| "Blood & Tears" Reviews/Comments [ 184 ] |
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Reviewed By: faithful reader On: January 22, 2006 23:47 PST
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Just do ya know, competition to second the fic or second it in new categories was fierce. I would have seconded it...but I have some legal issues....sometimes it sucks to be young. I seriously think society thinks that all young people are naive wide eyed breakdowns waiting to happen. Seriously...anyways, its really nice at how fast and long and good the updates are. I'm now awaiting the birth of the pups.
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Reviewed By: bluezinthos On: January 22, 2006 18:53 PST
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you just had to end it there didn't you? i loved the image of shippou being buried under four overly excitable inu youkai pups. and the fire cats...i want one. great work and i can't wait for the pups!!
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Title: Konnichiwa
Reviewed By: Lady_Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2006 18:47 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Konnichiwa again gomen Hanyou Inu 4 ever is also me I wasnt loged in oops ^_^ Continue asap I must know what happens hope you got lost of namonations
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Title: Konnichiwa
Reviewed By: Hanyou Inu 4 ever On: January 22, 2006 18:45 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
...OH NO YOU DIDN'T DID YOU HAVE TO END IT THERE WAAAAAA, I NEED MORE INUYASHA GOODNESS CONTINUE ASAP!
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Title: Ohayou
Reviewed By: Lady_Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2006 04:25 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEAH WOOT AWSOME JOB I LOVED IT CONTINUE ON WITH THE NEXT CHAPTER ASAP I NEED MORE INUYASHA AND KAGOME GODNESS I Nomanated your story it was seconded by my cuz
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Title: dark hanyou
Reviewed By: dark hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2006 20:09 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
can u please write more chaps...... the story it really really good, when r the pups r being born????
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Reviewed By: inuHanyouLoVer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2006 15:53 PST
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OMG!!!! this is the best story i've read since like forever!!!!!!!!!! it really is awesome, i love it!!! =D -Ria-chan
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Reviewed By: bluezinthos On: January 18, 2006 18:25 PST
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ahh, the transition to the modern era. but will they ever go back and see sango and miroku? they do only have to travel through the well once a year for it to remain open to them. and surely they must have decendants running around inthe modern time as well. perhaps they would be closer human friends than kag's school friends (with the exception of Ayume) turned out to be. and speaking of Ayume, there's a wedding for her and Niro coming up isn't there? will Yash and Kags attend? someone had mentioned the idea of a foursome in one of the reviews. and while i admit, they all are very close to one another, i just can't see inuyasha going with kichou or her allowing sesshy to be with kagome in anyway other than to provide youki for the pups. i just get the impression the time for sharing is past for all of them and they are very possessive of their mates. They all may enjoy the kinkiness of all having sex in the same bed, but with their own partners. I think the marks provide enough stimulation. i like this maturing inuyasha. His growth is realistic, too. He just needed someone to believe in him and push him in the right direction. The potential was there all along. Another beautiful chapter. Your minion thanks you.
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Title: Cool
Reviewed By: Fawn of the Woods On: January 18, 2006 17:34 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
my name is my ID on Fanfiction.net i don't give 10 unless i'm astounded you can't astound someone in spelling and grammar i like the style love the story and enjoy it over and overi'm still deciding on wether to get an identity on this website i hope we meet Shippo and Rin soon in the future since they do get together i'd like to hear that tale ^_^ please keep writing Ja Ne
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Reviewed By: jc On: January 18, 2006 08:31 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Wow, I cant believe you updated so quickly :D Thank the gods for that :D I really enjoy your fiction, it's original and I love how you developed inuyasha's character and put in subtle clues to develop the plot. Perhaps you could add more interaction between inuyasha and kagome with the future public? It seems odd sometimes how they dont ever seem to talk with anyone else other than sesshoumaru, kichou and some close friends. Maybe have inuyasha and kagome on a vacation somewhere, it's up to you. Keep up the good work!
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Title: Story! ^_^
Reviewed By: Inumaru_Rapture :-P On: January 18, 2006 06:06 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really am very anxious to keep reading your story! It's so good! And you're still updating, which is even better!! lol. Some fan fictions i'm reading haven't been finished and are sitting in the same spot for months at a time...;.; and when they update it's only like...one chapter every 6 months. But you... You rock. ^_^ Keep up the excellent Quality of writing and don't stop!!! WOOT! Inumaru_Rapture
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Title: Ohayou
Reviewed By: Lady_Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2006 05:22 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah another awsome chapter woot Hey I wanna see Rin and Shippou when there all grown up in Kagomes time are you gonna make Kagome and Inuyahsa go see Shippou and Rin?
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Reviewed By: Dyquem2 On: January 16, 2006 20:58 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is the best one since "the lucky ones"; as soon as I can figure out how to burn a CD I plan to download it, and that is saying something for me. The characters are realistic (although it was tough thinking of Kouga as quite THAT nasty, but it made a workable plot device.) I particularly think you made the transition from Sesshoumaru & inuyasha's snipes and fights to true brothers believable. I think Kagome would have nothing in common with the three friends from high school and have often felt that. She has experienced the world from a different place, and there truly is no going back after that. I'm curious. You have been dancing around foursomes for half of the fanfic. Having sex in front of each other and the women holding each other to support the men is just this short of a group. Are kikou and Kagome ever going to exchange men??? I suspect sesshoumaru's youki would be very strong from the growing pups. I also have a theory. I think Hiro is a lost descendant of Shippou's. It isn't that strange to think that they could lose track of some descendants that married into the great human morass. When will Shippou & Rin show up. Isn't it time?? 8 I'm Dquem, but I guess I have to say Dquem2 because I'm not currently online. whatever.
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Title: Konnichiwa, ohayou, daga docharihe!
Reviewed By: INu Hanyous 4 ever On: January 16, 2006 11:16 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOOT WOOT AWSOME JOB MAN I LOVE THIS STORY, OOOO ERI DOES IT AGAIN GRRR THAT BITCH! LOL gomen nasi I get so attached to fanfiction I like ^_^
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Reviewed By: bluezinthos On: January 16, 2006 11:06 PST
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your minion has returned (or at the rate that i look forward to your updates, stalker may be more appropriate, but please i can't afford any more charges against me :)!) through all this i had no idea that sesshomaru didn't know when inu's human night was. going back i realized that they were never with each other at the time. and eri...grrr. you would think that she could just be happy for once. but she knows what happened to kagome. she wouldn't be cruel enough to say something about her rape would she? i look forward to the trip to the past. wonderful as always.
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