| "Mating Season" Reviews/Comments [ 621 ] |
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2007 19:23 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. I look forward to reading more soon.
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Reviewed By: ranundine On: June 10, 2007 18:53 PDT
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oooo so good. i haven't signed in but anyways, wow love the chapter. very well written and OMG life learning lessons....hmmm that is very good for Miroku and well awwwww to the new aditions to the family that is awesome. and i have one requst for the ending of this whole story(ch. 100) is that the ending be spectacular because i love this story, i don't want to miss it too much!!
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2007 17:55 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter!! I'm glad that Miroku is rethinking children!! I can't wait for more, so update soon please!! Keep up the amazing work!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: shipporinKIMS11 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2007 16:29 PDT
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HEY!!! thank you SOOOOO much for the translation!!! it really means alot to me. this was a really good chappie... hope Sango will be with child again. Please update, and thanks again for the translations!!!
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2007 15:00 PDT
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that was a nice chapter...i really enjoyed the format and it was nice to have thaat mini side story with etsuko and hideki...thank god miroku is getting his act together...i was just going to yell DO IT ALREADY...but yay for sango...I cant wait for the next chapter so please update soon...thanks
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Reviewed By: LittleSuki [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2007 14:20 PDT
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aw it was so fast on how it moved on...first its just like yea its only been like 6 years or so and now its 10 years into it! time sure does fly....... i love it and i hope u enjoy updating as much as i enjoy reading...cuz first hand, it does feel really good to get a good review and you so deserve it....
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Title: Gomenasai
Reviewed By: ladytokyo [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2007 13:31 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm sooooo sorry the kids are off for the summer. I but I have been reading and wow. I love the Shippos Flame of fear attack it was fantastic. It was like reading the battle of the Tora all over again and you know how much I loved those chapters. You did such a wonderful job I don't have the words to even tell you. I have a reason as to why we can read rin lemon and not shippo. One shippo cuter and two in the anime shippo everywhere and rin is a sometime feature expect when kidnaped. shippo is like everyone son we all adopted him and to see our little boy grow up is sad and proud but most aren't ready for a lemon. plus shippo doesn't have a big expectence role. we know he's playfull and annoying, just like children or younger sibling. ( yes I really thought about this) and to but him with someone else besides rin is wrong. I loved you lemon it was so tastful. I was wimper muddering shippos not a virgin anymore. thank you for writing out of the box with this no one really show shippo with animal intincts so that was a wonderful change. I would like to see shippo handle rin being pupped. But it's understand able you only have 11 chapter left and we still need to get to the future for the reunion.
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Reviewed By: Ethril Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2007 15:20 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok! I've read everything, and it took several weeks (busy schedule) to do it! But trust me when I say this, it was worth the time to read this wonderful fanfic! You have a great talent here and I can truthfully say I greatly enjoyed the chapter where Rin and Shippo mate. Very nicely done. This is truely a work of genius on your part and I must insist you update as soon as possible so I don't have to wait to long. All tens from me!
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Reviewed By: Come Hither [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2007 22:00 PDT
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Whew! Finally caught up. Went on vacation, got sidetracked, but now I'm up to speed. Didn't want to bombard you with review alert e-mails. Anyway, I really like how this has evolved and how the characters have matured. Initially, I had a bit of trouble wrapping my noodle around a sexually active Shippo. But hey, you've broadened my horizons. I am immensley fond of the little lessons everyone absorbs from Kagome along the way. They're cute. Good point with the correlation of an adult Rin gettin' busy. Gotta hand it to ya, you do the twisted guilt trip very well! I also appreciated the effort you took to gradually walk us into the intimacy, rather than dump it in our laps. I think that's just what a Shippo/Rin scene needed. You also score some extra points for originality. I don't think I've ever read Shippo sex. Oh, question: did I inadvertently skip a chapter, or did I somehow miss Inuyasha going up against the Flame of fear? Or was it something you haven't revealed yet? Or maybe I'm so stinking tired that I'm missing the obvious? I am curious about something also; it seems the tone of your writing has shifted to reflect the growing-up process of the characters. Was this intentional, or has your style simply evolved? I like it. Good job.
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2007 20:23 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT story. It took me three days to read it all, but it was definitely worth it. Your characterization is wonderful, your plot is well-developed, your action scenes are exciting, and your "intimate" scenes are HOT! Trust me, I am not one to fully read a story that I am 89 chapters behind in unless it's TERRIFIC, LOL. I will definitely be looking for updates for this one from now on and checking out your other stories as well. Excellent job.
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Title: *Smirking A Tenful!*
Reviewed By: StephanieRoxUrSox [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2007 11:56 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The only tear that slid down my cheek was the thought that this story only lasted for 11 more chapters... I was going to ask for the time skips but you already answer that question! I love the way everything is going on now... I can't wait for the next update to come face to face with the family of hanyous, youkais, and humans all grown and joined as one unit altogether... it's the most comforting thought for me yet! Your an amazing writer and I'm always in love with the fics you write! The visual aspect that comes with the words used combine with the right mix of humor, drama, and romance!, they definitely rocks my socks and I'm just addicted...! Okay I'm rambling again.. I don't know what I want to see so surprise me! Can't wait for the next update! You did an amazing job- you're soo zealous bout your work so keep up the status!
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Title: *Smirking A Tenful!*
Reviewed By: StephanieRoxUrSox [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2007 11:55 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The only tear that slid down my cheek was the thought that this story only lasted for 11 more chapters... I was going to ask for the time skips but you already answer that question! I love the way everything is going on now... I can't wait for the next update to come face to face with the family of hanyous, youkais, and humans all grown and joined as one unit altogether... it's the most comforting thought for me yet! Your an amazing writer and I'm always in love with the fics you write! The visual aspect that comes with the words used combine with the right mix of humor, drama, and romance!, they definitely rocks my socks and I'm just addicted...! Okay I'm rambling again.. I don't know what I want to see so surprise me! Can't wait for the next update! You did an amazing job- you're soo zealous bout your work so keep up the status!
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Reviewed By: I'm Nobody On: June 01, 2007 02:37 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
only eleven more chapters... :cries: this was an exellent chapter and I egarly await the next one.
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2007 20:09 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter!! Don't worry, I believe that you know what your doing!! If you didn't, we wouldn't have gotten this far in the story!! (LOL) I can't wait for more, so update soon please!! Keep up the awesome work!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2007 19:05 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Chapter. Keep up the terrific work. I hope Kagome and Inuyasha have lots of kids by the time they get to her time. I can't wait for the next chapter. Wonderful!
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