| "Blood & Tears" Reviews/Comments [ 184 ] |
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Reviewed By: Riku's gal On: February 01, 2006 13:38 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH MY GOD THIS IS SOOOOOO GOOD! KAGS AND INUS PUPS ARE SOOOOOO CUTE. AND I LOOOVE THE BUTTCHEEK THING.PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON. AND I CANT WAIT UNTIL SESSY AND KICHOUS PUPS ARE BORN ( im sorry if I didnt spell her name right ) AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!
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Title: LOVE IT
Reviewed By: Fan774 On: January 30, 2006 18:38 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love ya story so much 2 bad u didnt hav seshomaru bite miroku and sango so that theyd still be alive. you so need to ahve tehm meet flufys kids. and they so must go back and make a summer home in that futal erra and ahve inu yasha bild another house there jsut to be with his old friends. and u need to have mroe about inu yashas work and kags school. maby have to take onlie colage corses. and seriusly add some new food like have them eat sushy and stur fry. and they need to eat snacks. do they have computers? music? and coulnt they get a swing set for the kid for when there older and if ayumis kagomis friend why not have her over more and have them go out theycant live in a hotell 24/7 maby a vacation to the us? and maby they mite meet some new people in the storry. add some new stuff and you need to work on ya reactions. and if ya having people over have a conversaiton not juswt oo look KIDS bybye now.so love ay story keep it up and pz add some more caroctors detale and conversations. maby some more kids. and you need to add in a problem life and sweet andp happy 24/7. maby the paperazi is driving them crazy!
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Reviewed By: Cricket42 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2006 16:41 PST
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wow! this is a really good story thus far!!! i can't wait to read more!!! :D your really good what else have you written i would really like to read anything else you've written. :D ~Cricket42
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Reviewed By: coty On: January 29, 2006 13:14 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the best fanfiction i have ever read. I had some doubts at first about how time travel would affect the storyline and how Shippou could manage to have sex with Rin but you worked it beautifully. I hope you think of some more ideas to continue the story line because i dont think i could handle it coming to an end. If i can find out how i'll vote for you on the award since ive been a member for a couple weeks. Again god job and keep up the good work.
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Title: Konnichiwa
Reviewed By: Lady_Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2006 12:29 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah woot awsome job, finaly a litte fun, poor Inuaysha I feel so bad for him, it Sesshomarou was staring at my btt while I was srark naked, I would...*Shiver* creepy I'm not even gonna finish that thought ^_~ Awsome job loved it!
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Reviewed By: nightangel15 not logged in On: January 29, 2006 08:49 PST
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i like the names, and the foxfire part was really cute, and funny. i have no doubt that this story will make it through all of the categories it has been nominated for, because it can be seen that you have not only worked hard on this fic, but you have put a piece of yourself in the story. just keep writing, and i have no doubts you will be a winner with your story. after all, shes like the wind was a great story too. you have real talent; not everyone can make the characters as vivid as you can. congrads on getting to the 3rd round! -nightangel15
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Reviewed By: bluezinthos On: January 28, 2006 12:50 PST
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so it's a family trait to have the crest on the butt cheek. i guess that does say something about the personalities that they tend to display to the public. come to think of it, inu's and sessy's dad didn't have a mark on his forehead like sessy...could his crest also be...oh please tell me sessy looks it up in the family record books when he records inu and the twins marks. it would be too priceless. and what about miroku. man if they go to visit the past nad sango helps to change a diper, the teasing will never end. i'm glad to see that sango and miroku were able to come to the realization of how much inuyasha really cared for his "pack". he protected them with his life he just wasn't all that squishy and emotional about it. your story os about so many serious issues that could have broken any number of people and while the memories are still there you allow the love and most of all the laughter to heal them and help them to keep going. your faithful minion looks forward to your next installment.
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Title: Ohayou
Reviewed By: Lady_Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2006 04:35 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEAH WOOT WOOT! Awsome job, lol on his butt! Poor Inuyasha, looks like Sesshomarou is geting some well deserved payback! LOL CONTINUE ASAP!!!
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Reviewed By: nightangel15 not logged in On: January 27, 2006 21:40 PST
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wow...i have been keeping up with this story since you began it, and i put it on my favorite stories list a while ago. it just keeps getting better and better. i actually fell off my chair because of old fluffy laughing at both inuyasha and his son's markings. hey, what are the twins names going to be anyway? the son could have the ending 'maru' to his name to honor sesshy...such as ryomaru, etc. that would be neat, but it is your story, and it has been great so far, so keep doing whatever it is that you're doing, because whatever it actually is that you're doing, it makes your story so much better than any other stories i have read in a long time. next chappie sounds like it is gonna be a real doozy...is that when you are going to have sesshy record all the markings? i bet if shippo found out about the marks of inu and his son, he would have a field day. lol!!! well, i am tired, and it's 11:40 on my clock, so i am going to beg you to update soon, tell you how much i love your fic, and say goodnight.
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: Inuki-chan9 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2006 12:14 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All I can say is that this story is amazing, and I would put it in my top 5 list of best Inuyasha fanfictions. Right up there with Temple of the Dog by Urd-chan, The Broadway series by Delkaidin, and The Lucky Ones by Terri Botta. Congratulations on such a great story. You are an inspriation to us new timers! Update soon!
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Title: I love this!!!
Reviewed By: Sesshy81 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2006 08:24 PST
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Sesshomaru is going to laugh and laugh and laugh! I'm sure of it. Especially after all the remarks Inuyasha made about his little girl! Keep writing!
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Reviewed By: bk On: January 25, 2006 07:28 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just recently found your stoy. When I first read the summary I almost passed it up. I am so glad I went back because this story is absolutely awesome. This story is so well written that once I started reading it I couldn't stop until I got to the last chapter posted. Please continue writing. I will be watching for updates.
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Title: Ohayou
Reviewed By: Lady_Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2006 04:44 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL THE CREST WAS ON HIS BOTTOM LOL I LOVE THAT! Looks like Sesshomarou is gonna get some payback ^_^ Guess we know witch twin will be the most trouble Awsome job continue asap!!!
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Reviewed By: Inuyoukaimama (nsi) On: January 24, 2006 23:31 PST
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::roflmao:: Another butt cheek! LOL! That's to great! Another one sitting on the Lord Dogs House! That's rich! Another great chapter!
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Title: Awesome!
Reviewed By: akdreamer38 On: January 23, 2006 00:00 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't even begin to tell ya what an awesome story this has been. I look forward to your next chapter and also hope you do well in nominations.
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