| "Heart Breakers League" Reviews/Comments [ 200 ] |
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Title: Good
Reviewed By: T-bugs On: December 24, 2005 22:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lol I've been checking every day for more chapters to your story. I really love it. -.- But please let it have a Kagome and Inuyasha together having wild doggy sex for a happy ending! Hehe Inuyasha be mad at me. Any way keep up the good work and lol YOU TELL THAT CRITIC!!! Lol Keep It Real... Peace
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Title: Inuyasha's wife:D (i can dream, cant i? lol)
Reviewed By: KaGoMe StAr On: December 23, 2005 18:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bold O M G:| i cannot believe ur doing THIS!!!! wow...... i was soooooooooooooo shocked when i read the latest chapters... im like..... shes Bold REALLY donE it this time, lol. jks jks. i think this is a Bold CRZY ASS story. its been like that since the Bold BEGINNING OF TIME!!! lol. i think that its about time sum1 makes a story more..... fufilling than usual. i mean, yea, its nice to have a story filled wit lots of lemons and prolems that seem childish, but i think its even Bold BETTER when sum1 has the Bold GUTS to make Kagome and Inuyasha go through HELL and Bold SHIT! lol. i wasnt expecting inuyasha to b in another organization. that was Bold SOO good, i just sat here, reading it over and over thinking, where does this child protegy live! lol i Bold NEED to find her and make her Bold TEACH ME! lol. like always, your stories kick ASS! cant wait for more stories to come *crossing fingers* its on my christmas list and new years resolution: more Bold KICK ASS, BRAIN KNOCKING, OUT OF THIS WORLD MASTERPIECES from u:D well, i got to go re-read the last few chapters, just incase i missed anything when i fainted from shock. lol keep doing wat u do:D
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Reviewed By: leila-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2005 13:29 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
whaaaa! i just read all of your low class hate reviews from #1 critic and had the best laugh in ages! we all know, if someone spends their precious, or in critics case, not so precious time to write a even one review, they give a shit. even if it's an evil review! don't read if you don't like. also (critic), go and suck that ginormous 12 in. cock of inu's and choke instead of liking it. arigatoUUUUUUU for that one lady wolf! LMMFAO. fuck. can't people just write and read their fics in peace while they enjoy their non-existant lives that paid for their computer for the SOLE reason to read and write fanfics. FUUCK. any fic with 100+ reviews has got to have something good going for it. and don't even get me started on luc and inugrrrl fic bashing. i will tear your shit up. DON'T go there. you won't return.
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Reviewed By: leila-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2005 13:21 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwww. why'd ya go and do that!? everyone, not just inu had major secrets. ha. shippou, kouga and miro were agents too? lmao. poor girls. atleast they weren't trying to kill anyone!! now you go and write your kick ass "unexpected" lemon and make it all better for me. k.
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Title: Sugars
Reviewed By: Pistachio [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2005 19:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am sorry! I forgot to tell you something. I loved the chapters no matter how sad they were. I think your story is wonderful. And if it alright to say, I am very, very mad at Sessh. [Please excuse the use of the nickname. I kind of forgot how to spell his name and I did not think it appropiate to use a honorific with a nickname like that. Oh dear I am sorry, I am rambling. Sorry.] The twists took me for a ride and left me in the middle of a desert, that is for sure. But if there ever was a twist, then those were pretty good. I just hope [in the small part of my mind, okay big part] that they untwist. **^_^** Anyway, I have said what I wanted and that is that. [not really, I just don't want to bore you.] Happy Christmas! ^_^ Shante'
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Title: Shocked...
Reviewed By: Pistachio [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2005 19:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello! How are you? I hope well. I am so, well. shocked... I almost cried when I read the last two chapters. Poor Kagome, and InuYasha. I hope they have a happily ever after. I think that is a little "Fairy Tale" but it is what I hope. Is it weird to be worried over a story? I hope not, because I am. Well however you write it, it will be wondereful I am sure. Happy Christmas! ^_^ Shante'
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Reviewed By: xchibi_ahouX On: December 22, 2005 02:01 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
People can be so rude.. anyways dont listen to that person, he/she has something stuck up her/his butt. and cant get it out. If you dont like dont read it. geez . Anyways great job! Made me cry defently! I was so not expecting that twist. damn you. lol :D kiddin. great job though I hope you have the song. Too Far Gone. that song is great check it out. and like woo you rock. keep it going!
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Title: Say What Now! pt.2
Reviewed By: LadyWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2005 21:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
#1 critic! SUCK MY YASHA-BOYS BIG ASS 12in DICK and like it BITCH! U fuck wit my sis call her a ho! If u don't like the way her fic is or my big sis kiki or my big bro luc than DON"T READ HO HO HO! #1 my ass bitch what u got to make you # Fuckin 1 asshat! Don't start shit u know u can't take bitch! We all love her work and kiki,luc too! So don't hate bitch cuz this is your earful ho...don't think I'm the only one! From us to u KEEP YOU SHIT TO YASELF okay!^_^ AS for lenelene,Kiki,Luc y'all know we lov y'all thats what matters loves:-P Lw Oh and I want kags&inu back together shar shar aHHHHHHHHHH
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Reviewed By: Yokoshima-chan (Nope, not signed in. Shock.) On: December 21, 2005 21:18 CST
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D'AH! Juh... D'AH! *sobs in the corner* Stupid people... beat Sesshy with a halibut... crush him dead... yell at the boys... *continues muttering* *breaks into tears*
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Title: Say What Now pt.1
Reviewed By: LadyWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2005 20:55 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh My GOD SIS! get them back in now lenelene! I sooo wanna hurt sessy now hes made me so mad I can't even think AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH I lov ya keep it coming lenelene! U know kiki,Luc,and u keep us rockin...terry is so mad right now he wants to fuck sessy up!! He says he sill lov ya and your work 4EVER! Just say a big FUCK YOU! to everone that don't like your work.^_^
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Title: LMAO
Reviewed By: Kagaga No Subaba [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2005 18:08 CST
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gotta agree with ya Luc, things get so dramatic on this bloody site... *Ponders* a life huh... totally forgot what that is... jk... mine is on hold until school starts back up again... curse you finals!!! BTW... can anyone here please tell me how to do italics and bold and junk... still kinda lost... LOL
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Title: AAHHH!!!!!
Reviewed By: Kagaga No Subaba (NSI) On: December 21, 2005 17:20 CST
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AAAHHH!!! *Squeals Insanely* OMGOMGOMGOMG!!!! LUCIENT REVIEWED MY FIC!!!! AHHH!!!!!! *Melts* Sorry guys! But I am a freakin huge fan of his work and I can't believe he finally reviewed!!! *SQUEALS AGAIN* YAYA!!!!! *Jumps around*
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Reviewed By: Lucient [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2005 17:12 CST
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HAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAA *wipes tears from eyes* That was GREAT! I haven't been reading much lately, mainly because I have a life... I know, the shame... but mon dieu! That was the funniest damned thing I've ever read! Someone has the time to come here and make a snotty 12 year old comment, but everyone here needs lives! AND... as usual... they don't post their names! OHHHHHHH it's so funny! I got a message from one "accountable" person, who hasn't used her account in several months, not to mention, her shit sucks as bad as mine, said I. ROFL. This shit is too good! Let's all go around and bitch that this story sucks and that story sucks. What the hell ever. Oh man, my ribs hurt this is so funny. This encourages me to write more. Makes me feel like someone out there is definitley jealous of all your talents. You should write more too! Let's ALL write more! Don't bother arguing with the jealous party there, guys. Take it as the laugh it is. LYK PNG INUGRRL U SUXX0RZ!! AN U 2 SHARSHAR U n00b!!1@!22!shift1! AN LUCIENT UR SOOO G@Y U F@GG! Oh lordy. Let's all write more! :D
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Title: LMAO
Reviewed By: Kagaga No Subaba [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2005 17:08 CST
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You guys are freakin hilarious!!! I love the fact that you freaked out over the twist! I died laughing from reading your reviews! and keep em comin too! I just went from like 120 to 123 in a freakin day!! WHOO HOO!!!
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Reviewed By: QuestionableIntentions [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2005 16:21 CST
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*breathes deeply* Michiko...stay calm...stay calm... OH MY FUCKING GOSH!!!!! WHAT THE FUCKING HELL!!! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!! They broke up?!??!?! WHAT?!?!? *screams* ok...this chapter killed me...yeah..it did. *lies on floor in big melted puddle of goo* btw hun. i'm sending you an email...i was talking to kiki while i read this...and you gotta see my response. lmao. you'll fall out of your seat. ^_^ luv ya! xoxo, michiko
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