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| "Heart Breakers League" Reviews/Comments [ 200 ] | | Pages (14): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 › » ] | Title: DAMMIT! I DIDN'T GET A NOTICE!!!!
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2005 09:20 CST
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Shar-Shar, you have to start e-mailing me updates because this shit is so lame!!! I was three, THREE chaps behind!!!! GRRRRRR So i'm leaving you THREE reviews, as it should have been, dammit :P Okay... That leamon was Hawt Dammmit -gimme some mo'!!! LOL All up in the levator, all spread out on the table...that's what i'm talking about!!! He tore that ass the fuck up! lmao! *presses thighs together* Dayum!
| Reviewed By: BaBy sTaR [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2005 03:08 CST
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Hehex.. Thx gal... I'll stay adorable and you keep rockin aitez??? Hehex. Man.. Kag got shot.. Kik realli is a biyatch ne? Hahaz. Update soon. I wanna know what happens nxt? Lub ya Shar-Shar...
| Reviewed By: miaa_hiaa [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2005 14:06 CST
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omg i'm sorry i haven't been reviewing lately it's just that the docters think i may have mono so i'm pretty busy trying to sort out my appointments school and meadia miner! *huggles* love this chappie funny at the end *coughs* yeah you know monos also called the kissing desiese XD hahaha funny anyways this is the longest comment i've ever written! wowo it keeps going like the enigezer bunny, ok luv yah gotta go see the docter...again....even though it's monday...ok...bye now.....PEACHES!!
| Reviewed By: xchibi_ahouX On: December 19, 2005 00:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you are so rockin my sockets that is so cool that kikyo found out i was waiting for her to find out! CUZ I KNEW SHE WAS GONNA ACT LIKE A PCYKO but that whole flower thing confused me.. and I LOVE YOU SO VERY MUCH FOR PUTTING IN MY FAVORITE SONG!!!! DIRRTY LITTTLE SECRET!!! ah!*JUMPS AROUND LIKE CRAZY!* woOO!oOOO! I LOVE YOU AND THIS STORY! YOU ROCK! kagome so rocks my sockets too wow such compasion yet a big bitch too. wow and sango total rockin. i say rockin alot.. lol awesome job! I HOPE YOUR NOT FINISHED! @_@.. IF YOU ARE. YOU WOULDN'T LIKE ME WHEN IM ANGRY.*TURNS INTO HULK* AIUGUAGHAGHAKGAL;GALGJKLGJALK! YAH TAKE THAT! ^-^ HAHAHAHAHA GREAT JOB! UPDATE!
| Title: Happy Christmas!
Reviewed By: Pistachio [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2005 22:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hello and Happy Christmas! I am sorry I have not reviewed in a while. But I am really not supposed to be on the Internet, but I need my dose of "Heart Breakers League". Is Kagome going to be alright? She won't die? I hope not. I had a hunch you were going to use "Dirty Little Secret". Well anyway... I kind of put you on my Bio as well. Something I should have done a long time ago. Well, Happy Christmas! ^_^ Tohru Honda
| Reviewed By: TrinityK [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2005 21:42 CST
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That last chapter really was evil, j/j. I still love it. It's like suspense or something. And for a junior in hs--which I am to--, your writing really is good, not shitty, LoL. Yup I think you can definitely be classed with Inugrrl, she's a great writer too. I hope the next chapters to come don't take too long, but concentrate on school too, something we all have to do, for those of us in school anyway. I hope you get all your school X-mas projexts done. I have to write 3 essays by the end of the year, Jan 1, so I have to get it done during winter break too. I'm getting around to it, eventually. Next weekend, I promise I'll do it... Or not, LoL. Okay I'm done rambling, TERRIFIC story, and I can't wait for more!!! *love ya lots, hugs and kisses* -TrinityK (aka Krystal-my real name, or simply Trini, whatever floats your boat, LoL ;-)
| Reviewed By: TrinityK [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2005 21:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, I know you already got like 2 reviews from me just yesterday, but I'm reviewing as I read each chapter. I can see how Inugrrl's 'Suicide Rain' inspired your story. That was one of my top 3 favorites too. OMG, the music is just killer with the story, I don't know I love stories where someones performing or singing. It gets me all hyped up, especially with the music going on as I read it. Andthe funny thing is that I knew those songs. But now after reading your story, I love them all even more. And yes, I hate Kikyo too... She's just sooo evil, LoL. Anyways GREAT, STUPENDOUS job, and I can't wait for the next update. I LOVE your story. I'll probably review again for the next chapter after this, and again... But that's okay, when you go to check your reviews, it'll be overflowing, ans I've never met a writer who thought that was a bad thing, LoL. ;-) *two big thumbs up, oh and hugs and kisses of course* -TrinityK (aka Kreystal or simply put, Trini)
| Reviewed By: Akihana [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2005 14:37 CST
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Oh, now that is a low place to leave it. Shame on you for your evil cliffhanger. On the other hand, I enjoyed reading up to this point, and will be looking forward to what happens with Kikyo and a gun...
| Title: O.O
Reviewed By: Shadowgirl435294 On: December 17, 2005 07:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ack! Evil Kikyou!! I already hate her (no offense to Kikyou fans)!! Anyway, this story rocks!! You have to update! I need to know if Kagome lives or dies!! Please update!!!
| Reviewed By: TrinityK [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2005 21:12 CST
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Kagaga No Subaba, I LOVE your fic!!! A lot! LoL. I totally feel gor you on the whole MM thing and the plagerism thing. See, I've known you since you were InuU, which might I add, I LOVED YH. I can't wait for the revision. Your a really great writer, and I'll tell you what I told another friend of mine who had something sucky happen to them on MM, head out, chin out, and finger to MM, LoL. Jus joking, unless of course you want... LoL. ;-). Anyways, great great great story, a definite favorite, and I can't wait for more!!! I can't wait for YH either!!! *hugs and kisses* -TrinityK (aka Krystal) :-)
| Title: Hi!!!! ;-)
Reviewed By: TrinityK [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2005 18:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I LOVED this chapter. I especially loved Kag's last parting words "See you in Hell Bitch..." I swear I was cracking up. I don't know think I have a wierd sense of humor. And Inugrrl's one of my favorite authors too on MM. I'm not sure why, but all of my favorite authors or writers are all female, go figure. Well anyways, I loved this update, and chapter, and I can't wait till the next!!! *hugs and kisses* -TrinityK
| Title: CAN"T STOP!!
Reviewed By: LadyWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2005 17:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't stop reviewing! I have to makeup for the time I didn't and I have a chap dedicated to me!! *looks at rick* do u know what that means MWMWAAHHHHHHHHH! Don't u wish u had one too rickie!? LOL Anyway *BLOWS KISSES BACK TO YA* THANK YOU! lene lene the other me...I shall call u another ME! LW
| Title: Oh and...
Reviewed By: LadyWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2005 17:06 CST
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I don't know who keeps massin' wit my little sis on this fucking site but I will open a can of the whip-ass on ya! Just let her be got it! I don't take non to good to people massin wit my family! Cool! I lov ya little sis sis keep it up for me, Kiki, and Luc Luc
| Title: HAHAHAAAAAAA YEAH BABY!
Reviewed By: LadyWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2005 16:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH YEAH! It's the yumm yumm-ness mix wit the coolness topped wit the hottness BOOM BABY BOOM!!!!!!!!!! I lov ya and my lemon!*HUGGLES* Yasha-boy as new love for ya...Rick's in love wit ya...but is soooo mad at me cuz I got them there bragging rights YEAH!!!! Yasha says your so right got to stick together*runs but gets sat* Thats so true santa know where...*stoped looked around* WE LIVE! AHHHHHHHH! hahahaaaaa kukukuku! LadyWolf
| Reviewed By: Fuji Film On: December 16, 2005 16:02 CST
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*Groans* Sharly-shar!!! THAT MATH EXAM WAS A DOOZY!!! I THINK I FAILED!!!! WAAHHH!!! But who cares anymore! HAHA, these new chaps made my day! Does a flip... and then you ruined it!!! *Gasps* She pulled the trigger!? What the fuck!? She shot Kagome!? EVIL LITTLE CLIFFY!!!! Shar you big... meanie! WAAHHH!!!!
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