| "Mating Season" Reviews/Comments [ 621 ] |
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2007 14:56 PDT
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I like the format of this chapter it was nice to have all the characters being discussed...but please update soon...I love this story so much and i cant wait for when u post again good luck *bows*
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Reviewed By: LittleSuki [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2007 14:07 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this chap. was soo cute. everyone is either mated or pregnant or married, im surprised im not confused....lol
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Reviewed By: shipporinKIMS11 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2007 13:34 PDT
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That was a great chappie! I was rereading this too *ahem* and if there is a Japanese translation for 'ly' i would REALLY like to know. my name is Emily, so, yeah, i'd just like to know. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: starblade2007 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2007 12:55 PDT
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Woot! I LOVED that chapter :) I can't wait for another update!!!
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Reviewed By: ran_undine [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2007 11:48 PDT
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omg so good!! Love the chapter!! i sooooo can't wait for the next one!! :) very good though. your the best!! i always look forward to new chapters from you!! keep writing. Love and Peace to you! :)
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Title: Weeee.... YAHOOOOOO!!!!
Reviewed By: StephanieRoxUrSox [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2007 22:30 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the latest update caused it actually answered everything I wanted to be answered about the story! haha! EEEK! Rin and Shippo finally go all the way- I'm sooooo happy! Now that everyone is paired up all that's left is for some hentai action between Kohaku and his chicky! I want to hear more about these new kids in the story, and apparently the twins or whatever that Kagome is having- OMG, so many kids- these guys are like repopulating the earth... dadadadamn! haha... I wonder what would you name the relationship between Shippo and Rin's kids? Cuz they may not be blood cousins but they're cousins none the less and mates! Lets just make it family, huh? Haha- um... Only thing lacking was the need for the outside characters but then again it's always a back and forth battle between who to focus on- I'm positive we'll see the others again- but yeah let's have some kid focus... Thanks for the major update needed- I'm a little miffed at the long wait but then again I tend to get sidetrack with life as well- haha, And you made it up with like 2 OD long and chalkful of suspense and plot chapters! You're an amazing writer!!!! Love the new update and I think you did a F***KING BANGING JOB (srry for vocab but words can't really describe the excellence of the work done here) I can't wait to see what's up next for this story! Faithful reviewer, Stephanie
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Reviewed By: Caitriona [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2007 12:48 PDT
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I loved the concept of an "Inuyasha moment." The whole chapter was lovely.
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Reviewed By: Caitriona [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2007 12:04 PDT
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Chpater 87 - the fight. WOW The final attack of SHippou is a humdinger and very well written. A less talented artist wouldn't have been able to write that out well enough to make it believeable. Great Job
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Reviewed By: kittenprophetess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2007 15:19 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If I were able to give it a 1000 I would. I love it. It is an amazing story. That last chapter with Rin and Shippo was brilliant, steamy and sweet at the same time. Keep up the amazing work.
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Title: With Sharp Pointy Teeth! Ch 8
Reviewed By: Come Hither [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2007 12:27 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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The bunny thing's from The Holy Grail, right? Nice touch! Every time I think about the French Taunter, I giggle insanely. I'm getting some rather odd looks as we speak. My favorite line is when the peasant says to Arthur: Some watery tart hands him a scimitar and he thinks he's the bloody king of England Have you seen The Life of Brian? If not, ya gotta! Thanks for the giggles!
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Title: Just finished ch. 3
Reviewed By: Come Hither [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2007 10:52 PDT
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Yep, I do remember this. And I am enjoying it very much. The distraction is very welcomed right now. Good job. I read one of your other shorter fics first, though & loved it. Hmm, who knew that in the cosmic chain of events we call life that pocky tiffs would lead to masturbation, which in turn leads to hot, sweaty sex. I'll have to remember that for future reference. If only all of life's point A's to point C's were so much fun. I think I'm gonna start cramming pocky down my hubby's throat while he's in the middle of watching baseball. Think it'll work?
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Reviewed By: Come Hither [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2007 07:51 PDT
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Oh, hey I didn't know this was you. I think I started reading this a long time ago and lost track. I haven't really had time to get into reading anything in a while. You know, pace of life and all that jazz. I am looking forward to a really good distraction though. It's been a crappy week, found out my dog had cancer & kidney failure and had to put him to sleep. It royally sucked. But that's neither here nor there. I'm glad I will have something good to take my mind off it and will review once I get into it. I'm sure it's good if your other story was any indication. If I remember correctly, I did really like what I read of this so far.
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Reviewed By: Fyrloche [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2007 07:26 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Beautiful! Shippou had a great citrous event and came through with high marks for style and sensitivity. chuckles That was well written and definately something that you don't see very often. Shippou and Rin (my personal favorite pairing for Rin) do not get enough attention. I liked the previous chapter, as well. Loved the fight scene because it did make sense. Sesshoumaru has always kept such a tight reign over his emotions that a fear attack could work against him. Nit pickers moment You misspelled a word. Actually, you just used the wrong spelling of the word. Heal should have been heel. Sorry, just thought you would want to know if any errors where found. Anyway, I am awaiting your next chapter. Later, Fyrloche.
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Reviewed By: "..." On: May 23, 2007 07:26 PDT
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omg i loved it! i knew the two were destined for eachother!!! *squeals* omg im having such a girlie moment....i cnt believe they're finally together.....i cant wait to read what the next chater has for us.....
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Reviewed By: vkp23 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2007 01:26 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been following your story for quite some time now, and let me just say...I LOVE IT!! Shippou and Rin were so cute. It reminded me a lot of my husband and I. We were both virgins, and are our first and only's for eachother. the sweet akwardness was realistic and cute. It really broght back "old times". LOL. I can't wait to read more! Please update soon!
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