| "Mating Season" Reviews/Comments [ 621 ] |
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Reviewed By: dreamer789 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2007 10:20 PDT
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oh my god i love this story! its getting comfusuing trying to rememebr all the children tho but hey that happens with big families in real life why shouldnt it happen with big families in stories. keep up the great work i cant wait until you update again!
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2007 12:57 PDT
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awww...that was sad...but well written...and thanks for letting us know what fdamily the kids cam from discreetly in the sentence with their names or i would have been so confused...cant wait for the next update
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Reviewed By: Ethril Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2007 18:26 PDT
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ooooh, does this mean we'll be seeing the next chapter taking place in...Kagome's home time? Or maybe WW2? hmmm...
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Title: RIP
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2007 02:23 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wasn't ready for that...of course I'm bummed out *sniff* I'm purly american in that respect, cause I just can't handle it when much loved main characters pass on...So you got a couple of my tears on this chapter, I hope your happy. (by the way, this story is GREATLY improved from the first time I read it)
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Reviewed By: Come Hither [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2007 11:25 PDT
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*Sniffles* That was beautiful, man! You handled the passing of the other half of the group beautifully and with dignity. I hate being sad, but hate even more when you read stories that just gloss over that inevitability. Oh, the bit with the itty bitty demon virus/pestilence thing was really cool & very imaginative. I wonder who Minako...Binaka...Beyonce (whatever her name is), will mate. Oh gods, please don't tell me she will wait like 400 years and end up with...HOJO!!! LOL. Anyway, splendid (or should I say splendent) job.
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Reviewed By: Usoppe On: July 25, 2007 10:35 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. I have stayed with it since the very begining and i hope u do finish this but at the same time i don't want the story to end. also i just want to know how you're going to get through WWI and WWII.
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Reviewed By: shipporinKIMS11 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2007 06:55 PDT
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Sango...*hiccup* Miroku...*hiccup*..That was so SAAD!!!!!!! WAHHHHHHHHHH!!!!! It was good, but geez, I didn't think I'd cry this much. God... *sniff* That would be AWFUL to watch everyone around you grow old and die.. "I'm coming, Houshi-sama"... Oh god oh god oh god oh god.... My heart... It was a good chapter though... And i love the name Yoshi... Update soon please.
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Title: Don't stop now!
Reviewed By: halfbreen saiyan goddess On: July 25, 2007 03:14 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has been one of the best fanfics I've had the pleasure of reading. I've liked it that much that I'm reading it a second time too. You've really kept the story flowing and the characters coming too. I just hope when I get around to finishing my own fanfic it'll be as good as yours is!!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2007 00:18 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome chapter!! It WOULD depressing to watch others around you grow old and die while you stay the same! Update soon please and keep up the beautiful work!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2007 23:56 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. It was sad, but not unexpected. We knew these deaths had to happen sooner or later, and you did a really good job putting it all in perspective. If you become immortal, the drawback is that you lose many of the people you love to death....period. It's sad, but true. So, although it was a bit tough, it was really well done. I hope to read more soon.
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Reviewed By: LittleSuki [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2007 21:43 PDT
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omfg great chapter! i cant believe how old everyone is, and so many of them died. i wish i could be immortal.....but anyway, i do read the manga and i loved that u threw in the kitsune yujitsu or w/e it was called...teehee i cnt spell....cnt wait till next time! ^.^
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2007 21:40 PDT
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great chapter update... very touching and kinda sad... seems that it's almost ending with an epilogue... update soon... please and thank you!
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Title: pweeeeeeez!!!!
Reviewed By: heart felt thanks On: July 16, 2007 09:00 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hate to bother......but, when are you going to finish?????
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Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2007 11:15 PDT
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Hmmm, that name sounds so familier that it kind of hits the forhead. But any way wonderful story and as always keep up with the excelnt work.
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Reviewed By: Shigure-san [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2007 06:55 PDT
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I luv this fic so much, you've been at this for so long and yet i still anticipate every word, every update, and even go back to re-read it. You're so talented and i am so gutted that this fic is so close to finishing *sighs* I'll have to attack some of your other fics to make up for it ^_^ you've inspired me to write so many of my own fics, just dont know how to show my appreciation >.< -- Shigure-san
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