief. Overall, a nice little updeat soap opera-ish thing that I will consider a guilty pleasure. Also, 100 chapters? You're unsane.
| Reviewed By: vkp23 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2007 22:42 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just love your story! though the time jump is a little hard to follow, it's a fabu story! AHH, I love it in stories when "history repeats it's self". I always saw Inuyasha and miroku's children falling for eachother. I would have loved to see Miroku's little henti boys chasing Inu's little girls pinching their butts. LOL. Love love love your story!
| Reviewed By: shipporinKIMS11 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2007 11:30 PDT
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WHOOHOO! i loved it! history repeats (i knew it!), inuyasha's getting some teeth yanked, poor puppy, but an awesome chapter. I like the idea of a sequel Jessie Angel, but it's up to the author... BEG! BEG! BEG! BEG! BEG! BEG! BEG! BEG! BEG! umm... updates?
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