| "Mating Season" Reviews/Comments [ 621 ] |
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Reviewed By: mamine On: November 08, 2008 16:33 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE YOUR STORY!!!!!!!!! IT WAS AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: PHEW!
Reviewed By: xxxshikonxxx [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2008 05:50 PDT
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WHAT SHOULD I SAY...HMMM...THE BEST FANFIC I HAVE EVER, EVER, EVER READ! CONGRATULATIONS! YOU WORKED HARD FOR IT,AND IT WAS WORTH IT. 500 OUT OF 10
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Title: PHEW!
Reviewed By: xxxshikonxxx [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2008 08:49 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was on the edge in chapter 61. I'm at peace knowing that Inuyasha is safe now. Great writing! i love this story! it's the best o have read until now! o can't wait to read what happens in the next, approximately,40 chapters.
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Title: AWWW!
Reviewed By: xxxshikonxxx [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2008 06:51 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just loved the speeches of inuyasha and kagome!
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Title: The End
Reviewed By: ~Sieg~ On: September 20, 2008 07:21 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well i just finished the 100 chapter. I Think that the story was great. Their were a few very few grammar and spelling errors. About chapter 90 the story got very boring enough to keep you reading but still boring. I find it neat how you actually took time to make it 500 years with out just jumping that in one chapter. I did like the Rin and Shippo pairing one of a kind if i may say so. Only thing I found as a waste of time was telling what happen to Jaken and Ah-Un and the other misfits. We all knew Jaken was going to follow His lord same with Ah-Un, And who really cares about the rest of the misfits. Over all it was a great story and easy to follow. Keep upp the good work. ~~Sieg
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Title: Summary
Reviewed By: ~Sieg~ On: September 15, 2008 17:15 PDT
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I just made it to chapter 5 and i saw you A/n. I do believe that, So be prepared to laugh, and cry, and teeter at the edge of your seat. There is action and adventure, blood and gore, romance and hentai and WAFF. Follow Inuyasha and Kagome as they experience the joys and hardships of mated life and parenthood over the next five hundred years. I proudly present to you, my masterpiece that is Mating Season. should easily be your summary for the story. So far the story is good at keeping you wanting to read more. I would see why you decided to continue writing. ~~Sieg
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Reviewed By: little_white_kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2008 02:51 PDT
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Oh, and that blind-fic I owe the two of us! xD
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Reviewed By: little_white_kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2008 02:43 PDT
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Geez... I'd never gotten around to reading this one of yours since it was so long, but I'm starting now. xP Chapter 19... I have a situation like that, just a bit more complicated. I'm the one who was in love with my friend, then she went and got a boyfriend, after YEARS of it being just us. I'm still heartbroken about it, so I can really understand how Eri feels... Lol, it's more complicated cuz I don't think I'm gay... It was JUST her. Oh, and btw, sorry about the huge delay on our emails! I'll try and get on it soon! >.
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Title: still rereading/catching up
Reviewed By: KawaiiGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2008 23:34 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story's plot has been pretty good so far, albeit a little on the Mary Sue side. Chapter fourteen is in desperate need of a revamping though. One thing I've noticed is that you don't use names or character titles very often. You've really used 'he' and 'she' excessively throughout the story. It hasn't become confusing, since you seem to be sticking with the basic, two-person or one-sided conversations (though I'm hoping this "error" is fixed by that time), but it's a little annoying (and impersonal). One of those things that isn't exactly wrong... it just isn't done. But that's about it. Again, my only suggestion is to get a/another beta. Especially for chapter fourteen.
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Title: Brandospands
Reviewed By: Brandospands [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2008 14:07 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohhh myyy gooddd... This story wass sooooo awesome!! I was in my only little world while I was reading it because it was sooo good and I just got sucked in! I cant believe how wonderful this story was and im glad you made the time to write this for all of us fans :D. Im so glad you didnt stop at just 5 chapters! Thank you for all your hard work! I cant wait to read the sequels and all of your other fanfics and just wow. I dont know what to say thats how good it was lol. I read your whole story straight for like 3 or 4 days thats all I did was read this story cause I just wanted to know what was gonna happen next and it was amazing. I was so sad that it ended but not all stories go on forever lol. It would be so awesome if they made this story into a movie or it got published or anything omg I lovveed it! I just cant believe how awesome it was lol. I just want you to know even if some people didnt post reviews on here they probably still loved it I just wish every single person who read this would give you credit and give you your props. Well I just wanted you to know you made my whole day when I read this and I still think about it and dont even look at the show the same anymore lol cause Im like come on inuyasha go talk to kagome lol but I know he doesnt but still. JUSST THANK YOU SOO MUCH!! I cant wait to read all your other stories :D -Brandy
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Title: Avid Reader
Reviewed By: KawaiiGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2008 05:50 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Oh my god! I cannot believe you COMPLETED this story. *faints from shock* I had lost hope a while ago, removing it from my fav list (Spring cleaning), when something told me to go the main IY page. I am so glad I did! *gives you a cookie* I WILL have to reread the story, but if I remember correctly I loved this fic when it first came out. You even included a family tree?! O_o *bows* Expect a shit load of positive reviews in the near future.
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Reviewed By: inunut On: June 29, 2008 12:53 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
And all because of pocky..... This was an amazing story to read and I loved every bit of it! (though the family tree did take a while for my head to get around!)
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Title: Chapter 4 rewrite
Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2008 15:06 PDT
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This is a lot, lot more solid. I like the interplay between Kirara and Shippou and M/K...I like the extra depth you managed to put into both the rationale and reactions. Nice.
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Title: Ah coincidence!
Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2008 12:53 PDT
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I was once again rereading this story...started while waiting for the manga to come out day before, and had gotten up to chapter 38, and look what I found! You'd revised the begining! Since the opening is still fresh in mind (just reread the first chapter), I can honestly say you have managed to make some of the things that were a bit vague in the description (InuYasha's position when Kagome catches him, for instance) a lot easier to visualize. And I think you made it a lot clearer how Kagome actually was feeling about Inu when all this started - if you'd only read the first chapter before, it would have been possible to believe she was being more teenager curious rather than already wanting him...I think it's clearer now that she is very interested, and that hearing him call her name was certainly stirring something in her...Good going! Now to read the rest of the updates! - Knittingknots
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Reviewed By: avoria [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2008 19:55 PDT
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Ha! I read this when it was little more than a one-shot, and I loved it. Coming back to read the rest of it, I've discovered that I still love it. Great job!
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