| "Shadows of the Past" Reviews/Comments [ 139 ] |
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Reviewed By: KC writer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2002 03:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please! don't let the next chapter take so long. I wanna read more! :) KC |
Reviewed By: ZsaiQais On: September 02, 2002 15:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I definitley liked you fanfic, but can you hurry up a bit? You haven't updated since may, and I want to see what happens! |
Reviewed By: teteiforever On: August 29, 2002 13:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fanfic is totally fantastic!! It´s my favorite on the www!!! You´ve written this story great and I can just hope that you´ll send the next chapter soon!! |
Reviewed By: Zorella [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2002 21:03 CDT
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come on Alithiel... Like you said you've only got 2 chapters to go, and the quicker you write them then the quicker we will all stop asking!!! Agh!!! |
Reviewed By: LinaMatrix [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2002 18:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the greatest fic ever written! I love it! I have read it so many times!
When are you going to update? Don't keep your fans waiting any longer, please!! ^_^ I've been waiting 4 months for chapter 16 to come! T_T
P.S. Check out my art and tell me what you think^_^ Thank you! |
Reviewed By: Renzuite On: August 21, 2002 16:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please Please Please update as soon as you can!! I love this fic!!!! |
Reviewed By: chatcat [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2002 09:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
WAAAAAAAA!!!!!! OH PLEASE YOU MUST FINISH THAT FRIGGEN STOTRY! I'M DYING!!! |
Reviewed By: Jesse Riddle of fanfiction.net On: July 26, 2002 01:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the entire story up to date! The end of 'learning' was so sad. Poor Veggie... I almost cried. That poor little teddy bear in the leather jacket. :,( |
Reviewed By: DBZ chick [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2002 23:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS STORY! It's so beautifully written! God, it makes me jealous sometimes! I hope you can find time to update soon! (Don't worry, I kind of know how you feel though!) I can't wait to find out what happens next! The suspense is killing me! |
Reviewed By: Princess Vegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2002 20:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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This is a very touching fic, so well written, I cannot wait until you post chapter 16.
Dark Pride |
Reviewed By: Spacefille [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2002 15:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
In regards to your note: As a writer myself I completely understand about not wanting to promise anything. *lol* Good luck to you-- in your future endevours in school and the like, and even if you never complete "Shadows" thank you so much for the wonderful gift you have given us with what you have already. :D It's been a real pleasure and privilege to have read your work. :) |
Reviewed By: Zorella [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2002 08:40 CDT
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thnkx Alithiel for telling us what's happening! There's nothing worse than being left in the dark @o@.....the blackness! noooo!!!!!
Also, I'm putting this up on my site www.geocities.com/darkstar276, ah, no buts now. 'tis a good story and I am only placing good stories. Ah, just read it for the third time and it still brings a tear to my eye..... |
Reviewed By: Alithiel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2002 17:15 CDT
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Well, 'tis me, Alithiel, obviously. I'm just writing to thank everyone for their enthusiasm and interest, and to let them know that no, that is NOT the end of the fic. I've just been busy with a bunch of graduations, including my own and my brother's. And my job, and college, and other things. I HAVE started the 16th chapter, but I don't want to make any promises on when I'll finish it. Hopefully soon, but I just don't want people accusing me of lying, LOL. After that, all that's left is chapter 17 and an epilogue. Thanks to everyone again!
Alithiel |
Reviewed By: Angel Wings [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2002 08:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What do you mean he's not needed!? Of course he's needed! He's one of the most important characters in the whole damn show next to Goku! I beg you, don't leave it hanging there please. |
Reviewed By: gundam200x [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2002 09:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*cries* This is the best fic I have ever read!!!! You convey emotions very well, Veijita's despair, and Goku's love and confusion. Its great!!
I can't wait to see what happens next! |
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