| "Heart Breakers League" Reviews/Comments [ 200 ] |
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Title: this is bull
Reviewed By: Critic 2 On: March 05, 2006 16:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic sux, YOU people don't get it... just becuase this Shar character has reveiws doesen't mean she can right it just means that she has people that are kissing her ass and just humuoring her. Get a life people and read stuff worth raeding... Their are so many grammaticall errors and its not even THAT orijinal! I mean, come on! Youre just making a fool outta yourself by posting your work Shar! You shouldnt even be getting all these reveiws! Your shit sux ass! so just give up! In fact, this stuff has hit an all time low in my books! you say InuGrrrl is your idol, but really, youre just making HER look bad! Go find a differnt hobbie bitch... and you should really start listening to what your critics tell you! Because obveously if you have more than one critic, your work bites!
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Title: Oh MY F*ING GOD
Reviewed By: Portia(ADarkNightsObsession) On: February 26, 2006 01:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god that critic is so fucking stupid! Did they just really say that WE have no lives? Because from what i see if they are so stupid that all they do is say idiotic things about other peoples stories (and are the only ones saying them i might add) and not only that but then COME BACK to comment on other peoples reviews about them, Then they're just talking about themselves as the ones lacking lives. They don't even have the courage to log in and say these things so people can look at their horrid writing. I am sorry but i've actually been published twice and am going to be again at the end of this year, and I think your writing is wonderful, original, and witty. I laughed and cryed reading this fic, and those illiterate morons with no talent of their own who are probably hideous inside and out can go shove it where the sun don't shine...and by the way before i ever even found this story i had inugrrrl on my favorite storys list so THERE! Gah i'm done...oh and if whatever asshole wrote that comment wants to see proof...go to the nearest book store...look in the poetry section...and pick up either "Pieces of Me" or "Nothing held back" i'm 15 been published twice will be again recognize talent when i see it and if either inuugrrl or you shar shar are in California and are under 18 go to Writegirl.org...or .com...i don't remember...and join because you BOTH deserve to be published!
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Reviewed By: Portia(ADarkNightsObsession) On: February 26, 2006 00:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'M IN LOVE WITH YOU!!!!!! Please hurry? I'm not sure how much longer i can wait till I hear your sweet words of wonder again! Your writing is so wonderful! It actually made me cry a little at the sad parts...and i am soooooo not a crier. I will give you chocolates and endless love!!!!!! Update? *Puppy Dog Eyes*
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Title: Luv it!!
Reviewed By: skdfj On: February 24, 2006 00:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love ur story!!
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Title: SHIT YEAH!!!!!
Reviewed By: LadyWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2006 05:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh MY GOD!!!!!! Thay put u back up I can't breath! I think I just die sis shary I hope get the inu pics we sent to u. Terry says hes gonna try to send the pics of him lets pray! I lov ya can't wait to talk to ya! Go to your email now ok! I MISSED THIS FIC AND MY TAO MOONS SOOOOOOOOOO MUCHHHHHHHHHHHHH! I so HAPPY it's back may it always stay.^_^ XP
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Title: ACK!!!
Reviewed By: Shadowgirl435294 On: February 16, 2006 20:52 CST
Comment/Review:
Crud don't scare me like that!! I thought you weren't coming back and continuing this for a sec! Well, write up the next chapter! I'm dieing to see what happens!!!!!
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Reviewed By: mirokusgirl (not on-line) On: February 14, 2006 13:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god I'm so relieved that you'll be updating this story, I;m just soo in love with it! Any way happy valentines!
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Title: heart breakers league
Reviewed By: Watersorceress [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2006 17:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is such an awesome fic u have to update it soon. i gotta know what happens next. u r a great writer and i am also not very friendly with media miner people cause they destroyed 2 of my fanfics that took forever to write. u rock keep writing.
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Title: Suggestion
Reviewed By: Shadowgirl435294 On: January 04, 2006 17:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok,I love this fic! And When I ready of Kagome's now crisis, I thought of a song that fit her perfectly, and thought you could use the lyrics in one of the chapters in the future! The song's title is called "Break My Heart" from Hilary Duff. It's really fits Kagome right now! Trust me! Well, like I said before I absolutly love this story so please update soon!! Ja ne!
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Title: LMAO
Reviewed By: Kagaga No Subaba (NSI) On: January 04, 2006 11:15 CST
Comment/Review:
No I am not. LOL I was only kidding! And I know you never got those e-mails hehe, I was only messin with ya! So naahh... :P tee hee BTW thatnks for the snappy review... though it had nothing to do with my fic... have you even read it yet??? LMAO
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Reviewed By: Lucient [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2006 14:07 CST
Comment/Review:
I demand a retraction, I told you I never got those emails and you're making me out to be this asshat, and I'm not. Why would I ignore your email? I'm not like that. :( You've hurt cassanova's feelings. lol. ;)
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Reviewed By: miaa_hiaa [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2005 09:49 CST
Comment/Review:
damnit *stumbles out from parents hold* HA! i beat you! my parents said i couldn't come on meadia miner beacause of the lemons...T_T but i got on ~_^ awsome chappie! super twist! omg i can't belive you did that though
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Reviewed By: star963852 On: December 29, 2005 00:43 CST
Comment/Review:
ok i just read the review from #1 critic and let me just say that i think this is one of the best stories ive ever read and if you have over 100 reviews then im not the only one that thinks that....and if they hate it so much why dont they just stop reading it and not review on it at all especially if they seem to hate u and everyone else so much....i dont get it but i still love this story:)
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Reviewed By: star963852 On: December 29, 2005 00:28 CST
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OMG that was the best twist i have ever read...i didnt see it comin...u need to update soon i need to know what happens
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Title: Twist!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Shadowgirl435294 On: December 27, 2005 14:20 CST
Comment/Review:
What the-?! Inuyasha's an agent?! He was supposed to kill Kagome?!?! That was way unexpsected!!! You have a true talent at this stuff!! Keep writing and maybe if you change the names of the characters you can make this into a novel!
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