| "Heart Breakers League" Reviews/Comments [ 200 ] |
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Title: Oh ho
Reviewed By: Your #1 critic On: December 21, 2005 15:14 CST
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Oooh an earful, that's soooo horrible! I still stand by what I said, InuGrrrl still can't write and neither can you or Lucient. If you ask me, YOU'RE the whore with bad taste in writing. That's pretty much obvious though, I mean... what's your deal with the All American Rejects? You use their songs in everything and it's getting sickening. If I were them, I'd sue because some lame-ass writer is using the songs! Your fic makes a joke out of everything they do, but hell that's fine because they suck ass. I don't need to prove shit to you because my five year old sister can write better than you can!InuGrrrl you and Lucient are just a bunch of amature authors... why you people get reviews is beyond me!
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Title: Listen up pal!
Reviewed By: Kagaga No Subaba [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2005 15:01 CST
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Alright smart-ass... I don't give a shit about what you say about me, for the reason that you are cowering behind a freakin ANON name! However, don't you dare come on this site criticizing my fans because I swear to Kami that you're gonna get an earful! My readers are special to me and I won't sit by and listen to you bash on them! Especially Kiki, I don't know what the hell you've been reading, but she's easily and obviously one of the most talented authors on this damn site! I can care less about your opinion of my writing skills, when you yourself have nothing to prove. Where's the link to YOUR fics? YOUR works? If you're not going to have the audacity to give up your name, then I shouldn't have to deal with you. And for someone who hates this "Garbage Fic" so bloody much, you sure have a lot to bitch about. *Yawns* Now if you don't mind, I have way more important people to impress.
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Title: you guys are fucked up
Reviewed By: Your #1 critic On: December 21, 2005 13:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't see what's so great about this fic. It's not amazing, and neither are the other authors you recommended. Their stories suck as bad as this one! You people don't know what the fuck you're talking about, I mean seriously, just because you all kiss each others asses doesn't mean that your fics are great! This is an example of one of those poorly written ones! Sharlene, your skills suck just as bad as the people who read and review this garbage. And Inugrrl can't write either, so I think you should just do this site a favor and quit. This shitty ass junk isn't even worth the reviews it gets. You people have no lives. So whatever losers.
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Title: I'm BAAAACKKKKK
Reviewed By: LadyWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2005 07:19 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Like oh no tell me just tell me sessy goin get his ass kick for what ever hes about to say!!! I can't wait...whats going on! Oh and that B-I-T-C-H kikho she need to get FUCKED UP LIKE NOW!! See I know kiki would love the shit outta that lemon! U knew she be mader then a mother fucker at kikyo too!!! AHHHHHH I LOVE IT SOOOO COOOOOL keep it rockin sis BOOM BABY BOOM!!!!!
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Title: AHHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAHHH!!
Reviewed By: LadyWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2005 07:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY GOD! u did it u talk about the boxers! HAHAHAA!!! I love ya 4ever lene lene Terry is so on the floor! It's to funny!! *I'm sooo going to get u back he says* Rick says ok he'll be your 24/7 men-ho ho. *Yash is now killing him!* OH MY OH MY u out did ya self wit that one what sessy talkin bout? AAHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!
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Title: DAMN CLIFFY!!!!
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2005 00:44 CST
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ACK! Girl you are rockin' this shit! What could the secret be??? Damn it! This is toooo much! Oh & i forgive the dogs now, lol. But only because they went Cujo on that bitch's ass. I'm also glad Sesshomaru got his ass handed to him. Woot! Don't make us wait too long for the next chap...i'm positively itching to know the secret!
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Title: GWAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!
Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2005 21:08 CST
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RRRRRGGGGG!!!!! **pulls on her hair** MUST.KNOW.YASH'S.*OTHER*.DIRTY.SECRET!!!!!
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Reviewed By: leila-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2005 17:01 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well, crap, sh*t, hell, and damnation! what do you want, the veins in our foreheads to explode?! update, please. : ) i wish i had read these chaps earlier. i am veery curious about yash's other "dirty little secret". on a lighter note, i'm glad he got his memory back. that makes things easier for kagome. man, sessh is a real jack-off in this fic in regards to yash. lol. but, i guess he might have his reasons. i need to know what this secret with yash is. : ( p.s. why wouldn't i include you in my bio. you're kagaga no subaba!! *wink*
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Reviewed By: leila-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2005 16:41 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DAMMIT DAMMIT!! i have not been notified for like 3 of the last chaps. i swear i could maim something right now! i am so sorry. i just checked and saw that you had updated. what a f*cking biotch. wtf do i have you on fav. authors to get notified for updates if m.m doesn't f-ing do it's job. ughhh. *pounds m.m in the head* i'm off to catch up. i'll review when i've caught up and calmed down. X D
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Title: Hehe, using this to my advantage
Reviewed By: Kagaga No Subaba [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2005 13:07 CST
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Looky looky! I just can't get over this being able to write in your own fic thing! Hehe, I just finished Chapter 18 for HBL and I think just a few more chaps and this story is gonna end... I think... not sure yet... things kinda took a change during the last few chaps and I think I gotta work everything out again... I seemed to have misplaced the information lodged within in my brain... *GRINS* but anywho... thanks again to all my wonderful fans! It's such an honor to know that so many people love my fic... and hopefully when I'm done with HBL, YHS1 will get put back on... I'm almost done with it! YAY!!! Stupid editing process!!! *Squees* I just couldn't help myself! I had to re-read Suicide Rain again! LMFAO!!!! And I even left another review! InuGrrrl is dah shyt guys! *Blows Kisses* Well, I must be off... sooooo many lives to ruin! KEHE
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Title: laughing like a mad-gurl
Reviewed By: Muju On: December 20, 2005 12:58 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude! I laughed so hard when Inu punched fluffy! That whole scene was just the funniest little bit! and then you had to do the whole Cujo thinkg! Priceless!!! Although... now I'm starting to get a bit freaked out... what did you do to Yash? What's Sesshy trying to do this time??? Also, YAY TO INUGRRRL FOR THE 100th REVIEW THING!!! WE OWE HER ONE!!! *CHEERS*
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Title: OHMIGOD!!!
Reviewed By: Fuji Film On: December 20, 2005 12:55 CST
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SHARLENE YOU LITTLE BAKA!!! I SWEAR IF WE WERE AT SCHOOL I'D STRANGLE YOU!!! HOW DARE YOU DO THAT TO KAGOME!!! WAHHHH!!! IT'S SO UPSETTING!!!! AND INUYASHA!!!! WHY WHY WHY!!!!??? -Smiles- Okay... i think I'm done now...
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Reviewed By: miaa_hiaa [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2005 12:23 CST
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omfkg XD i hate you so much that i'm going to read the whole thing over again XD at least i only had to wait one day for the cliffy to end your so horriable to me....
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Title: OVER 100 REVIEWS!!!
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2005 09:30 CST
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Shar-Shar!!! Over a 100 Boo! *Does the happy dance* I fekt so sad when i read this chap. AWWWWWWWWW Sesshomaru is SUCH a fucking asshole. Ungh, I don't like his effeminate ass at all, lol. Poor InuYasha...he's trying to remember. BUT Q, did he just forget Kags or every damn thing? Grrr. She should have stopped him-dammit! You are really taking this angst into my playground :P I LOVE IT!!! But at the same time...damn. Now I see what my readers complain about, lol. Oh & yah, Leila-chan is the shit. Her reviews always make me grin. She's on my hit list ^.^
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Title: No that bitch didn't...
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2005 09:26 CST
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I just know kinky-blow of a hoe did NOT just shoot ka-go-me! OMG, that bitch dun fell and bumped her head! And them dogs...bite a bitch would ya? You gonna just stand there looking like big ol' booga bears?! Break that bitch down like a lawn chair! Grr...yall ain't eatin' tonight! ^.^ Don't worry Kags, that bitch is just jealous! Girl you are writing the SHIT outta this. Dayum! Do dat shyt!
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