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| "Once More, With Pirates" Reviews/Comments [ 42 ] | | Pages (3): [ 1 2 3 › » ] | Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2007 09:55 CST
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Hmmm, did this story ever get finished? It;s a fascinating one, one I love to read, but seems almost entirely incomplete. Oh well. Update soon, will ya? ja ne.
| Reviewed By: sherada [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2007 18:58 CST
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You've probably been asked this a million times already, but....do you plan on finishing? I really love this story, and I do hopw you update.
| Title: Hello? *echo*
Reviewed By: RadgarEleding [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2007 00:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ever plan on finishing this story? It's a wonderful sequel to the original. BUT I NEED CLOSURE. lol. Please finish it soon!
| Reviewed By: Ebn105 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2006 18:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is soooo amazing. I like it soo much! Even more than the 1st one, pleease update really soon. I see you haven't in forever, and it would really be a shame if u didn\'t finish it. Anyways, please keep going, i love this story.
| Reviewed By: Flame Phoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2006 22:35 CDT
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This story's amazing, and how much work you have put into it and into the prequel amaze me! Great job! This one was more than a little confusing to me at first, considering all the different timelines and the fact I know almost nothing about Star Trek, but after rereading both a couple of times and reading through several fansites, it makes a lot more sense. I noticed that you haven't updated in a while, and I hope that you haven't given up on this story! Update soon, with another chapter or at least a notice of what's happened! Luff!
| Reviewed By: Haywire_Hakaze [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2006 23:57 CDT
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Wow. Talk about a cruel way to end a chapter. Maybe that's why they're called cliff-hangers; you feel like you're at the edge of a cliff, hanging on the hope that an update will be swift. I surely hope so; I'm intrigued.
| Reviewed By: Haywire_Hakaze [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2006 14:03 CDT
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What is it with me and 'Sevens'? "Seven chapters to go!" and "I just read Seven chapters!" Heheh... Anyhow. I was a bit lost for a moment because I had no inkling what Picard and the others were from, so I had to Google them all. So you're a Trekkie? Interesting; obviously, I'm not. *embarrassed laugh* But I admit I like Worf so far. ^^
| Reviewed By: littleolmee [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2006 23:03 CST
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I went right out and looked hoping that you had started your squeal and I was happily surprised to find you had. OMG! I was so excited to see the addition of the trek! I can't wait to read more and see what you have in mind with this super crossover.
| Reviewed By: dragonnan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2006 16:01 CST
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This is good! You really made me think (and blush) when you made the comment about how feminine the Enterprize actually is from Havoc's point of view! I really am deeply curious now about the halo effect around Ed, it is a really odd phenomenom, and this latest side effect it had on him is deeply disturbing. This chapter raises many questions, and my curiousity, as I mentioned, is raised to new heights! I can't wait to see Ed's interpretation of the "bad touch", LOL!!!
| Reviewed By: Fullmetal_Alchemist [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2006 19:58 CST
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I absolutely love your work. i cant wait for the next chapter, its killing me! :D
| Reviewed By: dragonnan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2006 23:37 CST
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I'm sure I've mentioned this before, but what really draws me in with your stories is your ability to constantly supply new intrigues- both large and small. Like the halo around Ed in this chapter- we don't yet know what it means, but it has a significance, and it's fascinating in its mystery! And of course, the humor you write! I get laughing out loud at some of the interactions of the characters! Well, I really apologise, but I couldn't think of anything negative to comment on. I promise to do better with the next chapter!
| Reviewed By: dragonnan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2006 05:50 CST
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I really enjoy the parts where the FMA characters interact on a holodeck. You manage to show both the idea of them kinda getting used to the technology, as well as still being shocked by the potential of the technology. It was good that you wrote a bit more on the events on the planet as that will probably require resolution at some point. I'm dying to see the final move in the game the characters are all playing. About my only disappointment is the lack of McKenna and her viewpoint on everything. She is such a powerful character, I really want to know her feelings on all this. But, as I've said before, I trust your direction with this story, and I know you have a plan for where this will go. I'm just glad to be along for the ride!! LOL!
| Reviewed By: dragonnan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2006 05:25 CST
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You write those action sequences so incredibly well! It can be difficult to portray such a visual thing in written form, but you pull it off fabulously! I think, though, it's the small moments that really grab me- like Ed's thoughtful question at the end of the chapter. He thinks deeply, and it would be just like him to be affected by the 'deaths' of these non-beings. Is he thinking of his brother, or the homonculous? One ponders the direction of his thoughts, and it adds a richness and quality to the fic. This chapter was excellent, and I really, honestly, could find no fault with it!
| Title: You asked for it!
Reviewed By: dragonnan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2006 23:12 CST
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Alright you! I want to gush yet again, but I'm reining myself in because you so desperately requested hard critique (pun definately not intended!) So. The interaction between Worf, Riker, and the Elrics was, as always, very well written and controlled. You keep them true to their natures, and they just naturally interact so well! The promise of a Batleth (not even gona TRY to spell it right) battle is also very exciting! However, as much as I wanted to be delighted at the scene with Faye and Spike, it just felt too fast. Up till now, the mild teasing and arguments have felt right. We know how she feels about him, but Spike hasn't really crossed over into infatuation yet. He might be more inclined to get into a fight with her to supress his emotions than to jump her. And Faye was very bold to grab him that way (steamy, yes!). But I feel as though she's been trying to hide from showing him too much affection now that he's back. It's an odd twist actually- now that she CAN go after him, their history as friends, plus the ghost of his past, would make the beginnings of their relationship start off very shakily. I could see him pulling this if he were drunk, but I think Faye would deck him if he did. I really want them together, obviously, but not too fast- it spoils all the juicy angst that is such a delight to read, and that you are so awesomely skilled at writing. Anyhow, that was my main concern with this chapter- and you gotta know I hated writing it because I hate jumping to conclusions without reading how it turns out. Anyhow, as always, I can't wait to see the next part! Till then!
| Title: Sweetness returns!
Reviewed By: dragonnan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2006 04:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I adore the interaction between Ed and Al! (shrimp eating shrimp! ROFLAO!!!!!) And you are so brilliant! I've always wondered why Ed is so hungry all the time, and this explains it perfectly!!!! I wonder if that's a factor in his height? Though short, it was still a very wonderful chapter!!!
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