| "Secrets of the Uzamaki Clan" Reviews/Comments [ 110 ] |
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Reviewed By: sessy_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2006 11:08 CDT
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loved it!!! what more can be said but i cant wait for the sequal hope you dont go back on that for you will have a very sad little person here(cries to make point)
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Reviewed By: JasonC [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2006 20:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
The official reting I would give this story would be 7.25 but there are no .25's... anyway thought the story was godd it held the creativity. Especialy around the beginging with all of Naruto's Blood-Lines. Most stories dont even give him any blood-lines. Thought most chars were OOC(besides LEE.) Ended kina short althgough you said there will be a sequel I hope you dont go back on that I will be looking forward to it. You also seemed to start rusing a bit more through everything after the fiirst 20 or so chapters. You also seemed to have some trouble with spelling and gramar.
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Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2006 18:34 CDT
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that was AWESOME, I can't wait to see the sequel...LOL THANKS:D
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Title: 37
Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2006 02:41 CDT
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what happened to Naruto??? Oh man, that was GREAT, a demon MOLE??? alrighty then...LOL THANKS:D Great chapter...I LIKE the Naru/Hina Fluffy NEss:D
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Reviewed By: kitsuna [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2006 11:05 CDT
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YAY i broke 100 reviews!! Do I, like, get a prize? Your story is great and i love it, so keep up the good work !! Ja Ne
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Title: Yay
Reviewed By: Dustin Imthurn dog demon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2006 02:35 CDT
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I think I'm your 100th reviewer well good chapter you should put up this stort on fanfiction.net its much better tham mm.org trust me you'd get like 200 reviews easy
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Title: 36
Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2006 20:53 CDT
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SWEET!!! that was AWESOME, but kinda troubling if the leader is part demon...SCARY!!! Cant' wait:D THANKS:D
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Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: Hybrid_FireLightning Creature [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2006 19:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That's the best story i've read pls pls pls keep updating AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: please
Reviewed By: uzumaki urufu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2006 15:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please man you must dend me the rest of the chapters because on the thing it said there were 63 ch but i only read 36 so please send it to me thx if you do man your story was awsome!!!!!!
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Title: please
Reviewed By: uzumaki urufu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2006 15:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please man you must dend me the rest of the chapters because on the thing it said there were 63 ch but i only read 36 so please send it to me thx if you do man your story was awsome!!!!!!
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Title: Great
Reviewed By: taylorrahl99 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2006 21:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome story, keep it up!
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Title: This story
Reviewed By: taylorrahl99 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2006 21:21 CDT
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This story is really awesome, keep it up! good story line, my favorite pairing (naruhina) and a cool bloodline!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: uzumaki urufu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2006 20:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved that story so much and dude u r so awseome at making stories pls update asap by the way everyone who seees this please go read narutos mission
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Reviewed By: Arenja [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2006 17:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I take it you're very slow at updating. And the fic is nice and long so far! Anyways, update soon! I'm looking foreward to see what the favor is!
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Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2006 15:51 CDT
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oh come on, what does Naruto want??? is he going to tell HInata about what he found out??? Oh well that was GREAT!!! THANKS:D
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