| "Mating Season" Reviews/Comments [ 621 ] |
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Reviewed By: ducttapekitty [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2010 16:30 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really loved your story, and will definitely read some others that you have. One of the best inuyasha stories that I have read.
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Title: One of the Greatest Inu-FanFic of All Times
Reviewed By: Kimiko Sakaki [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2010 16:33 PST
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what a wonderful journey this has been. it seem like yesterday when i've only begun the first chapter, when kagome had discovered inuyasha doing the "dirty deed" ;D. And now, look where it has brought us. Hey wait...it WAS only last week since i've started this. =] Your story...it gives a whole new meaning to the word "canon". It really seemed like these events actually happened after (or during since the real series is now complete with different ending) the completed manga. It really gives us a true fantasy of what life could be for Inuyasha and Kagome. I love your character development, how Inuyasha and Kagome (but especially inuyasha) and of course Sesshoumaru. Rin as well, at first it was quite disturbing as to imagine Rin and Shippou "going at it" as they say but got used to it when I've learned they were already over 18 years of age. Kagura was actually one of my favouriate character; she had such a compassionate side to her that I never thought of and I'm glad you wrote that out. The family tree...what can I say? Even though it confused the heck out of me, I'm still so glad that after such a long journey, the Taisho family has grown exponentially in happiness and love. The events that you've put during the time span of 500 amazed me to no ends. Your patience and just pure...focus on this story is just so inspirational. What touched me the most was the different circumstances the "Inu-kids" (as I liked to call them) had gone through since WWI and WWII. It does add an interesting insight as to actual history with your own creation. Overall, this story is not to be forgotten. It certainly is (and i say with no lie and doubt) one of the greatest story I've ever read. As you have listed from the authors that have inspired you for your writing, I would say that other than those talented writers, you would also be one of my idol author and inspiration! Now this is what I call a story, an Inuyasha canon fanfiction. Well done, "indeed" (as Sesshoumaru would have said). Kimiko
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Reviewed By: Just a tidbit On: December 25, 2009 18:24 PST
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Just fyi, technically, if she was on any hormonal method of birth control she wouldn't actually enter any "heat" type thing. That would emply she was entering a fertile phrase, which is the exact thing hormonal birth controls prevent. Not a big deal really, it's just a story, but I thought I'd drop by and tell you. Who knows, it might help you win millions on tv one day.
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Title: OMG!!! Ch 3!
Reviewed By: tinita [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2009 02:24 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was awesome, it made me tear up a little. Good job so far; I can't wait to read the rest. This is going on my faves list as are you as a fave author.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2009 10:03 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wonderful story... really liked it... good job... great work!
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Reviewed By: BouShea On: November 29, 2009 22:07 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Tahnk you for this epic tale. Their are moment to be reread over and over as timeless classics.
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Reviewed By: BouShea On: November 29, 2009 22:07 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Tahnk you for this epic tale. Their are moment to be reread over and over as timeless classics
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Reviewed By: i like it On: July 06, 2009 12:31 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm reading Heaven A.K.A Mating season right now and i love it!
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Reviewed By: i like it On: July 06, 2009 12:30 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm reading Heaven A.K.A Mating season right now and i love it!
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Title: sorry...
Reviewed By: Ariel Himura [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2009 14:52 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yeah sorry its been a while...ive been busy with life and well i kinda fell out of the fanfic loop (i started to read real books...but i know im missing some good stories out there...) well i finally formatted and printed out the rest of the story...here are some numbers for you... The story itself: 630 pages A/N and extras: +21 pages Total number of pages: 651 pages o_O i feel bad for all of the trees that i just killed...but it went to a good cause and i will always have a hard copy of the story... once again good job...it definitely was a surprise at every turn...i cant wait for the other ideas that are swimming around in your head... much love for creative minds, Ariel Himura ^_~
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Reviewed By: AngelHeart21 On: May 06, 2009 15:03 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed this story very much. You did a great job of making Inuyasha your own. I hope you will continue to write. :)
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Reviewed By: Darkil [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2009 09:16 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thou there are some grammar errors at points throughout it, I think it'd be hard to write something better, I don't think anyone of the people who have pointed out the errors could write a 100 chapter book without an error in it, and besides, I think the errors are a testimony as to how you have bettered yourself as an author from the begining of this story to the end, just as this whole story is a testamony to if the fans had it their way, all of your stories would neverend. Oneshot to 100 chapters, that just blows my mind, and shows just how well you can capture an audience, if it weren't for the fact that this is a fan fiction, you could make alot of money off this story, I can't wait until you publish a book, its gonna be amazing, love you splendent, your awesome! PS this is actually the story that got me
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Reviewed By: twist1012 On: February 09, 2009 09:46 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well there was a few mistakes. When you wrote " Meet someone knew" the knew part was suppose to be spelled new. It happed through out the story and isn't a really a huge deal,but I wanted you to know. It was a great story and I'm looking foward to read more from you. Twist
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Reviewed By: johneotaku4life [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2009 15:33 PST
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I... I love you... There! I said it! What else can I say. Oh! The story is awesome. The gift that keeps on giving.
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Reviewed By: goofy_goober [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2008 21:33 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow ok so i finally finished reading it and lets just say that was an amazing ride.... i loved the story the beginning was a great hook and i am glad that you continued where you were going to first leave off... I loved how the plot progressed and I think that you did an amazing job with how long this story actually was... it was pretty creative considering you had to fill in 500 years!!!! cannot wait to read more stories!!
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